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Lancid
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-10 11:05 AM
This almost feels like some sort of art piece. He could become something, but right now I get a very vague idea of him. Though I know more about his shaving practices then most NPCs I know of.

And I'm very ambivalent on the whole Bad Example freetext. It feels like the equivalent to a dunce-cap to me.


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Helspar
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-27 10:56 AM
You could make a pretty good portable stove with just two pieces, each having about 18 square inches of Helspar - just place the pot on the plate and you have smokeless,flameless cookery...

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Helspar
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-01 06:57 PM
Does this material create the heat it emits or just stores it? If it stores it, will it run out? Go to Comment
Dragon's Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-20 01:16 PM
I like how it is made from some magic elemental stone, but as mentioned, some real details on how it benefits the wielder would be go. It has great presentation value, but what justifies the effort in creating it? Perhaps it works exceptionally well against earth-aspected opponents? As a focus for earth magic used by the wielder?

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WindSong
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-14 07:47 PM
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Hoodwink
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-07 08:36 PM
A nice item, if a little too good at solving problems for the thief. Hardly sporting to carry an invisible hiding spot with one.

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Forgotton Summer
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-14 05:03 AM
I don't think there is anything missing here at all. This is an admirable one-time tool to do what he suggested. As for who would have such power, a god is an easy answer for that.

As for the secret, well, that would be telling, no? :)
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Imuricum Weapons (aka Scorpion's Tail)
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-17 08:58 AM
I would simply echo Pieh's comments here. Has some interesting qualities. Go to Comment
Strike Down Mother Earth
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 09:53 PM
I love this axe, a tool for a demon, Giant king or Elemental lord. Too powerfull? Speed up the petrification. Go to Comment
Skyway
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-25 07:45 PM
An excellent location with built in plot potential. Not bad Moon! Go to Comment
Holey Stone
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-27 01:36 PM
This is another nifty little detail. One could easily have any _naturally_ occurring holey stone have some power over the supernatural in your world, especially given how powerful these types of beings can be compared to a common person. The same way silver is bane to werewolves, and running water is to vampires, a holey stone helps peel back the veil spirits and their like use to hide from humans.

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RatNosetheTroll,Esq.
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-04 01:45 PM
What Moon said.
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The Jester's Loot
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-03 02:40 PM
An interesting idea for a spell. Go to Comment
The Unicorn Bell
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 09:43 PM
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Lake of Rage
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-26 10:40 AM
An interesting idea - it can be made non game specific simply by indicating that the drinkers will be affected by magical rage and leave it at that. Timing, how to resist, etc, can be implemented by whoever uses it.

What this post really needs to improve it is _why_ the lake causes rage? Is there an imprisoned evil god buried in the sediment below the waters? Did 100 berserk demons die in a battle eons ago on the site? Etc. Go to Comment
Cloak of Wailing Misery
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-22 06:39 PM
Classic 2.0 really, I kind of like it. Go to Comment
Lady Joya
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:02 PM
A neat character, though portraying something that lives by eating sentient being as something other then evil does not sit well for me.

I could definitely see her used as something other then an opponent though.







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The Family Ancestral Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-19 09:16 AM
Certainly a great take of the Dancing Sword idea. This could easily be made rare and not cookie cutter by the need of specific knowledge, as well as for the sacrificing person needing to be exceptionally skilled.

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Gray The Waunderer
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-12 06:41 PM
Quite interesting... Go to Comment
Gorlock
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-08 10:48 AM
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