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Dungeon knife
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-22 08:12 PM
I had a hollow-bladed 'rambo knife' when I was a kid. It sucked - the hollow made the handle weak and easily broken.

The idea of a knife of storing is not a bad idea, but as moon has said, the presentation needs work.

Spellcheck is needed on this, see "To retrieve soemthing from the space, the user reaches into the space just like a bag of holding, but thier arm is shrunk to fit inside the handle." for two typos in one sentance, not to mention the typo in the summary text.

This could be good, but needs work. Go to Comment
The Arch-Angel Zeviah
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-06 08:36 PM
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The Angel's Seal
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-07 12:48 PM
Well, even Thieve's World (whose religious system was most definitely _not_ Judeo-Christian, God of Rape being a State religion!) has Demons (Snapper Jo, for example).

And personally, I think pseudo Judeo-Christian campaigns (Arthurian for example) done properly can be pretty cool.

As for this item, it does appear rather strongly tied to D20/D&D - but the sprout wings and Rune-marking are interesting. Go to Comment
The Circle of Hell
Plots  (Crisis)   (Mini-Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-18 10:13 AM
A lot of unanswered 'whys' and coincidences here, along with a massive escalation from investigating a mystery to a campaign-shaping event. There are neat details and it would a great base to work from.

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The Living Undead
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-24 12:17 PM
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The Devil's footsteps
Items  (Other)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-31 12:36 AM
Another dark item that deserves a boost this All Hallow's Eve! Go to Comment
Gnomeish Multifunction Bow
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-09 02:00 PM
A neat item - I like magic items where controlling them does not require command words or the like.
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Flask of Wiblië
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 09:32 PM
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Chome's Necklace
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-03 11:05 AM
This is a nifty, simple item. It does tend to solve the problem a little _too_ neatly. I suppose that the spell could have limited duration, or be somewhat fragile against magical damage.

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Shori (The Land of the Stepped Lakes)
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-28 01:01 PM
This sounds like the Land of Falling Lakes in Croatia. Was that the inspiration? Go to Comment
Flask of Many Liquids
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-22 08:56 AM
I like this item - and an item that delivers small volumes of magic liquid effectively twice a week is not that overpowered, unless there are some extraordinary liquids available in your universe. If it said 'potion' instead of 'liquid' then this puts an implicit limitation on its power. A powerful item, yes, but not overwhelming.

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Dungeoneer's flashlight
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-02 01:22 PM
Don't forget to add the ruby filter so you can preserve your nightsight :) Go to Comment
The Mystery of Far Tragin
Plots  (Hired)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-02 01:18 PM
This is an excellent post that needs to see the light of day again! Go to Comment
Far Tragin
Locations  (Tundra/ Arctic)   (City)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-04 12:44 PM
A nice location - I like northerly places like this.

Easily a backdrop for adventure - good stuff!
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Golem Grip Stone Gloves
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-07-07 07:43 PM
Cool item. If I may comment on the Rolemaster question on slam.

Just treat them allowing a Huge Bash attack with an OB set to your desire. Given the downsides on the item, a +30 OB may be fine.
The weight penalty would be like carrying 40 lbs of weight (20 lbs per glove).
As this is inorganic matter, this will cause problems for some casters :)

The crumble attack could be a medium bash using thrown spear range. Go to Comment
Golem Grip Stone Gloves
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-28 07:52 AM
I like this item!

It was this item in google that led me to this site! Go to Comment
New Herbia
Locations  (City)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-23 12:02 PM
I knew a campaign like this one... :)

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Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 11:21 AM
Wow, this shield has a rather dramatic side effect.
I'd suggest the following:

When the shield catches arrows in this manner, it stores the damage and slows dissipates it while the shield is held. If taken off before the energies have dissipated, then the bearer takes the damage. Rate of dissipation of course is left to the GM, say 1 hour per arrow.

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The Wild Men of Bisk Bay
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-23 07:49 PM
A good plot, but I am curious if it would be rated as highly with the current standards?

I find the individual paragraphs are a little overlarge for me. (Perhaps I have a short attention span). Go to Comment
Stink Stick
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-08 08:38 PM
Hmmm. Would undead suffer the side effects of this?
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