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Lost Artifact
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-06 10:48 AM
Another sub where the discussion it elicits is better than the source.

An overly harsh intro, and he never submitted anything afterward. Go to Comment
Haran Hearthheart
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-18 02:44 PM
Okay, this is a hidden wonder. I agree with the commentary and love the writing.

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It was just a book
Plots  (Crisis)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-19 01:21 PM
An interesting idea - the book as portal has wonderful symbolism to it. Recursive adventures :)

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Knooble Glitio
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-04 02:24 PM
Frankly, I've seen much worse, and its unfortunate that this author essentially quit after this submission.

I agree with Dozus.

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Race to Claim the Treasure of Shikan
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-22 01:27 PM
Writing and spelling are good, and the hook where this in fact a lie is good, but change Demon to Dragon, and you have the latter half of The Hobbit.



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Thunk
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-14 09:13 AM
I found this amusing and genuine. +5 Elven chain is damn good threads!

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Deadly Plague
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-09 06:56 PM
Okay, if you want it this short, submit it as an idea seed, not a sub.


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Xander
NPCs  (Extras)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-15 02:52 PM
Great hook, no line or sinker...
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Alastor Greyson
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-14 10:52 AM
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Everyoung
Locations  (Desert)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 07:09 AM
This feels like a somewhat coherent brainstorming session, and contains the seed or seeds of a good idea. Go to Comment
Demadex Canyon
Locations  (Area)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-08 02:16 PM
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Cowpoke
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-07 01:11 PM
A nifty item for the right game setting. This idea could be used elsewhere.
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Dan the Dastardly Dog
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-28 10:27 AM
:)

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Infren
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-15 09:10 AM
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Aruziel Vlorain
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-04 08:00 PM
This is a nifty one and the different plot ideas are all great! Go to Comment
The Sands of Fury
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 02:43 PM
Personally, I like powerful items (to a degree) and a one shot hurricane item does not bother me, so long as it was dang expensive and difficult to create.
It could easily cause an "Oh Crap!" moment :)

I would have it take effect over a slightly longer period then 30 seconds. To affect miles and miles of clouds, the magic effect would need to take a while.
What if there were no clouds? I could see them appearing, but 30 seconds?

Now, this really is the equivalent to a magic Atomic Bomb and would need to be treated as such with attendant magical protections, security forces, etc.

An enemy mage could easily teleport (if available) into a city, plant and activate it, and then leave. Go to Comment
Last Stand
Locations  (City)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-16 12:22 PM
Go big or go home! This is a very interesting location! Go to Comment
A What in Distress???
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 01:14 PM
Hmm.

3 for an _ok_ plot. +.5 for the great moral discussion it lit off!

Now, just because a spider is a big, evil, man-eating beast, does not mean the PCs' can't do business with it. Business is business after all! :)

The only leverage the spider has is that it knows where the evil mage is, and evil mages are Always worth killing :)

So there could be some negotiation. And then when they are done, then they kill the spider. Go to Comment
Trotter's Wand of Unfair Trade
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-05 01:10 PM
Well, this is neat :) Am ambivalent at the poetry, but it is something to this point unique.

I like the item, and it is a true trickster's tool.

Good job!
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Here Be Spiders!
Plots  (Hired)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-03 09:21 AM
The premise of an addictive spider bite is interesting, if a bit weird. Usually bites are intended to either disable their prey/attacker or at least drive them away.



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