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Castle Seamus
Locations  (Fortification)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-28 03:56 PM
Agree with Wulf. Basic concept of a merman-castle is interesting. Why it got sunk in detail would be good. Why did they anger the gods? Are the inhabitants the cursed decendants of the original human inhabitants, not given 'proper' tailed forms like normal mermen (and as such, they would be shunned by the 'real' merman, who do not need artifical tails.) Go to Comment
Astria Rayne
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 10:02 AM
This could have benefited from a short summary sub to describe the character, and then a linked piece of fiction to go into detail.

There is a very strong Anime feel to this one, both good and bad.

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Astria Rayne
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 10:02 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Astria Rayne
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 10:04 AM
I see Skylark was back almost a year ago. I hope you kept writing - there is potential in yours! Go to Comment
Charles Champagne
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 03:26 PM
Perhaps by drinking a particular vintage he frees the spirit to move on, though a bit weaker.

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The Artist
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2013-01-21 09:29 PM
This is good - very good. I love the possibilities here.

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Wand of Bast
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-06 03:12 PM
This is a neat, specialized item, almost a class of item really, as you could have many different themes beyond feline.

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Trivulo's Compendium
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-19 07:48 PM
Nicely done! Go to Comment
Librarian's Cravat
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-04 01:23 PM
A simple commodity item for a world likely rife with magic. Go to Comment
Ring of Nobody
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-09 11:25 AM
Much better, though quite powerful! Go to Comment
Glil Battery
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-12 01:54 PM
So if one poked a hole in the flesh with a rock (non-conductive) and then threw it in water, would it blow up? :) Go to Comment
The Tower of Thunder and Gold
Locations  (Any)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-13 07:07 AM
This definately could be the start of many things in a campaign. Good one! Go to Comment
Ginford Lena
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 11:38 AM
A good filler character, and the positive outlook despite his loss is interesting. Go to Comment
The Meerschaum Smoking Man
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2007-09-02 09:00 PM

Now THAT was a series ripe for mining ideas.... Go to Comment
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 03:00 PM
It's been a few days! :) Go to Comment
The Ice Lands
Locations  (Tundra/ Arctic)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-30 09:56 AM
Lady Nadia
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-25 09:38 AM
Agree with the comments on this sub. A start. Go to Comment
Reingold 's Cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2015-05-07 03:12 PM
There is a great idea here, somewhat reduced by the execution as AG mentioned.

It also suffers from requiring the targets be oblivious and for a number of coincidences to occur to work - he has to be injured while closest to the generals, not his servants, queen, cooks or others. Seems like quite the stretch.

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Gold in them thar hills
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-10 10:40 AM
A nice fundamental plot that can be pulled out time and again.
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Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-24 10:41 AM
This is neat - wonderfully built atop other content. Good stuff! Go to Comment
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