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The Sword of Souls
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 12:23 PM
1. Spelling is the number 1 problem with this one - please put it though a spellchecker and we can look at other issues.

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Grond, Hammer of the Underworld
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-11 06:39 PM
An excellent item! My only negative comment would have been not to use the name Grond. It opens one up to a lot of criticism. It did not affect my vote, but I would expect to be beaten up over a sub I called Excaliber, Gandalf, etc. They are great names, to be sure, but the baggage carried with them would serve to color any such post. Go to Comment
The Devils Luck
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 03:39 PM
This is cool.l may come back later with more. Maybe :)
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The Crystal City
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-05 12:44 PM
This idea is quite neat - though I could see this place easily converted from a simple high-magic location to something more sinister. Go to Comment
The Crown of Pier Point
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-10 09:02 AM
A good take on the Corrupting Item idea. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-07-24 08:44 AM
Hmm, be interesting to see a plot incorporating this little one and Edrea Solon :) Go to Comment
Queen Yocasta
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-28 10:16 PM
She's a strange one indeed. I could see an entreprising necromancer 'reviving' her daughter for her and gaining her favour, but will eventually have the undead daughter murder the queen... Go to Comment
Spring of Enlightenment
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-17 08:14 PM
Interesting plot - a lot of work went into this one. Great job! Go to Comment
Dimble Stumpwater
NPCs  (Extras)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2008-01-11 10:17 AM
This is an okay outline, perhaps as an entry for a '30', but it is too terse for a sub. We know he looks like a tinker gone, likes knowledge and has invented a few things. His personality is not explored. Go to Comment
Well of FireGems
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-15 08:06 PM
Holding off vote for now - perhaps this bumb will trigger the unification of the subs! :) Go to Comment
Items  (Jewelry)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 09:42 PM
A good plot device. Go to Comment
The Indian Madu
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-22 02:40 PM
Agreed. You really need to add something to an item like this apart from adding together external references.
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Soup of Fertility
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-16 11:47 AM
What echo said. Unless it somehow sustains the little guys who wait until the time is right.

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The Flute of Hlatar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-19 07:52 PM
Nicely done. A good key item for evil baddies to use. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-08-26 12:13 PM
A useful NPC villan. Terse but very usable. Nicely done! Go to Comment
Staff of the Majordomo
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-18 09:30 PM
This is pretty cool - as others have said, a great low-level item. Go to Comment
John Chard
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-08 11:07 AM
A good one! You had nice comments on this one - he does have a lot of potential. Go to Comment
Kostovic's Elixir of Magic
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-26 04:03 PM
Interesting - though the side effects may be a little extreme. A little heavy on the game-specific terms. Go to Comment
Kostovic the Inept
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-26 04:00 PM
I like this fellow, especially since I've a scroll which is related - Flawed Potions. Go to Comment
Misty Mountain Hop
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-04 09:39 AM
I like this idea - the PCs are dragged into a prophesy and a reason to participate in a great, high-level battle.

It seems Mathom claimed a few hordlings though.

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