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Prestige class - the Dracoran
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 12:19 PM
Per moons comment, moving back into in-work. Go to Comment
Prestige class - the Dracoran
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 12:20 PM
Update: Take heed of provided comments, and if you have a chance, give it a rework. Go to Comment
Minor Races and Race Ideas
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-29 08:55 AM
Nice scroll/codex! (Scrodex?, Coroll?)

Faaar to few votes on it though. Go to Comment
Short overview of the Effin (Red Elves)
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 09:16 PM
I can help thinking - 'Those Effin' bastards...' :) Go to Comment
World Building 102: Environment building the MoonHunter way
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 09:27 PM
Very , very good.

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Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-05-16 06:45 PM
Ah yes, Strolen is helping arm the Barbarian Horde! Go to Comment
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-14 06:17 PM
A facinating spirit, containing the Communist ideal. Go to Comment
Thoktu Masif
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-27 03:07 PM
This is an excellent location. A bump from the depths of time.

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The Demon Mirror
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-09 01:19 PM
This is an interesting plot. I like how you make it hard for the player to sort out who's who.

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Ring of Stonekin
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-10 04:08 PM
Can't add to what has already been said, but I like this item(s) :). Go to Comment
Mona Island
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-04 10:55 AM
Guess the Dragon got him.
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Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-16 11:17 AM
There are various comments about it being somewhat munchkin. This can be waved away by the simple expedient of saying 'almost' anything. The potion has a limited duration that necessitates multiple doses, the potion does not keep well, and the ingredients are hard to get - likely leaving a trail of crime that could be traced. I would expect any defenses against magic your game system provides to still be valid, so resistance rolls, saving throws and the like should still apply.

In short(?), a well detailed, well described potion that certainly fits the category of a wish-fulfillment item.

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The Diamond Desert
Locations  (Area)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-14 12:19 PM
This is an interesting locale with lots of ideas.

On presentation - there are quite a number of typos - prarie, interpitation, etc, and there is a lack of spaces after punctuation such as commas and periods. There is debate about whether you should have one space or two, but you need at least one :)

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Pure Scent
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-27 11:46 AM
This is cool - I love 'simple' alchemical substances like this. Awesome!
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Johann's Cloth
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-04-02 09:38 AM
This is nifty! The unreproducible creation process is handy. Go to Comment
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-06 02:53 PM
An interesting idea, but I can't help but think this needs higher then average agricultural technology then the typical peasant farm of the middle ages. The government who set this up must have been quite organized and wealthy! Go to Comment
Noam Splinter
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2012-09-14 11:56 AM
A great NPC with great ideas in tow.

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The Great Market of Ushart
Locations  (Establishment)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-22 11:24 AM
Wow. Glad I'm not a mer-folk!

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Maganti Blades
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-23 06:22 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Ring of Opposites
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 12:59 PM
Simple, but potent. I'm not a fan of mere mortals being able to manufacture indestructible items, but that is a minor flaw. More to the point when its worn it binds, hard, with the person's mind and while you could physically remove it, it would destroy the wearer.

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