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Lin the Nightingale
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-14 01:57 PM
This really dances around the character without really describing her. Yes, she's a musician, and yep, she's and orphan.

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Yitsmal
Locations  (Desert)   (City)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-25 12:47 PM


Certainly a blank slate location. Not bad for it's age - it is quite usable.

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The Isle of Crustaciano
Locations  (Water)   (City)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 10:04 PM
I love the picture painted here, and the crab merchant himself is .. Odd :) Go to Comment
The Isle of Crustaciano
Locations  (Water)   (City)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-06 06:49 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Corvis
Locations  (Regional)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-13 02:57 PM
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Mytrian, The Wise
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2010-12-18 05:18 PM


Excellent review Pieh.  Dead on. 



 



 



 

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The Lonesome Village
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (City)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 02:31 PM
There are days where I would like a place like this. This could be a good place for a sometime mentor to dwell, and the PCs must come and go occasionally, getting to know the people and perhaps appreciating it.

They may even care if it were to somehow come under threat.
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Drinen Forest
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-02 08:32 PM
Yes, more details would strengthen it, as for now it seems to be a clip of Mirkwood.

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The Forbidden Jungle
Locations  (Area)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-02 08:30 PM
Okay, a jungle that actively despises and works against humans. A decent premise.
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Abdelfettah's Escape
Plots  (Nature)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-12-19 10:08 AM


 I like this too - a good, simple plot that comes together quite well and can easily be scaled to whatever level is needed.



 



 


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Los Conquistadores
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-10 11:35 AM
Having that much gold would probably do a rather large amount of damage to the economy, as they would essentially debase it into oblivion.

"Gold? Meh, we use it for fishing weights..."


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Star of Tears and Blood
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-14 02:17 PM
Post Necromancer! Go to Comment
Mirra Soothe
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 09:22 PM
This would be a good hook for a low level adventure. I like how understated it is. Go to Comment
Fairy Wraith Swarm
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2011-06-29 01:10 PM


What a neat - little :) - idea.  Of course it makes some assumptions about the metaphysics in your world - that fairies 'can' be undead.



 


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The Cliff and Valley
Plots  (Mystical)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-11 11:51 AM
Interesting setting, but I would like to see a lot more added to it.
It's got good bones :) Go to Comment
Golden Tears Mistress
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 12:43 PM
Interesting, though somehow very little of Golden Tears Mistress herself shows through here.

An interesting twist would be that tomb robbing would have consequences in the next world, which would explain why ridiculous efforts are made to protect the tombs of the wealthy.
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Golden Tears Mistress
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 12:44 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Never Ending Silence
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-13 09:06 PM
What an excellent death knight and not a word on his powers. Crunch is easy. Character is hard, and you have it here.

Corporeal death knights - love it. Go to Comment
Bianca la Fiere
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-03 07:52 AM
A good bit player. She certainly could play the part of the teacher or patron, and in appropriately heroic worlds, be a real player.


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Rangerwood
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-12 10:05 PM
This is good, and can be readily expanded on. Go to Comment
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