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NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 07:53 PM
Okay Agony - there is some good advice here among the critique. Give it another shot if you would.

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Bones of Casting
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-29 11:57 AM
I really like this item. Personally, I think that magic items should sometimes arise outside of the efforts of high-level spellcasters. The whim of the gods, magical accidents, by the hands of skilled artisans or the workings of lower power spellcasters. Go to Comment
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-06 09:24 PM
Really neat - I need to read more of the shards now.

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The Bone Stitcher
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-05 11:46 AM
Now this is an awesome sub. I like the idea of these, and perhaps there are many in the Hells, though it really does not matter how many of them there are. They are the infernal medics.

And Wulf's comments on these along with curative spells provides an avenue for 'evil' clerics to have healing spells - instead of 'poof, you're healed' you summon one or more of these bad boys and they stitch up the damage. Since they are not enhancing, merely repairing, the impact may be reduced, but they would always scar badly when healed in this manner.

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NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-10 12:23 PM
Another great NPC with colour and usability, and with plenty of room for additions.

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Demonic Flesh Graft
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-18 11:47 AM
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Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 09:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tolk the Potion Master
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-08 03:03 PM
It's a good start - feels a little incomplete. The core idea is interesting, though the motivation of the mages in incorporate the little fellow seems a little weak. Go to Comment
Lucint's Blood Amulet
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 10:50 AM
A nice, simple item which can be tossed in pretty much anywhere. Go to Comment
Philosopher's Mercury
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-06 08:44 AM
I really like this idea!

Regarding power levels, I would assume that the greater the sound, the greater the power, but I would also consider that the vessel containing the substance would be under stress. Perhaps not of equal intensity, but still increasing with the power level. As a result, truly loud sounds would potentially destroy the vessel, removing the 'filter' effect.
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Chainmail of Forgetfulness
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-29 12:10 PM
How would it be entertaining except by happen-stance? Did the mages also add a scrying enchantment so they could watch the antics of their victims?

I could see this being somewhat useful, but does not seem to be a terribly efficient means to defeat a mass of enemies. Mess up an individual badly without killing him, sure.

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Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-05 04:01 PM
A role-model for pathetic underlings everywhere!

Reminds me of the house-elf in Harry Potter though. Go to Comment
Jorran Aklia
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-06 06:12 AM
Cold and serious. Well done. Go to Comment
A Wizard's Secret
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-03 10:53 AM
This is a good, simple straightforward item one could use to add spice to a wizard. I would have the 'destruction' or other baleful effect kick in only after a determined effort to open the book in spite of strong resistance.

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NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-14 01:46 PM
I can forgive cliche - I tend in that direction from time to time, but the lack of attention paid to spelling and grammar (Again, I am no saint on that front) is somewhat less forgivable. Go to Comment
Cloak of Falling
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-16 10:28 PM
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Blinkly's Rocket Arrow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2015-11-10 12:53 PM
Silly, and my head can't perfectly visualize this - does the bow get the rocket away from the user before the engine ignites? Is it just a cylindrical explosive thrown by the bow - in which case its really a grenade rather than a rocket. Or is it a rocket-assisted explosive arrow?

Anyway, it chars it user and blows up its target. That at least is an amusing image :)
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Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 01:08 PM
This one is very good - an excellent little secret and treasure.
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Selyn DeJaod
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-05 11:51 AM
Existing comments cover what I would say, apart from _guessing_ a springbolt is a gun.
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Jardan , the Oak Sage
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-12 07:01 PM

Wow, unvoted is bringing up gems.  I love this one! Top marks!



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