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Grordrim
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-03 10:50 AM
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Staff of Dragoonias
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-09 12:32 PM
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Ring of Wit
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-30 02:27 PM
Hmm, a bride as dumb as a cow during a wedding could be rather disruptive, as only eating, sleeping and other things would occupy her mind. Might make a rather memorable wedding. Go to Comment
Ring of Wit
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-30 02:32 PM
Hmm, being a little generous with a 2.5, but not quite as bad as a 2.0.

This one could easily be salvaged with just a little work. Spell check, a little more detail would easily push this into the 3 range. Go to Comment
The Box That Cannot Be Opened
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-12 10:21 PM
Yes. It is a great one. Bump for awesomeness:) Go to Comment
Canteen Stones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-11 10:44 AM
Had this in my favourites, but did not vote. Changed.

Nice item!
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Maris
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-06 02:37 PM
There is a start here - good bones but needs more flesh. She is interesting.

A few typos too, including in the summary.

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skull shuriken
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-10 11:08 AM
The votes tell the story here.
There is the start of something interesting here. Go to Comment
Lost Saga
Plots  (Discovery)   (Mini-Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-11 11:20 AM
A decent plot idea, one must, time by time, lie to one's PCs.
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The Garden of the Understar
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-10 10:18 AM
I would just assume it is a magic prison, and the plants are eternal, perhaps drawing their energy from something or someone nearby.


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The Mirror of Doom
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-17 09:06 PM
Very nice, and very gothic. It begs to be used. Go to Comment
Ash
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-18 08:02 PM
A good psychic character, though we know little beyond her aversion to using her power. A starting point we can add too easily enough. Was being an orphan really necessary?





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Licarathia
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-10 01:40 PM
I like her, though I might switch the odd hair color to being at most a streak, otherwise it pretty much telegraphs her status, especially if they see the fox as some point.


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Compass Stones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-31 02:47 PM
Perfect simple item. I think these are absolutely rife in Skyrim :)

Mystic Moons idea is probably the best way to use these, but one could add complications to their use. It is possible to create multiple marker stones and some may draw the user to traps or dangerous areas. I would have these always lead to perilous adventure, and be found occasionally in treasure.

hmm.

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Prankster Plant
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-14 12:00 PM
I like this! I find it very appealing and funny, even in its brevity.

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Cowl of False Reputation
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-06 07:46 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Land of the Living
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2009-08-01 07:08 PM
Very original - wonderful understanding of the effects.

There are so many options here it is not funny! Go to Comment
Gloves of Immaculate Grooming
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-15 08:27 PM
In truth, the original gloves upon which these were modeled where the Hands of Order, stolen ironically from a long dead god of Law. The touch of the glove would remove chaos from that touched, taking them from unorganized and primitive to ordered. The touch is especially baneful to beings of chaos and entrophy, but nothing is unscathed by prolonged contact.

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War Cleaver
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-28 09:17 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Derrin's Vest
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-31 01:28 PM
This is an neat and odd one! How does it live when not stuffed into armour?

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