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Order of the Oak
Society/ Organizations  (Natural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2016-02-25 03:24 PM
I guess the question is Why? Why would anyone sign up, and why would the kingdom's intentionally create such a barrier between their kingdoms? A self-administered peacekeeping force?

Without bringing into effect modern ethics 'Save the Trees' why would the kingdoms spend resources providing recruits - who could be useful soldiers, armies, etc? Why would they want an uncontrolled military force on their borders?
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The White Knights
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2017-03-06 03:05 PM

Personally, I think some of the members would indeed smoke and drink. If they are hypocrites about violence, substance abuse would be as well.

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Fungus Gardeners
Society/ Organizations  (Agricultural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 10:50 PM
I really like this one. Human fungi gardens :) Go to Comment
The Bowmen of Love
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:40 PM
Interesting idea - I can see them more as adherants to a love god/godess cult.

And in some ways, it is more moral then arranged marriages :) Go to Comment
The Eyes of Yocasta
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:31 PM
So here we have Medieval Secret Service :) Go to Comment
The Tower of Troubles
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-27 02:45 PM
It builds to something that it does not really deliver. First couple paragraphs were good and then it left the rails.

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Order of Serpenthia
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-26 07:35 AM
An awsome idea, aaand, Muro appears to have been drunk. Go to Comment
The Pillar of Zech
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2017-04-11 11:36 AM
Indeed it does. I like this secret society, though not sure what resorting to Rokosz means, it sounds bad.

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King's Hands
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:29 PM
A good idea!

Could easily lead to other submissions as well. Go to Comment
Guild of Messengers aka Red Caps
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:15 PM
Interesting - I would still see that this would be a hazardous job. Sure it is death to kill/interfere with them, but espeically if they were carrying money, many would take the risk.

Which opens up jobs/new guild for escorts. Go to Comment
Order of the Southern Temple
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-09 11:05 PM
Though it illustrates the point, I think this suffers from a lack of subtlety.
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The Brotherhood of Larfu
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:10 PM
A good background piece - can be used to flesh out and add intrigue to an otherwise generic Tribal society with minor adjustments to the dieties.

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Curalon Hestaris
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-01 12:39 PM
Agreed - really good! Go to Comment
The Dolman Copy- a copy of the Malachrite Falcon
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-09 02:59 PM
I suppose this could accidentally turn up at the Garage Sale from Hell..

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Society of Blood
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 02:41 PM
A neat little organization, if a little too squeaky clean for my tastes.

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The Blades of the Golden Sun
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-16 10:44 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Malachrite Falcon
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-30 03:31 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Silver Phyrus
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:07 PM
"..Galaxy Defenders...."

Can't help thinking these folks are medival Men in Black, though that is not necessarily a bad thing. Hmm... Go to Comment
The Rosicrucian Order, AMORC
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-09 11:09 AM
A lightning rod of odd barbarians. :)
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Order of Priori Historicus
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-31 02:18 PM
Subtle and as Muro mentioned, cleanly written. This sparks ideas without over ornamentation. Good Stuff! Go to Comment
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