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NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-14 10:54 AM
Not the greatest for sure, but there is the germ of something here. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-16 03:46 PM
Not a bad tale but need more about the captain himself. We know a little about his past, one occurence in his life, but apart from being smart and prepared, I know little about him. Go to Comment
Fiery-Feathered Phembu's Better Feathers
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 10:50 PM
I love the legend on this one, and the headdress is quite good too. You have such a way with names. Go to Comment
Skyswimmer cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-22 11:48 AM
Tying flight time to endurance is great. As Cheka said, its a great, 'natural' limitation which makes it more interesting then the typical ring/cloak of flight.

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Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 08:58 PM
A good item with a nice dwarven feel, though I think dwarves should not make a hammer that could'nt mash orc heads. Go to Comment
Elixir of Courage
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-25 09:33 PM
Great potion!

I can't imagine anyone surviving this for long without protective friends.

Adding to my Flawed Potions codex! Go to Comment
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-06 01:08 PM
Excellent! Love simple items... Go to Comment
Potion of Mis Understanding Languages
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-01 08:16 PM
You know, I've looked at this one before, but did not vote. Not sure why, cause this is simply brilliant!

5/5 Go to Comment
A Fungus Among Us
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-08 03:11 PM
Good plot, not too partial to the name though.

Good Job! Go to Comment
Eye of the Typhoon
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-07-22 11:57 AM
A great item and a nice contrast to the weather controlling items that are typical for the shards of the storm.
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NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-17 09:31 PM
Some interesting bits, though offing the parents cuts out soo much storytelling.

Let your GM off them!
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NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-10 12:05 PM
This almost feels like some sort of art piece. He could become something, but right now I get a very vague idea of him. Though I know more about his shaving practices then most NPCs I know of.

And I'm very ambivalent on the whole Bad Example freetext. It feels like the equivalent to a dunce-cap to me.

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Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-27 11:56 AM
You could make a pretty good portable stove with just two pieces, each having about 18 square inches of Helspar - just place the pot on the plate and you have smokeless,flameless cookery...

:) Go to Comment
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-01 07:57 PM
Does this material create the heat it emits or just stores it? If it stores it, will it run out? Go to Comment
Hippomenes the Fearful
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-02 11:19 AM
And this is an excellent villain, easily adjusted to fit your needed role. Go to Comment
Dragon's Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-20 02:16 PM
I like how it is made from some magic elemental stone, but as mentioned, some real details on how it benefits the wielder would be go. It has great presentation value, but what justifies the effort in creating it? Perhaps it works exceptionally well against earth-aspected opponents? As a focus for earth magic used by the wielder?

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NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-14 08:47 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-07 09:36 PM
A nice item, if a little too good at solving problems for the thief. Hardly sporting to carry an invisible hiding spot with one.

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Forgotton Summer
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-14 06:03 AM
I don't think there is anything missing here at all. This is an admirable one-time tool to do what he suggested. As for who would have such power, a god is an easy answer for that.

As for the secret, well, that would be telling, no? :)
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Imuricum Weapons (aka Scorpion's Tail)
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-17 09:58 AM
I would simply echo Pieh's comments here. Has some interesting qualities. Go to Comment
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