I like it! Like he said, basically average item with good presentation. I enjoyed how you connected with Sentinel's Doomsday Item (I assume that the sunken ship was supposed to be the same one from Doomsday Item).
You know what- good thinking.
I wouldnt call a Ring of Water Breathing power overwhelming, but the point remains valid that in the end, all of Dans wealth, and the power of his magic ring did not avail him when death came to his door. Go to Comment
I honestly think this makes a far better NPC than an item though this is a good flavor to add to a ring of water breathing. I also think it's funny that a mermaid gave someone a toe ring given that mermaids don't have toes. She is also very interesting to me as a character because she doesn't act out of altruism which makes her so much more believable. Go to Comment