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The Valley of Undead
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-24 01:27 PM
This location is both interesting and logical, though things seem a bit too tidy for these folks.
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The Prophet
NPCs  (Extras)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2012-07-14 04:45 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Ink Training Missle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-10 10:57 AM
Agreed - Vehicular Paintball is not a bad idea, though this is more of an idea seed then a submission. Go to Comment
Mask Cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-01-21 08:35 PM
Into its 10th year. There is still an outline of cool here. I could see an eccentric might use this cloak to prank those who came to see him.

"He said meet us here.. What is that smell, Oh Gawd...." (technicolor yawn...)
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Sir Kevin Keydricks
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-16 03:01 PM
An amusing sub. Not that useful but I like it. I think it could use a little more work. Go to Comment
A Mile In My Shoes
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-20 02:40 PM
Heh, this is evil. Been used a lot of times in a million places (cartoons, sitcoms, etc) so it is a classic gimick. Go to Comment
Staff of Rope Command
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-03 10:52 AM
A nifty item, though the background could have been more interesting. Go to Comment
Coat of Teeth
Items  (Armor)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-24 10:38 AM
Cool item! Druidic types do need more interesting items. Go to Comment
Jeremiah
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-08 02:04 PM
Good solid NPC and interesting. Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 10:27 AM
The chalk outline view is interesting, but does not seem to mesh with the idea that the torch is putting off black light that only the bearer can see.

A bit confusing, but the idea of a bearer only torch is good.
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When the moon fell...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-26 02:05 PM
This could easily be the start to a great campaign. Hints at an greater story than has been revealed thus far, and the genesis of any number of powerful villains who quickly spread out from the scene of the impact to pursue their own plans of conquest or vengeance.

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The Ruins of Aliet Manor
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-10 10:58 AM
Removed Challenge. Go to Comment
Minon's Spear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-05 08:06 AM
An excellent magic item with wonderful origin. Great stuff! Go to Comment
Sword of The Righteous
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-15 02:04 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Ouvulailio
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-10 10:59 AM
Update: Needs a lot of work. Go to Comment
The Assassin's Scroll
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-02 08:02 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Boots of The Fowl
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-21 07:04 AM
Truely a classic. Voting high as a result. Go to Comment
Guise of the Dead
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-08 07:23 PM
I think this an excellent item myself.

I would definately add additional drawbacks, such as the wearer has the viewpoint of undead, so life is both visible, hunger-inducing, and induces hatred. The wearer would need to have strong willpower to avoid falling into the mind-set of undead. Go to Comment
The Land That Forgets
Locations  (Other)   (Establishment)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-02 01:13 PM
I like the sparseness of this. Interesting visual.
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Lord Ziranith
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-19 02:50 PM
Needs some more polish I think. There are punctuation and spelling errors that need cleaned up. Go to Comment
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