I wanted more. I think the comments pointed out a few things that are needed to help propel it into the realm of usage. I was searching for purpose and a "why" to this religion. What does it offer that the old gods didn't? I do like the description and explanation on burial and ranks and such, but need some plot seeds or something to make me understand what and why for it. Like it and for what is there it is useable, would just love some more info as this could be a great submission!