Could we please have some more detail? Go to Comment

you people don't have imaginations? Go to Comment

Yes, we do. But look at it this way:
If you told a painter to paint you a dog, and said painter gave you a white canvas with a few black lines painted on it that vaguely resembled some kind of scene, and then said, "use your imagination", he wouldn't exactly be doing a very good job of painting you a picture, would he? Go to Comment

I'm sorry, no. I love Dadaism, but this is flat out a bad submission. Go to Comment

Can we get some examples on how he is going to do this? Just some bones to hang this plot on.

Also, I know the GM is responsible for getting a group together and motivated, but don't you have any real motivation advice beyond... you meet and your party is now require..... Go to Comment

It's not easy to articulate in a mere plot how exciting something was when you delivered it. Nonetheless as stands this is well below average. But the City itself did sound interesting - maybe you could expand on it in the Settings thread.

Remember not every plot has to be city/world shaking. When you can understand the drama of 'small' events you'll be better able to tackle larger themes. Go to Comment

protect the village from the greedy wizard... even Callista flockhart has more meat on her bones than this. Go to Comment

So - "Evil wizard plaguing peaceful city for nefarious ends"

Bit of a cliche but actually not a bad one - can become the basis of an interesting scenario, or even campaign arc, if handled properly

Unfortunately we don't have enough to even start here - this is more of a plot idea than a scenario

Needs a LOT more detail

I give it 2/5 because the idea has potential - it just hasn't been fulfilled here Go to Comment

Modern art and dadaism... Go to Comment