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Ochre Door
Dungeons  (Any)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-15 12:02 PM
This resonates with me, with my recent video-gamy sub. This is about as blunt an adventure hook as you can get, though there are times when such is both useful and desirable.

This allows linkage of any idea you see fit to use.
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The Dangerous Aspects of Using Magic
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-29 03:23 PM
This is really, really cool.

I think I'll expand on this topic and add a scroll. Soon I hope. Go to Comment
Social Tricks for the GM
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Players)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-25 11:22 AM
This is a pretty good sub with excellent entries! Go to Comment
Acehrax raptors
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 09:12 AM
A nifty creature with just enough detail to serve as springboard. Go to Comment
Gradual Exposure: Performing Major NPCs
Articles  (At Table)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-13 03:51 PM
I like this one AG - Can't wait to see in when complete - it's darn good now :) Go to Comment
Kallio's Stilling of the Heart
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-28 12:58 PM
A great potion - me likes! Go to Comment
Korinthan Cracker Powder
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-13 08:09 AM
Also made famous by Mr. Heisenberg :)

Useful stuff, that. Go to Comment
Korinthan Lock Acid
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-01 01:24 PM
I like this - the supporting details are nice! Go to Comment
The Malisso Cabinet
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-08-10 09:08 PM
What an excellent idea! Go to Comment
The Tabards of Nhil-Haress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 03:06 PM
These are really nice. I like their subtlety.

I think they are best used as indicator of prophesy.

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A day in the life of a cleric...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-31 08:58 AM
This one deserves attention, and expansion! Go to Comment
Order Dragons - Drakonus Legitus
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-26 09:15 AM
This dragon seems a little - empty. It feels more like a piece of equipment or livestock than a Dragon. Go to Comment
Order of Eternal Flame
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-25 11:29 AM
An interesting concept! Go to Comment
Class of Items-Weapons
Items  (Other)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-24 01:59 PM
If there was a sufficiently obvious single-word descriptor for classesofweapon, then a freetext would work here, but as it stands this is a good collection of subs. Go to Comment
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-29 08:58 AM
A nice bit of detail. Go to Comment
The Greens of The Colors
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-20 12:04 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Blues and Yellows of The Colors
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-22 11:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Order of Iron Gauntlet
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-08 11:15 AM
A decent group. More factions is frequently a good thing :)
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Aviontix Tombs
Dungeons  (Desert)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-23 08:05 PM
The texts indicates we should remember that those who die in these tombs go to Merideth. Why would I remember that when this fact was not mentioned in the text until that point. It would be better to me for the text to indicate that those who die here have their souls sent to Merideth, and explain why. I would not make the assumption that the reader will have read all of the Aviontix before reading this sub, and this appears to be a major fact.

I had to do some searching to find out what Merideth is - the first occurance should be linked to improve readability, or even adding the phrase ("the Aviontix City of the Dead"), etc.

On a minor note - there are a few typos here - Gauntlet,greath,etc, and Larger has an extra capitalization.

On the plus side, it is interesting that an avian race would have tombs in the ground - it is contrary to ones expectations and provides a reason for what otherwise would be bizarre traps. Go to Comment
Aviontix Tombs
Dungeons  (Desert)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-24 08:12 AM
K, I stand corrected - need to read more of the other subs. I was just going through the dungeons :) Go to Comment
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