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Disappearing children
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-10 08:15 AM
This smells like a Grimm fairy tale. Simple and effective.

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Little Dark
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2012-09-14 10:27 AM
Found this using unvoted, which is random, and this sub certainly fits the bill.

This is a neat take on the smurfs, which were an epidemic when I was growing up...

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Kassil Khirsah
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-13 11:30 AM
The classic career dragonslayer. A bit of a standard type - he needs a little more to make him be unique. Go to Comment
The Martyr's Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-31 04:48 PM
Not bad, though dealing the same damage to the wielder and the enemy means he can't beat low level foes he could otherwise dispatch easily without the sword. Go to Comment
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-23 10:03 AM
As others have said, it is a decent enough item with a negligible backstory. Better then a generic cursed sword, but could have been a lot better. Go to Comment
Locations  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-01 08:34 AM
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golden golem soul coin
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-13 03:09 PM
This does have potential.

Take a look at other subs and flesh it out more. Take peoples advise on spellchecking.
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You're the author - the mage's name need not be lost to history. I've suggested before that one can have the Players History which can be vague, incomplete and wrong, and then the GM's history which provides the GM what he needs to know about the item. Go to Comment
Lost Artifact
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-06 10:48 AM
Another sub where the discussion it elicits is better than the source.

An overly harsh intro, and he never submitted anything afterward. Go to Comment
Haran Hearthheart
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-18 02:44 PM
Okay, this is a hidden wonder. I agree with the commentary and love the writing.

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Shreed Reckkit
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-10 12:32 PM
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The Spike of Fate
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-10 12:55 PM
Interesting that the wizards that created it could not use it. Seems like rather poor planning on their part. Especially ironic considering the nature of the item.. :)
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It was just a book
Plots  (Crisis)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-19 01:21 PM
An interesting idea - the book as portal has wonderful symbolism to it. Recursive adventures :)

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Knooble Glitio
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-04 02:24 PM
Frankly, I've seen much worse, and its unfortunate that this author essentially quit after this submission.

I agree with Dozus.

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Race to Claim the Treasure of Shikan
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-22 01:27 PM
Writing and spelling are good, and the hook where this in fact a lie is good, but change Demon to Dragon, and you have the latter half of The Hobbit.

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NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-14 09:13 AM
I found this amusing and genuine. +5 Elven chain is damn good threads!

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Deadly Plague
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-09 06:56 PM
Okay, if you want it this short, submit it as an idea seed, not a sub.

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NPCs  (Extras)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-15 02:52 PM
Great hook, no line or sinker...
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Alastor Greyson
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-14 10:52 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Locations  (Desert)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 07:09 AM
This feels like a somewhat coherent brainstorming session, and contains the seed or seeds of a good idea. Go to Comment
Demadex Canyon
Locations  (Area)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-08 02:16 PM
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