I Like this idea! I do believe I could make use of it in a game! I do want to know what kind of amulet this is and a description of its powers! also I would like to see an more detailed account of the meeting of this guy I think it would be a great romantic story! Nice work! Go to Comment
I think it is an excellent idea the only problem I see is the amount of background information one would have to entail before any other characters could be introduced. Other than that I think it is great would make an excellent book. Go to Comment
The Anonymous was me! I don't get to post very offen cause I am so busy so when I do I rarely sign on cause I hate to be one of those people that get on only once or twice a month and even then can't stay long ! This plot caught my eye though I really like it! It intrigues my thought pattern and I like that it makes me think and that it turn gives me my own ideas! I would like to hear more about the amulet though ... Come on Adel!!! Add something else to plots or items something!
I randomly found this "Oldie" drifting around. The idea is good, but it needs to be executed better. How to use this story as a plot and so on. The grammer, etc etc needs fixing as well. Besides that, I must say that the "Old School" plots have their charm either way.
In the middle of the sky over the land of Dankij there is a door. The door is fixed in an upright position and appears to be fastened to the very sky itself. Worldwide rumors say it has been there since The Creation. What could be behind this door?
Ideas ( System ) | November 12, 2003 |