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Of Dreams
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2009-09-06 07:44 AM
This is very good - though it feels more like a start of immense potential!

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Of Demons
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-18 11:53 AM
This is an excellent submission - I was thinking of something along these lines.

I think I will be adding to this one soon. Go to Comment
The Prophecies of Hope
Plots  (Travel)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-30 07:15 PM

How did the campaign pan out in practice? Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-30 08:05 PM
Not bad but needs work. How does it attack? From the statement "each with a varying set of scrolls it has absorbed and can use" I assume it casts the spells on the scrolls that it is made of, but generally scrolls are one-shot items, so as it casts spells, it is going to weaken itself.

As others have said - flesh it out, and I think the votes will go up. Go to Comment
Kathyrrian Zombie
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2016-02-02 10:52 AM
The Meat/salt thing hackens back to the Voodoo origins of the Zombie - the non-undead form. Eating salt or meat would break the spell that made them a zombie, and of course was undesirable.

I like these - they make great mooks or even lieutenants.
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Aoktholian Swarm
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-17 09:52 PM
Muro's comment captures this perfectly for me. See Bioshock infinite for other psychotic crows...
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The Murdered Young
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-09 01:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-11 10:15 PM
The hollow horn thing, while cool, really takes me out of the reality of the submission. A horn hollow enough to produce the tuba sound would be large and thin-walled, and not the best for use as a weapon. Perhaps if it were positioned as a magical creature it would work better.

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Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-09 08:33 AM
Good details, though the color-coding really does not fit - ants use pheromones almost exclusively to communicate, and have quite poor vision.

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Fresh Water Giving Pearl
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-13 11:46 AM
Simple. Logical. Useful. Excellent. Go to Comment
Ochre Door
Dungeons  (Any)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-15 12:02 PM
This resonates with me, with my recent video-gamy sub. This is about as blunt an adventure hook as you can get, though there are times when such is both useful and desirable.

This allows linkage of any idea you see fit to use.
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The Dangerous Aspects of Using Magic
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-29 03:23 PM
This is really, really cool.

I think I'll expand on this topic and add a scroll. Soon I hope. Go to Comment
Social Tricks for the GM
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Players)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-25 11:22 AM
This is a pretty good sub with excellent entries! Go to Comment
Acehrax raptors
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 09:12 AM
A nifty creature with just enough detail to serve as springboard. Go to Comment
Gradual Exposure: Performing Major NPCs
Articles  (At Table)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-13 03:51 PM
I like this one AG - Can't wait to see in when complete - it's darn good now :) Go to Comment
Kallio's Stilling of the Heart
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-28 12:58 PM
A great potion - me likes! Go to Comment
Korinthan Cracker Powder
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-13 08:09 AM
Also made famous by Mr. Heisenberg :)

Useful stuff, that. Go to Comment
Korinthan Lock Acid
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-01 01:24 PM
I like this - the supporting details are nice! Go to Comment
The Malisso Cabinet
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-08-10 09:08 PM
What an excellent idea! Go to Comment
The Tabards of Nhil-Haress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 03:06 PM
These are really nice. I like their subtlety.

I think they are best used as indicator of prophesy.

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