I Like this idea! I do believe I could make use of it in a game! I do want to know what kind of amulet this is and a description of its powers! also I would like to see an more detailed account of the meeting of this guy I think it would be a great romantic story! Nice work! Go to Comment
I think it is an excellent idea the only problem I see is the amount of background information one would have to entail before any other characters could be introduced. Other than that I think it is great would make an excellent book. Go to Comment
The Anonymous was me! I don't get to post very offen cause I am so busy so when I do I rarely sign on cause I hate to be one of those people that get on only once or twice a month and even then can't stay long ! This plot caught my eye though I really like it! It intrigues my thought pattern and I like that it makes me think and that it turn gives me my own ideas! I would like to hear more about the amulet though ... Come on Adel!!! Add something else to plots or items something!
I randomly found this "Oldie" drifting around. The idea is good, but it needs to be executed better. How to use this story as a plot and so on. The grammer, etc etc needs fixing as well. Besides that, I must say that the "Old School" plots have their charm either way.