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Demetria Silvereye
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 01:35 PM
This character illustrates the plight of any half-breed, racial or species, creed or socioeconomic. So long people dehumanize/(de-sentiantize?) the outsider, these people will emerge.

Apart from that common angle, she doesn't really have much else to identify her and make me care that much. She is more a type then a person. Go to Comment
The Consort
Plots  (Duty)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-17 01:19 PM
This is certainly an interesting premise for a game. It does have the unfortunate effect of making one person significantly more important than the others.

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Lexicon Mortis
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2010-09-02 07:50 PM
Okay, but very thin. Go to Comment
In the House of the Yellow Priest
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-05 02:36 PM
Yes, a very good adventure - nicely done! Go to Comment
Drum of the Inferno March
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-14 12:13 PM
Excellent! Go to Comment
Call of the Storm
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-19 09:15 PM
As said, well described physically - and there is value in that - but its abilities need work.

Its interesting that your comment is larger than the submission itself :)
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Crystal Lute
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-26 09:07 PM
Tis pretty cool! Go to Comment
Karlek's Blade of Stolen Souls
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-28 11:23 AM
This is a pretty neat item, if a bit specialized. It provides an opportunity for a player to become an undead and create a quest for the surviving party.

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NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-15 09:32 AM
Another argument for the detection of magic to be a difficult and unreliable art.

A nice, complex character with lots of potential. I like it :)
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Father Max
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-10 12:09 PM
A good character - I could see using him :)
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Animated Gauntlet of Thunder
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-25 11:32 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Rel Dhaedd
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-21 11:05 AM
The Eternal Soldier. A good trope, and decently done here.

Commented on for Comment Challenge!

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A Bag of Beautiful Coyns
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-12-08 10:05 PM
I love this idea! Go to Comment
The Valley of Undead
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-24 02:27 PM
This location is both interesting and logical, though things seem a bit too tidy for these folks.
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Locations  (Water)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-17 03:11 PM
A good setting - kind of like a really big Survivor episode :)
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The Prophet
NPCs  (Extras)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2012-07-14 05:45 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Aurinellian's Wedding Bands
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-24 01:26 PM
This is a really neat item. I'd add the following:

Love is needed. A generic Lifebinding item like Strolen suggests would be a separate item.
It was unintentional, and exists either through the power of love, or an interested deity.

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Ink Training Missle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-10 11:57 AM
Agreed - Vehicular Paintball is not a bad idea, though this is more of an idea seed then a submission. Go to Comment
Mask Cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-01-21 09:35 PM
Into its 10th year. There is still an outline of cool here. I could see an eccentric might use this cloak to prank those who came to see him.

"He said meet us here.. What is that smell, Oh Gawd...." (technicolor yawn...)
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Sir Kevin Keydricks
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-16 04:01 PM
An amusing sub. Not that useful but I like it. I think it could use a little more work. Go to Comment
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