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Scroll of mute
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-17 12:05 PM
A simple but effective little boobytrap. No idea why the scroll has any physical protection - seems unrelated to its chief power.

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Grunderkin
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-24 07:58 AM
Good background, good writing. Power level seems a trifle high to me, but that is a minor concern. Go to Comment
First Blood
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-17 07:18 PM
Nice one! Go to Comment
Soul Pass
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-29 07:49 AM
Good idea. Needs more meat :) Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-01 10:04 AM
Excellent! Go to Comment
Timtom Flyboy Butterfoot's Flying Machine
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-05 10:23 AM
This conjures up a great image! Good job!

This would be popular in drought-hit regions!
Bottle rockets revenge! Go to Comment
Timtom Flyboy Butterfoot's Flying Machine
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-10 08:12 AM
I still find this one amusing.... Go to Comment
The Sinking Ring of Ku Pum
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:47 AM
I love the tone of this piece. So sad the Captain has not posted in ages :(

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Faye Delivour
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-02 10:55 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Prince Reza Ironfist
NPCs  (Extras)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-18 11:52 AM
I like the idea, especially Moons additions to the idea. Perhaps he is still mute simply because he regained his use of vocal chords too late (perhaps not) and so cannot talk without calling attention to his state.

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Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-04 09:28 AM
I like this location - your races can be so much more useful if you don't pigeonhole them.
Having races not be typecast as various sized pyschos adds richness and interest to your world.

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Chary
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-03 04:54 PM
Rickster said it precisely. Really awesome Scras!
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Darken Glade
Locations  (Regional)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-30 07:03 PM
Yes, this is very good!!!! Go to Comment
Castle Seamus
Locations  (Fortification)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-28 02:56 PM
Agree with Wulf. Basic concept of a merman-castle is interesting. Why it got sunk in detail would be good. Why did they anger the gods? Are the inhabitants the cursed decendants of the original human inhabitants, not given 'proper' tailed forms like normal mermen (and as such, they would be shunned by the 'real' merman, who do not need artifical tails.) Go to Comment
Astria Rayne
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 09:02 AM
This could have benefited from a short summary sub to describe the character, and then a linked piece of fiction to go into detail.

There is a very strong Anime feel to this one, both good and bad.

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Astria Rayne
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 09:02 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Astria Rayne
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 09:04 AM
I see Skylark was back almost a year ago. I hope you kept writing - there is potential in yours! Go to Comment
Charles Champagne
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 02:26 PM
Perhaps by drinking a particular vintage he frees the spirit to move on, though a bit weaker.

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The Artist
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2013-01-21 08:29 PM
This is good - very good. I love the possibilities here.

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Trivulo's Compendium
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-19 06:48 PM
Nicely done! Go to Comment
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