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The Tower of Mok
Locations  (Fortification)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-23 12:08 PM
There are some really nifty bits to this - was sad to see it stop.

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Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
valadaar's comment on 2015-09-10 02:29 PM
An interesting genre. Attack on Titan could be considered a variation on this, with mostly much lower technology.

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30 Barbarians
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-17 12:13 PM
A quality 30 with lots of detail. Certainly some well used tropes here, but that works well in a 30. I like the inter-linkage between them that suggests the plots that could arise from using the lot of em.

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Huo Hsing
Locations  (World)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-17 12:47 PM
Good! I like seeing how your world is developing :)

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Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-15 08:11 PM
Almost spring. Time for spring cleaning. Out with ye!
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Locations  (Establishment)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-16 03:34 PM
This is cool! I really like the plot ideas - having the monastery there works well.

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Fractal Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Space)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-16 03:24 PM
Now this is a strange one :) Having a hard time putting my head around this one.

A consequence of Dimensional Gating - one could expect that terrestrial reactors and nuclear weapon detonations could spawn these on earth, correct? Go to Comment
Circlet of Cerberus
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-10 11:37 AM
As Muro says, a great link to Greek Myth. Good stuff here! Go to Comment
Perimeter Pod
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Perimeter Pod
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-18 03:54 PM
Agree with Ag, though there are dual AA/Anti- tank systems available. We (Canada) use them:

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Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 12:43 PM
This has a strong 1984 feel for me. Go to Comment
Daughters of Kalleum
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 12:26 PM
We're not gonna Take It!

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BND Movement and sub-culture
Society/ Organizations  (Artistic/Performance)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 12:19 PM
I think with a bit of work, it would fit in the 100 word submission.

It makes sense apart from I"m not sure what BND stands for. Go to Comment
Dwarfs of Damor
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 12:16 PM
No need to cloud fantasy with the practicalities of reproduction. There are many legends of creatures, gods, beings with clear genders being spawned from rocks, foreheads, and various other weird sources. Perhaps these dwarves did it the old fashioned way and got cursed/blessed into being tubers at a later point.

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Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 10:02 AM
A great start to a very interested planar location. I feel there should be some linkage of some sort to Corpsefall - my own dimensional hell.

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The Tale of Solomon Soulhammer Pt. III
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 12:12 PM
Ditto. This is excellent.
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Machinama, a cult in Refuge Beneath the Waves
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 12:07 PM
Amazing detail and depth on this one. Very good job! Go to Comment
Queen Llaewyn Reborn
Plots  (Event)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 11:55 AM
Love the style, but the end result is murky. A formally 'good' princess comes out as Maleficent?

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Motive Spirits
Items  (Transports)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 11:49 AM
I'm with Aramax. Yes, its ground that has been driven over before, but that can apply to 90% of everything.

Good ideas, neat stuff!
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Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 11:44 AM
Neat stuff here - excellent, creepy fiction! Go to Comment
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