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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2003-08-24 09:56 PM
I Like this idea! I do believe I could make use of it in a game! I do want to know what kind of amulet this is and a description of its powers! also I would like to see an more detailed account of the meeting of this guy I think it would be a great romantic story! Nice work! Go to Comment
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2003-09-05 04:23 PM
I think it is an excellent idea the only problem I see is the amount of background information one would have to entail before any other characters could be introduced. Other than that I think it is great would make an excellent book. Go to Comment
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-03-07 10:03 PM
The idea is very good. However it's not written terribly well. Lots of mistakes that prove distracting. Great idea though. Go to Comment
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2003-08-20 07:12 PM
Nifty. Maybe you could post her amulet as an item? I can also think of a couple other characters wo would fit well with her... I smile. Go to Comment
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Adel's comment on 2004-04-08 09:56 AM
I thank you all for your comments and I hope to write a few other plots. I will have to wait for the right weather though! Go to Comment
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Irina's comment on 2003-08-25 01:09 AM
The Anonymous was me! I don't get to post very offen cause I am so busy so when I do I rarely sign on cause I hate to be one of those people that get on only once or twice a month and even then can't stay long ! This plot caught my eye though I really like it! It intrigues my thought pattern and I like that it makes me think and that it turn gives me my own ideas! I would like to hear more about the amulet though ... Come on Adel!!! Add something else to plots or items something!

Irina Go to Comment
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Erebus's comment on 2003-12-03 01:25 PM
Wonderful. I'd probably handle it more darkly, but the core concept is great. Strong campaign opener - could be just what I'm looking for right now. Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2006-02-13 06:47 AM
I randomly found this "Oldie" drifting around. The idea is good, but it needs to be executed better. How to use this story as a plot and so on. The grammer, etc etc needs fixing as well. Besides that, I must say that the "Old School" plots have their charm either way.

Let's hope Adel will be back to stay one day. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2017-03-07 12:14 PM
This feels more like the premise of a novel or perhaps a video game. I think it would be an interesting one, especially with a variety of dreamscapes that all required attention.
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-10-22 03:28 AM
Random brought me here. Very nice idea. Some good stuff to work with here. Go to Comment
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       By: Pieh

In the middle of the sky over the land of Dankij there is a door. The door is fixed in an upright position and appears to be fastened to the very sky itself. Worldwide rumors say it has been there since The Creation. What could be behind this door?

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