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The Shark King's Bones
Locations  (Water)   (Ruins)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-22 03:33 PM
Agree with Muro on this one. Conjures up a very effective image. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2009-08-09 07:56 PM
I do like this - an excellent addition to any institution where high magic exists! Go to Comment
Collar of Time-Shifting
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-06 01:59 PM
What an odd little item. It takes a bit to get my head around it, especially about the emotional vs actual need.

I would consider a time when the wearer could have their head lopped off as a critical one.

There are bits of promise to this one, I like the idea that to see into the future comes at the cost of seeing things now.
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The Everlasting Cantine
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-09 01:20 PM
A minecraft bucket before minecraft :)
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Fools Dagger of Invisibility
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-18 10:11 PM
An amusing gotcha item. Maybe it works normally for a minute or so, so when 'tested' it seems to work. Until it is used in ernest. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-13 10:19 AM
I like this one - kind of "the Blob" from Monsters vs Aliens + Jabba the hut.

I would like to know how in heck the daughter managed to fall in love with an ooze though. That seemed to me a bigger stretch than the existence of the blob itself.

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The Isle of the Dead
Locations  (Area)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-27 09:44 AM
Not a bad post at all. An interesting locale.

Note- I was going to edit it to bold the headers, but your summary is too larger for updates to be accepted.
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Arron and Cinthra
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 02:44 PM
A great sub Echo. Love the legendary atmosphere.

Please let me know if you still want the Barbarian Horde comments excised.
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Big Red
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-10 08:04 AM
A good sub - quite original. There are still a few typos and oddities that could be fixed improve it. Go to Comment
Withholding Cup
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-12 10:52 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-29 11:27 AM
Another submission that is better as fiction or background myths. Moonhunter and Shadoweagle have covered off all of the important points. Go to Comment
Coalescelation Staff
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-19 01:27 PM
This is pretty cool, and could be a lot better with work! Go to Comment
Sitri Andromalion
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-03 11:59 AM
This is really an archtype - I kind of agree with Zylithan in that it feels a little generic, and more like a role as opposed to person. I don't' need to know his favourite animal, but I would like a little more.

As such, the plot ideas that build off this are the best part. Go to Comment
Phillip Thornblood
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-22 02:52 PM
Interesting, though I am surprised that the uncle would have had the town destroyed without his true target being there. It seems like something that only makes sense to support the background, rather than something that makes sense.

Now, I have not seen the 'before' version and it is decent except for this one concern.

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The Pillars of the Alchemist
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-18 10:45 PM
A great item, though the origin could be better.
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Malhonne Tranchan
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-29 12:42 PM
Here is a good one. Great character and great discussion. Go to Comment
The Hell of Dry Bones
Locations  (Desert)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-02 11:54 AM
Well, isn't this a buried gem! I love it! Go to Comment
The Hell of Dry Bones
Locations  (Desert)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-11 03:28 PM
BH! Go for it! We won't bite.... Much. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-16 10:41 AM
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The Ruin
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-30 12:17 PM
Well written, and has a Harry-Potterish feel to it. The lack of very sharp edges - the Gargoyles are basically grumpy but no psychotic, and the demon being a 'soft' power type contribute to that.

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