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The Uneasy Sleep
Plots  (Nature)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-02 07:08 PM
Wow, this is well written, if a bit specialized. I really like the idea and it would be not that hard to adapt for other purposes. Not sure I'd sleep in in more than once though.

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Boots Too Fine for the Earth
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-01 10:49 AM
Great history and a simple, yet useful power (something I have a great affinity for...)

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Starseed
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-24 07:14 AM
How would the universe happen to contain more than one of these?

Its an amazing item, with the singularly most powerful effect of any item I have seen - the ability to birth a universe is pretty top-tier. Not sure what you would do for an encore, apart from some machine that could rapidly initiate the Big Crunch :) Go to Comment
Land of the Yale Riders
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-11 07:53 AM
Excellent! Gnomish peaceful Huns!

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Longbow of Light
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 09:52 AM
What happens if one truely blind were to fire it? :) Could they then see what was illuminated by the arrows? They would truly appreciate it then :) Go to Comment
Urk
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-23 08:03 PM
Agreed - this one has excellent storytelling! Go to Comment
Winter's Bounty
Items  (Transports)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-14 07:13 PM
This is great! I love the image it paints. Go to Comment
One-Thousand Groans for A Laugh
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-07 08:03 PM
Muhuhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!


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Pakint
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-14 09:54 AM
Not the greatest for sure, but there is the germ of something here. Go to Comment
Fin
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-16 02:46 PM
Not a bad tale but need more about the captain himself. We know a little about his past, one occurence in his life, but apart from being smart and prepared, I know little about him. Go to Comment
Fiery-Feathered Phembu's Better Feathers
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 09:50 PM
I love the legend on this one, and the headdress is quite good too. You have such a way with names. Go to Comment
Skyswimmer cloak
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-22 10:48 AM
Tying flight time to endurance is great. As Cheka said, its a great, 'natural' limitation which makes it more interesting then the typical ring/cloak of flight.

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Stonecleave
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 07:58 PM
A good item with a nice dwarven feel, though I think dwarves should not make a hammer that could'nt mash orc heads. Go to Comment
Elixir of Courage
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-25 08:33 PM
Great potion!

I can't imagine anyone surviving this for long without protective friends.

Adding to my Flawed Potions codex! Go to Comment
Whiteblade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-06 12:08 PM
Excellent! Love simple items... Go to Comment
Potion of Mis Understanding Languages
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-01 07:16 PM
You know, I've looked at this one before, but did not vote. Not sure why, cause this is simply brilliant!

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A Fungus Among Us
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-08 02:11 PM
Good plot, not too partial to the name though.

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Ti'Klund
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-17 08:31 PM
Some interesting bits, though offing the parents cuts out soo much storytelling.

Let your GM off them!
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Lancid
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-10 11:05 AM
This almost feels like some sort of art piece. He could become something, but right now I get a very vague idea of him. Though I know more about his shaving practices then most NPCs I know of.

And I'm very ambivalent on the whole Bad Example freetext. It feels like the equivalent to a dunce-cap to me.


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Helspar
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-27 10:56 AM
You could make a pretty good portable stove with just two pieces, each having about 18 square inches of Helspar - just place the pot on the plate and you have smokeless,flameless cookery...

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