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Princess Matriax's Defender
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GleepwurpTheEyebiter's comment on 2005-08-26 11:59 AM
How did this item come to be cursed? Why is the curse so powerful? Normally I'd just turn a blindeye to this, but since you include a backstory, it seems sort of odd that it omits this rather important detail.

I'm not a big fan of the "stuck in your hand curse" (as I've said in other posts) because I don't think they really encourage roleplaying very much. On the other hand, they are nasty, and encourage caution in the PC's which is usually a prelude to roleplaying. I like the bit about how it always come to hand, but I'd rather see that as something within the player (e.g. he's developed some strange compulsion that he gets to roleplay) rather than the item having the preternatural ability to entangle him.

I think that your item is quite original, but perhaps too much so. There seem to be acceptable guidelines for an adventuring world to maintain versimilatude, and it stretches that when we include items that tend to fall outside the traditional limit (such as pursues). What's to stop me from making a magical shoehorn that also doubles as a weapon, or makes you wear it in your shoes? These things are original, but original for a reason: They aren't very heroic or interesting, and thus are traditionally relegated to the category of comic relief or joke fiction.

i give it a two for now, and I'll up that if some of my objections are dealt with. I think it has potential. Go to Comment
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GleepwurpTheEyebiter's comment on 2005-08-26 01:26 PM
Had you read my post more carefully rather than assuming it was an attack on you, you would have noticed that I was asking as to the origins of this curse, noting that it seems like it must have magical origins given this is no mundane curse. I never claimed it was inordinately powerful.

Sorry I thought that it was too original. Fear my ethernet chord of strangulation, created by the evil wizard Fangbar for a mighty king, who it strangled. Somewhere along the line we need to ask ourselves, "Is this an item I would include in my campaign?" It seems like this item is comic relief. You said yourself it is almost comedic. I don't think that's the mark of a great item (it's a gimmick whose worth fades within an adventure or two, not an enduring presence that shapes a campaign). Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-06-08 09:20 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Man's Best Friend: Part Two
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-06-13 11:15 PM
Second plot I've read. Very evil. I'm glad you're using your skills for good. Go to Comment
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Agar's comment on 2005-05-15 12:35 PM
@ Moon, they're not always the bad guys. I think Dragonstorm, the collectible card roleplaying game, is still in print. ALL the good guys (except the orc) are shapeshifters. The bad guys are necromancers. And there's the werewolf game.

This plot is a hard one to "get right". It introduces the PC's to a concept that stands what they know on it's head: Sympathetic Lycanthropy. They have the best chance of figuring out the truth by talking to the castle workers and freinds of Rikka, as she became a werewolf with no wounds or even ever going on a hunt.

The queen doesn't HAVE to be doomed. You could say that the king is only contagious on or around the full moon. Volker got exposed redressing the wounds a last time, Jarvis sparred with him that afternoon, and Rikka ... inturrupted a moment. (I think there's a scene like that in one of the "American werewolf in ..." movies)

The king would just have to manage and limit his exposure to other people at certain times of the month then, and it would become a kingdoms dirty little secret. Now, wether or not this trait is dominate or even passable to his children ... well, it almost leads into another plot. Go to Comment
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Agar's comment on 2005-05-15 02:03 PM
Generally you're not.

For the timeline to be belivable, you'll basically have a different party returning to the same lands. Or a party of long lived humanoids.

This was never intended as a first part of an adventure, then the second, more like Episode one and Episode two kinda thing. More accuratly, Episode 3 and 4, but that's splitting hairs. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-15 09:40 AM
So why are lycanthropes almost always the bad guys? They are just so misunderstood. :) Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-15 01:28 PM
The only problem I have with this set of scenarios... the decade or two between the two scenarios. How much "play time" will occur between the two events? I mean, I believe in foreshadowing events and building upon the past to add versimilitude to the game, but how are we going to be in both scenarios? Go to Comment
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EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-15 04:43 AM
Now this is a great twist: while the PCs maysuspect the king is the werewolf, there is no proof as he simply does not transform... for a less unhappy ending, perhaps while the queen will become a shapeshifter, perhaps she can either learn to control the curse, or be locked away every full moon.

Howcan the PCs solve this mystery though? There is little in the way of hints and information - it may be possible that the PCs just run around a bit, learn nothing, and the full moon is upon them... Go to Comment
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-05-16 08:27 AM
Well Agar, I said I couldn't wait for Part 2 and you haven't disappointed me.

This is every bit is good as Part 1, if not better - pretty much same moral questions as the first instalment plus a complex mystery to be solved - definitely one for the role-players rather than the hack-n-slashers.

5/5

Suggestion for MoonHunter:
How about running this as a stand-along (or as Episode 1 if there is going to be more) with the events of the first module as part of the history the PCs must learn to solve the mystery? Go to Comment
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-05-13 06:59 PM
Who's the father. Go to Comment
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-06-13 11:03 PM
This is the first plot I've ever read as it's the first time I've visited this site. I'm very impressed. Go to Comment
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2006-02-06 10:14 PM
its cool love it Go to Comment
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Agar's comment on 2005-05-13 12:40 PM
Hmm, I need to edit in a detail Dragonlord has pointed out:

The boy is not a werewolf. He shows no signs of having contracted lycanthropy at all, even months after the event.

@ moon: don't worry. This is more of a prequel, to explain the even more twisted part 2 Go to Comment
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Agar's comment on 2005-05-13 07:25 PM
The prince that "played stud"

He's not really that important. If you read more carefully, you can see these things. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-05-13 09:20 AM
The story of my life.... waiting for sequels Go to Comment
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-05-13 08:23 AM
Hmmm...

So the heir to the throne is a werewolf - an interesting moral dilemma - do you kill the werewolf (and therefore royal heir) or protect the unborn prince (and therefore the werewolf)

And what about the political consequences - there's a whole campaign arc there

This gets the "wish I'd thought of that" award - 5/5

Can't wait for part 2 Go to Comment
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-05-16 08:13 AM
Actually Agar I was assuming the princess as the werewolf - I wasn't t all certain what effect this would have on her unborn child

But thanks for the clarification anyway Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-09-14 12:40 PM
I love the idea of a warlike princess cursed with lycanthopy. Inspired! I was working on an NPC that seems well suited for such a setting: I think that I'll dust him off and move him to Jaegerwold.

The writing does need a careful review and spellcheck as the spelling and grammatical errors are distracting. Go to Comment
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Agar's comment on 2005-05-05 07:57 AM
I have found some of the posts that I enjoyed making the best are from other peoples posts that pissed me off. My muse is angst, aparently.

As for personality: Watch Hitchhickers guide to the galaxy, then get 4 hours of sleep or drink 4 beers, which ever doesn't make you surly. That's him.

I personally get rather loopy when I get less sleep. As shown above. Go to Comment
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