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Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-05 10:23 AM
A Gaggle of Wizards
Plots  (Duty)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-09 09:05 AM
I could see something like this, though certainly Grayer, since they would be a great threat politically.

I think they would be almost assuredly corrupt other than in the most optimistic of campaign worlds, they have too much power otherwise.

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Matsuro Hana
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-07 12:47 PM
Enthusiasm and level of detail is good. How well it would fit? Power level? Not so much.

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Deeping Steppes
Locations  (Area)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-04 11:31 AM
An interesting place, but needs a bit more organization. Go to Comment
By the law they froze
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 12:08 PM
This is an excellent plot. Not able to use it quite yet, but I'm putting it on my Favorites for later use.

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Blind Mask
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-17 12:50 PM
I think I would rather send my players to a place then simply have them play it like a game. That said, it is an interesting item and I think could be used, perhaps with some alteration.
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Var Salok
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-27 09:59 AM
I like the simplicity of the idea of a lich being revered as a god. This one can easily be used.
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Docry Emma
Locations  (Other)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-10 02:50 PM
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Julian and Romiette
Plots  (Discovery)   (Mini-Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-20 12:36 PM
And in the end, the prophesy is just some spirit trolling :)

Certainly a different challenge then normal, and one that can be reworked to fit in anywhere.

It does need some cleanup, but given its vintage that's not a big deal.

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The Arrow That Always Killed
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2011-03-10 10:22 AM

A great item, and an excellent addition to folklore.

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Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-22 09:08 AM
The comments added greatly to this one. A simple idea with many possibilities.
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Raign the Kyton
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 03:48 PM
An interesting demon, with actual role-playing possibilities. Folks - try to avoid subs that require knowledge of specific systems, and especially specific creatures.

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A Hero's Journey
Plots  (Nature)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-29 02:31 PM
Most Impressive! Wow, there is a lot of nifty detail here indeed. Go to Comment
The Staff of Random Magic
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-08 11:53 AM
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Princess Flora Tamerlaine
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-12 10:56 PM
A good npc. An excellent princess. Go to Comment
Jairn Stiorlen
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-08 07:49 PM
Very well done, but marred by monolithic text. Go to Comment
The Sword of Fear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-20 09:05 AM
The only thing that bothers me about this one is how so many kings/queens run afoul of cursed magic items in a world with lots of magic. Its like royalty not using food tasters.

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James Farvre, The Author
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-12 09:34 AM
The idea of the storyteller/artist creating reality with their art is not a new one, but it works. This, though, feels very anachronistic to me. The writer is very 20/21st century feeling to me and in my opinion would be better as a storyteller/artist more in line with a fantasy realm. So instead of books, verbal telling of stories or perhaps singing them.

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Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 02:08 PM
Do not really have anything to add to the current comments. For a first submission it is fairly good, though with the points made by the comments. Go to Comment
Aether Song
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-07 09:55 AM
This is very cool, and could be a great addition to a starting location for a campaign to help explain the number of unusual folk.

It could also draw something or someone that really should not be drawn. Perhaps someone to revenge the loss of the folk in the stone.

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