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Maris
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-06 02:37 PM
There is a start here - good bones but needs more flesh. She is interesting.

A few typos too, including in the summary.

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skull shuriken
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-10 11:08 AM
The votes tell the story here.
There is the start of something interesting here. Go to Comment
Lost Saga
Plots  (Discovery)   (Mini-Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-11 11:20 AM
A decent plot idea, one must, time by time, lie to one's PCs.
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The Garden of the Understar
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-10 10:18 AM
I would just assume it is a magic prison, and the plants are eternal, perhaps drawing their energy from something or someone nearby.


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The Mirror of Doom
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-17 09:06 PM
Very nice, and very gothic. It begs to be used. Go to Comment
Ash
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-18 08:02 PM
A good psychic character, though we know little beyond her aversion to using her power. A starting point we can add too easily enough. Was being an orphan really necessary?





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Licarathia
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-10 01:40 PM
I like her, though I might switch the odd hair color to being at most a streak, otherwise it pretty much telegraphs her status, especially if they see the fox as some point.


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Compass Stones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-31 02:47 PM
Perfect simple item. I think these are absolutely rife in Skyrim :)

Mystic Moons idea is probably the best way to use these, but one could add complications to their use. It is possible to create multiple marker stones and some may draw the user to traps or dangerous areas. I would have these always lead to perilous adventure, and be found occasionally in treasure.

hmm.

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Prankster Plant
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-14 12:00 PM
I like this! I find it very appealing and funny, even in its brevity.

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Cowl of False Reputation
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-06 07:46 AM
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The Land of the Living
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2009-08-01 07:08 PM
Very original - wonderful understanding of the effects.

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Gloves of Immaculate Grooming
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-15 08:27 PM
In truth, the original gloves upon which these were modeled where the Hands of Order, stolen ironically from a long dead god of Law. The touch of the glove would remove chaos from that touched, taking them from unorganized and primitive to ordered. The touch is especially baneful to beings of chaos and entrophy, but nothing is unscathed by prolonged contact.

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War Cleaver
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-28 09:17 PM
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Derrin's Vest
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-31 01:28 PM
This is an neat and odd one! How does it live when not stuffed into armour?

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The City of Caulderon
Locations  (City)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-18 11:51 AM
Oh, and a great location. Go to Comment
Puzzle Room
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Puzzles)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-25 10:41 AM
An interesting encounter! Go to Comment
Trick Bag
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-03 08:05 PM
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Arrow of Personal Hell
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-04-01 08:26 AM
I think the idea here is good - perhaps a bit lacking in polish, but for an early sub it is good.

I wouldn't bother with blindness or deafness - just running around feeling like you are on fire would be enough for me. Go to Comment
Wing Brew
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 07:28 AM
Interesting. Go to Comment
Last City of the Sun Worshippers
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-06 06:56 PM
Great Atmosphere! Wonderful backstory for a desert ruin. Go to Comment
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