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Coat of Teeth
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-24 11:38 AM
Cool item! Druidic types do need more interesting items. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-08 03:04 PM
Good solid NPC and interesting. Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 11:27 AM
The chalk outline view is interesting, but does not seem to mesh with the idea that the torch is putting off black light that only the bearer can see.

A bit confusing, but the idea of a bearer only torch is good.
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When the moon fell...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-26 03:05 PM
This could easily be the start to a great campaign. Hints at an greater story than has been revealed thus far, and the genesis of any number of powerful villains who quickly spread out from the scene of the impact to pursue their own plans of conquest or vengeance.

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The Ruins of Aliet Manor
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-10 11:58 AM
Removed Challenge. Go to Comment
Minon's Spear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-05 09:06 AM
An excellent magic item with wonderful origin. Great stuff! Go to Comment
Sword of The Righteous
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-15 03:04 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-10 11:59 AM
Update: Needs a lot of work. Go to Comment
The Assassin's Scroll
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-02 09:02 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Boots of The Fowl
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-21 08:04 AM
Truely a classic. Voting high as a result. Go to Comment
Guise of the Dead
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-08 08:23 PM
I think this an excellent item myself.

I would definately add additional drawbacks, such as the wearer has the viewpoint of undead, so life is both visible, hunger-inducing, and induces hatred. The wearer would need to have strong willpower to avoid falling into the mind-set of undead. Go to Comment
The Land That Forgets
Locations  (Other)   (Establishment)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-02 02:13 PM
I like the sparseness of this. Interesting visual.
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Lord Ziranith
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-19 03:50 PM
Needs some more polish I think. There are punctuation and spelling errors that need cleaned up. Go to Comment
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 08:33 AM
A good sword as user-bonded swords go. I like that it customized itself to suite the wielder.
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Sadist Dagger
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-27 02:01 PM
Friday the 13th horror, and almost a Garage Sale From Hell item, apart from its obvious utility as a weapon. In any case, it could be the start to a murder mystery, though I expect it would be a fairly short one due to its effects.

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The gems of Madvar
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-08 03:36 PM
A bit blunt, but a decent adventure idea.
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Dungeon knife
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-22 08:12 PM
I had a hollow-bladed 'rambo knife' when I was a kid. It sucked - the hollow made the handle weak and easily broken.

The idea of a knife of storing is not a bad idea, but as moon has said, the presentation needs work.

Spellcheck is needed on this, see "To retrieve soemthing from the space, the user reaches into the space just like a bag of holding, but thier arm is shrunk to fit inside the handle." for two typos in one sentance, not to mention the typo in the summary text.

This could be good, but needs work. Go to Comment
The Arch-Angel Zeviah
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-06 08:36 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Angel's Seal
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-07 12:48 PM
Well, even Thieve's World (whose religious system was most definitely _not_ Judeo-Christian, God of Rape being a State religion!) has Demons (Snapper Jo, for example).

And personally, I think pseudo Judeo-Christian campaigns (Arthurian for example) done properly can be pretty cool.

As for this item, it does appear rather strongly tied to D20/D&D - but the sprout wings and Rune-marking are interesting. Go to Comment
The Circle of Hell
Plots  (Crisis)   (Mini-Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-18 10:13 AM
A lot of unanswered 'whys' and coincidences here, along with a massive escalation from investigating a mystery to a campaign-shaping event. There are neat details and it would a great base to work from.

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