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Regal and Leon
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-05 05:35 PM
I've been wondering how to review some of the older stuff by regulars here - some would not get anywhere near the score now they got then.

And no point telling what they need to do to improve - they have!

The idea in this one is interesting and could definately be expanded. Go to Comment
The Family Cohrron
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-05 02:47 PM
A good set of folks to act as a villain's goons - or as villains themselves.

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Killer Business
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2011-06-28 09:39 AM


A good basic plot idea - some of the details are not my cup of tea, but the general premise is good.


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The Great Gate of Calast
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-18 08:50 AM
Wow, I just love this idea. The humanizing of the gate is really cool. I'd love to use this someday.

5/5.

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Helping the Grazuul Tribe
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-06-27 12:12 PM


What Muro said.



A good starter adventure - especially where conflicts between orc/humans etc is more then just 'they are evil..'



 


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The Grazuul Tribe
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-06 09:49 AM
The fact that the orcs are seeking human help seems to be inferred rather than plainly stated. An interesting concept, Go to Comment
The handy small shield
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-09-06 08:12 AM
Aaah! Stats! It Burns! It Burns!

Hmm, wonder if we should adopt a generic stat system - ie,

minor - %Percentile 5-10% D20 +1/+2
moderate
etc...

As for the sub, an okay item but I would 'destat' it somehow... Go to Comment
The handy small shield
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-09-06 12:28 PM
Well, I didn't let it affect my vote, though it is my preference that the sub be completely usable without looking at game stats... Go to Comment
Dragon-lord's Gift
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-20 11:49 AM


I think this sub could easily be improved by a little rewrite to clarify the last paragraph.


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Antule's schism
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-20 11:45 AM


A good basic idea that can be the start of great events.


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Antule's schism
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-20 11:45 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Castle (A.K.A. Dreamweaver's Revenge)
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-18 06:04 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Morgan
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-29 09:48 PM
A decent blacksmith. Needs a little more color though. Go to Comment
The Dreamweaver Affair
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-18 06:03 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Karma
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-18 06:02 PM


A very flexible, low-key adventure!


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Red Erring
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-20 11:04 AM
Not bad.... Go to Comment
Deck of Fate
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-10 07:38 PM
This is a unique variant of the Deck of Many Things from (A)D&D fame. Always loved that item, and I like this one.

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Chance
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 10:17 AM
I might have combined Chance with the Deck that defines him, for there is little beyond that item.

Still, he is usable. Go to Comment
Shelter Shingle
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-04 11:14 AM
Another variant of the Portable Hole, useful and with lots of potential. One day the door could open somewhere else entirely.

"After all, how many vertical surfaces can one find in the forest?"

Plenty, they are called trees :)
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Laughter is a Serious Buisiness
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-18 06:00 PM


A neat little side quest - good for novice adventurers.


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