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Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-22 09:08 AM
The comments added greatly to this one. A simple idea with many possibilities.
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Raign the Kyton
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 03:48 PM
An interesting demon, with actual role-playing possibilities. Folks - try to avoid subs that require knowledge of specific systems, and especially specific creatures.

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A Hero's Journey
Plots  (Nature)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-29 02:31 PM
Most Impressive! Wow, there is a lot of nifty detail here indeed. Go to Comment
The Staff of Random Magic
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-08 11:53 AM
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Princess Flora Tamerlaine
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-12 10:56 PM
A good npc. An excellent princess. Go to Comment
Jairn Stiorlen
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-08 07:49 PM
Very well done, but marred by monolithic text. Go to Comment
The Sword of Fear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-20 09:05 AM
The only thing that bothers me about this one is how so many kings/queens run afoul of cursed magic items in a world with lots of magic. Its like royalty not using food tasters.

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James Farvre, The Author
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-12 09:34 AM
The idea of the storyteller/artist creating reality with their art is not a new one, but it works. This, though, feels very anachronistic to me. The writer is very 20/21st century feeling to me and in my opinion would be better as a storyteller/artist more in line with a fantasy realm. So instead of books, verbal telling of stories or perhaps singing them.

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Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 02:08 PM
Do not really have anything to add to the current comments. For a first submission it is fairly good, though with the points made by the comments. Go to Comment
Aether Song
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-07 09:55 AM
This is very cool, and could be a great addition to a starting location for a campaign to help explain the number of unusual folk.

It could also draw something or someone that really should not be drawn. Perhaps someone to revenge the loss of the folk in the stone.

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The Attatched
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-12 12:07 PM
Really good. Seems to me it would fit in the Garage Sale from Hell as well. Go to Comment
Siegfried Phalmont
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-19 11:43 AM
Agree with the comments. Best part is the discussion the submission elicited.
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The Grand Derby
Locations  (Establishment)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-27 12:14 PM
I think this is an excellent starting location for a campaign. You're PCs could all be involved in some aspect of the facilty during their early career.

Would like to see some plot ideas here though. Perhaps open up the sub as a scroll or codex to add to it :) Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-03 08:41 AM
Cool, and EM's comment is pretty cool as well! Go to Comment
Get Smarty
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-25 03:43 PM
Nice little plot! Go to Comment
Horse Brass
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-21 07:17 PM
I remember this, but don't know where my vote went.
Is here now, and this sub is awesome. Go to Comment
Carried on the back of a dove
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2015-09-17 11:33 AM
This feels like it could be dropped into Thieve's World. Short but does the job. Nice.
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Gloves of the Ironworker
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-06 11:21 PM
A very nice item. Needs a bit more, plot ideas or such. Go to Comment
Twigs of Rot
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-13 11:31 AM
Now, all one would have to use is one of those middle-eastern composite bows created mostly out of horn, or at least the portion of the bow where the arrow touches.

Sentiant plant beings should be able to resist the attack similar to normal death spells. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-08 12:07 PM
An interesting character who could be adapted to many purposes. One person's hero might be another's villain.
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