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Blades of Majesty
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-06 10:56 AM
Neat, and I like Epe's comment. Spot on. Go to Comment
Mistaken Blackmail
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-04 11:04 AM


A very good twist on this one, and Mourgrymn's addition is cool too.



 


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Phobia
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-26 09:41 AM
I'm assuming that its her human part which makes her care a whit for her parents?

In any case, an interesting NPC that could easily do well as a subtle baddie. I might avoid the Goth appearance though - normal people might overlook it, but PCs given the description are going to make assumptions - possibly correct ones. Go to Comment
The Tanglewood Box
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-23 10:09 AM
A nice take on Pandora's box. Ephemeralstability's suggested plot is quite nice as well.. Go to Comment
Gingersnap
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-03 07:19 PM
Useful little NPC. Go to Comment
Procca
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-15 07:12 PM
Good NPC, but a few details missing.



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Ring of Iron
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-04 10:17 AM
Apart from a minor concern with the game stats (which are not affecting my vote) this is a nice, simple and effective ring with great advantages and disadvantages.

Variations could give the wearer the advantages/disadvantages of particular undead as well (ie. Vampire)

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Karian Stoneheart
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-21 08:59 AM
This poses an interesting puzzle, and fits in well with a more 'realistic' world with shades of grey rather than black and white.

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Ring of Stone
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-16 11:27 AM
Cool - very straighforward with logical pros and cons! Go to Comment
Sabotage 2
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-04 11:01 AM


There is a good setup, but the actual adventure is only a small fragment of this submission. It really is a wrapper for any number of setups.



 



 



 


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Magebane
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-07-01 06:36 PM
Or just by hireing some non-magical muscle... Go to Comment
Magebane
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-07-01 06:39 PM
Not a bad item - the origin could use work as it's power is in the mythic to divine level. Go to Comment
Lyrian Necklace
Items  (Jewelry)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-23 08:09 AM
Neat, though the whole mixing colour thing will mess things up pretty quick. Eventually they would all be brown or black.

I would think it better if the colours did not change on marriage, and the children would get colours similar to genetic inheritance of eye colour.

Also, the term is faces or facets generally. Edges is technically true, but facets is a better term.

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Secret Life of the Assassin
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-04 10:57 AM


This sounds like a good scenerio for a LARP!



 


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Riel
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-06 06:42 PM
He can always upgrade later to a 4-legged animated chair.

Or be carried by a golem Master-Blaster style :) Go to Comment
Double Agents
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-04 10:54 AM


I would not use this one lightly, unless the PCs had little real interest in the region, for the label of traitor is not one easily lifted.



 



 



 


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Lost children...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-04 10:49 AM


Now this is an evil one.  I would tend, as others have mentioned, to give more hints early on, but thats my own take.



A great plot!



 


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Mail of the Dead
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-05 02:26 PM
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Spiteful Spate
Plots  (Nature)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-04 10:44 AM


A great start to an adventure, or a really good complication to an ongoing one...



 


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Gathering of Gypsies
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2011-05-04 10:36 AM


A good basic plot and could, as manfred said, be a good campaign start location.



 


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