I like the idea, especially Moons additions to the idea. Perhaps he is still mute simply because he regained his use of vocal chords too late (perhaps not) and so cannot talk without calling attention to his state.
Agree with Wulf. Basic concept of a merman-castle is interesting. Why it got sunk in detail would be good. Why did they anger the gods? Are the inhabitants the cursed decendants of the original human inhabitants, not given 'proper' tailed forms like normal mermen (and as such, they would be shunned by the 'real' merman, who do not need artifical tails.) Go to Comment