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NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 08:55 PM
Writing is good, spelling good. Idea...

I think I've seen this fellow before. Everyone seems to need to write up their own Jason Bourne.

A sentient sword named .. sentient?

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The Witness
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-05 11:55 AM
A neat idea!

This one has been around a while :)
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Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-02 08:47 AM
PoisonAlchemists comment is on the mark. Sure we have a walking disaster (Real world has Tornadoes, which can be just as destructive or more) - what _was_ it built to fight?

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Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-18 08:10 AM
"Man they grew 'em big in the old days.."

Very cool - I especially like the legendary powered nature of the weapon. Go to Comment
The See-through Assassin
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-12 12:39 PM
Not too shabby, though echo Echo's comments on the weight of glass. Go to Comment
The Mirrored Plains
Locations  (Any)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-30 08:21 PM
Thumbs up! Go to Comment
The Window of the Mind
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-19 03:22 PM
Great post - thought it would be easier to ensnare if you looked a little longer in the future.
But that point has been done to death. Go to Comment
Kerchief Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-17 10:13 AM
This is an excellent variant of the bag of holding and oh so stylish. Great stuff! Go to Comment
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-10 12:55 PM
Pretty cool. The Elf to Tree transformation is unique :)
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The Art of Healing
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-20 09:57 PM
A fine healing item, wonderfully rendered and perfect for use. One could make the inks require special ingredients for their manufacture, and so employment and riches could be obained in their aquisition.
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The Art of Healing
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-20 09:57 PM
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Graf Malin
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-20 08:37 PM
Stepping into the story halfway through. Interesting with many unanswered questions. Go to Comment
The Uneasy Sleep
Plots  (Nature)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-02 08:08 PM
Wow, this is well written, if a bit specialized. I really like the idea and it would be not that hard to adapt for other purposes. Not sure I'd sleep in in more than once though.

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Boots Too Fine for the Earth
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-01 11:49 AM
Great history and a simple, yet useful power (something I have a great affinity for...)

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Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-24 08:14 AM
How would the universe happen to contain more than one of these?

Its an amazing item, with the singularly most powerful effect of any item I have seen - the ability to birth a universe is pretty top-tier. Not sure what you would do for an encore, apart from some machine that could rapidly initiate the Big Crunch :) Go to Comment
Land of the Yale Riders
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-11 08:53 AM
Excellent! Gnomish peaceful Huns!

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Longbow of Light
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 10:52 AM
What happens if one truely blind were to fire it? :) Could they then see what was illuminated by the arrows? They would truly appreciate it then :) Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-23 09:03 PM
Agreed - this one has excellent storytelling! Go to Comment
Winter's Bounty
Items  (Transports)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-14 08:13 PM
This is great! I love the image it paints. Go to Comment
One-Thousand Groans for A Laugh
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-07 09:03 PM

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