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Phillip Thornblood
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-03-26 05:13 PM
Hey Anteaus. I know you are a gifted fellow. Don't be overly bothered by the criticism (other than that you take it to heart). It is correct, but such a character is something we have ALL made at one point in our GM careers. Try again.

Here's a tip for you, check out these characters:
A good one:

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Phillip Thornblood
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Anteaus's comment on 2005-03-26 01:33 PM
Thanks this is want I wanted, maybe I should have put it in the Flesh it Out thread, but some of the stuff I tried to post, didn't show, editing now... Go to Comment
Phillip Thornblood
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Anteaus's comment on 2005-03-26 09:30 PM
Thank you all for the encouragement and the very helpful criticism, I would love it if you could continue to help me with this one, so my others will be better, so please keep it coming. Thanks Go to Comment
Phillip Thornblood
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Anteaus's comment on 2005-03-27 03:23 PM
Added more, and changed some minor things, still working on it. Go to Comment
Phillip Thornblood
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valadaar's comment on 2015-06-22 02:52 PM
Interesting, though I am surprised that the uncle would have had the town destroyed without his true target being there. It seems like something that only makes sense to support the background, rather than something that makes sense.

Now, I have not seen the 'before' version and it is decent except for this one concern.

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White Raccoon Lodge

       By: Skull

In a new town for the first time, the White Raccoon Lodge looks like a comfortable place to spend the night. The owner, however, makes sure to explain to you that there is a curfew after sundown and the door will be locked... from the outside. "We don't want anyone being caught out on the streets after dark," he says.

Now that you think of it, all the doors in this small town did have a crossbar on the outside rather than the inside... You wonder what goes on at night...

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