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Fontis Stone
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-04 09:53 AM
Not bad - could use a little polish (capitalization is needed on a few sentences..) and of course a large backstory would be nice. All in all a straightfoward sub. Go to Comment
Prince Michael
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-25 11:43 AM
A good character, though not a major driver.

Only real complaint is commas require a space to follow them - most of the commas lack that space.
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Prince Michael
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-25 11:43 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Vengeance
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-08 11:17 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Book of Fury
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-19 07:51 PM
An interesting piece of detail. Go to Comment
Reverend Fury
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-07 08:48 AM
A character with good potential for complicating an adventure. Replace his sword with a small army, and now he's a real mover and shaker.

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Melkesjokolyde
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-26 06:03 PM
Seems you are back to familiar ground Shadoweagle :). Here's another potion for new and overworked necromancers everywhere... Go to Comment
Thrar Stones
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-10 09:33 AM
What an excellent item to bring to the world, and one need not grant any magic for it to be worthwhile! Like other gemstones, the Thar stones have their uses for rituals, magic, alchemy and folklore. Pearls of the Forest might have been a more evocative title, but still, a great post.

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Honor Among Thieves
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-27 02:34 PM
A very simple, but potentially quite involved plot. Too bad Ria has not been about in a long time. Go to Comment
Seal of Thieves
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-27 02:39 PM
Plug and play indeed - a lot could be made of this. Go to Comment
The Cloak of Shadoo
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-05 10:01 PM
Im curious how you planned on this item being used? Go to Comment
Scroll of mute
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-17 12:05 PM
A simple but effective little boobytrap. No idea why the scroll has any physical protection - seems unrelated to its chief power.

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Grunderkin
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-24 07:58 AM
Good background, good writing. Power level seems a trifle high to me, but that is a minor concern. Go to Comment
First Blood
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-17 07:18 PM
Nice one! Go to Comment
Soul Pass
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-29 07:49 AM
Good idea. Needs more meat :) Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-01 10:04 AM
Excellent! Go to Comment
Timtom Flyboy Butterfoot's Flying Machine
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-05 10:23 AM
This conjures up a great image! Good job!

This would be popular in drought-hit regions!
Bottle rockets revenge! Go to Comment
Timtom Flyboy Butterfoot's Flying Machine
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-10 08:12 AM
I still find this one amusing.... Go to Comment
The Sinking Ring of Ku Pum
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:47 AM
I love the tone of this piece. So sad the Captain has not posted in ages :(

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Faye Delivour
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-02 10:55 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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