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Shield of Blinding Light
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2010-02-15 11:19 AM
An okay item, but the submission should have focused more in the item itself and less on it's background.

Being picky, the Greeks did not use shields of the 'Tower Shield' style. I'm not sure if even the Roman shield would qualify as a tower shield.

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Mialee the Beautiful
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 01:16 PM
An interesting take on this character. Go to Comment
Vandersil, the City of Bronze
Locations  (Other)   (City)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-05 09:29 PM
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The Omen of Fire
Plots  (Discovery)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-14 01:18 PM
Apparently, this just happened to the site :)
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The Charter
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-04 01:05 PM
This has echos of The Pillars of the Earth, a great TV show (haven't read the book.)

As the others have stated, this is a nice realistic plot with potential to become something much bigger.

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Lenses of Llorn
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-25 11:53 AM
Well, this is quite neat. The fairy tail entrance is confusing to me - not sure if it was grandma or riding hood that got axed. I like the wizard's story best anyway. Maybe because I am old and sentimental :)

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Azriel Marquis
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-16 12:02 PM
Sigh. I'd consider this post lacking even if it were a scroll entry ON Drow Assassins... Go to Comment
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-19 10:10 AM
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Leger de Main-Gauche
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-01 03:28 PM

And with my current infatuation with Chivalry - Medieval Warfare, where timing is critical, this blade would be absolutely lethal. Even the slightest advantage in timing is devastating.

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Snads of Time
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-13 09:45 PM
Arisen from a typo, but a cool thing noless.

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NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-04-23 03:26 PM
Such a long time ago. Lots of details and neat bits. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-09 08:02 PM
Update: Needs a great deal of work to make it useful. There is a seed of coolness here - Piranha men sounds cool. Go to Comment
Azriel Azur
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 08:53 AM
Wulfs comments mirror mine precisely.
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The Braclet of Salinin
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 08:25 PM
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Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-18 11:33 AM
Very much a mystical sword of mythic power :)

Puts me in mind of the One Ring. Go to Comment
The Seeing Stones of Asthmir
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-24 01:54 PM
I think the idea is really cool, but the execution is disappointing insufficent. Go to Comment
Xavier Kinslayer
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-09 08:03 PM
Needs a lot of work to be good. Go to Comment
Jahenel Mordred
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-09 07:42 PM
Its a start, but needs a lot of work. Take a look at other subs to get the idea.

Spellcheck, proofread, finish your sentences and try to avoid all the cliches. Go to Comment
Bromine Lake
Locations  (Regional)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-29 11:16 AM
I like this idea - it echos the cooling tank for nuclear fuel/waste.

Now, since hot water rises, and there is a constant inflow of cold water, this lake is going to have strong active currents, and will eventually become very, very salty.

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Kite Shield of Caladin
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-24 02:35 PM
Needs work. Go to Comment
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