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NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-10 12:23 PM
Another great NPC with colour and usability, and with plenty of room for additions.

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Demonic Flesh Graft
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-18 11:47 AM
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Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 09:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tolk the Potion Master
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-08 03:03 PM
It's a good start - feels a little incomplete. The core idea is interesting, though the motivation of the mages in incorporate the little fellow seems a little weak. Go to Comment
Lucint's Blood Amulet
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 10:50 AM
A nice, simple item which can be tossed in pretty much anywhere. Go to Comment
Philosopher's Mercury
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-06 08:44 AM
I really like this idea!

Regarding power levels, I would assume that the greater the sound, the greater the power, but I would also consider that the vessel containing the substance would be under stress. Perhaps not of equal intensity, but still increasing with the power level. As a result, truly loud sounds would potentially destroy the vessel, removing the 'filter' effect.
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Chainmail of Forgetfulness
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-29 12:10 PM
How would it be entertaining except by happen-stance? Did the mages also add a scrying enchantment so they could watch the antics of their victims?

I could see this being somewhat useful, but does not seem to be a terribly efficient means to defeat a mass of enemies. Mess up an individual badly without killing him, sure.

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Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-05 04:01 PM
A role-model for pathetic underlings everywhere!

Reminds me of the house-elf in Harry Potter though. Go to Comment
Jorran Aklia
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-06 06:12 AM
Cold and serious. Well done. Go to Comment
A Wizard's Secret
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-03 10:53 AM
This is a good, simple straightforward item one could use to add spice to a wizard. I would have the 'destruction' or other baleful effect kick in only after a determined effort to open the book in spite of strong resistance.

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NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-14 01:46 PM
I can forgive cliche - I tend in that direction from time to time, but the lack of attention paid to spelling and grammar (Again, I am no saint on that front) is somewhat less forgivable. Go to Comment
Cloak of Falling
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-16 10:28 PM
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Blinkly's Rocket Arrow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2015-11-10 12:53 PM
Silly, and my head can't perfectly visualize this - does the bow get the rocket away from the user before the engine ignites? Is it just a cylindrical explosive thrown by the bow - in which case its really a grenade rather than a rocket. Or is it a rocket-assisted explosive arrow?

Anyway, it chars it user and blows up its target. That at least is an amusing image :)
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Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 01:08 PM
This one is very good - an excellent little secret and treasure.
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Selyn DeJaod
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-05 11:51 AM
Existing comments cover what I would say, apart from _guessing_ a springbolt is a gun.
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Jardan , the Oak Sage
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-12 07:01 PM

Wow, unvoted is bringing up gems.  I love this one! Top marks!



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Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-09 03:43 PM
I don't know, this is really cool!

I love subs which paint a mental pictures of places, and this is one of those. Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-22 08:23 PM
Holy backstory batman! :) Go to Comment
Lesser Glyph of Change
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-17 08:28 PM
I do thing random items have their place, maybe not in a serious campaign. I've seem some pretty funny episodes come from these types of items (Wand of wonder & Deck of many things).

If there was more to the item then just a list of random effects, I think it would be better received. Go to Comment
Darken Flind
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-10 10:50 AM
This is pretty interesting - there are some good ideas in here. The name seems to me like naming your cat 'kitty' though - flind being a type of gnoll.

I like the idea of bloodforging - is this a D20 specific element? Go to Comment
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