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Selvaks
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-19 01:13 PM
Not a bad critter, but I have a problem with natural creatures which specialize in human prey.
A human population providing enough food for a bunch of squirrels to evolve eating them is not very likely - the group would either move away or attempt to exterminate the squirrels. Either would not provide a very stable diet. A magical creation or unique mutation I could believe. Go to Comment
Dunkleoustous
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-28 11:14 AM
A nice fish. Needs more detail though. Go to Comment
Blood Spiders
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-19 08:58 PM
A good elaboration of the giant spider with details to work off of. Go to Comment
Marongghovec aka Ale-Ox
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 10:44 PM
Made me laugh. I love the image this conjures. Good stuff. Go to Comment
Maternity Blossom
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-04 09:54 PM
Quite strange. Interesting, and I'm glad it does not really exist :) Go to Comment
Golden Cherry
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-26 09:25 AM
Now this is cool. I like this a lot!

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Glow Leach
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-23 07:42 PM
I think glowing would be a problem since it would be much easier to detect and remove them.

This one needs a lot of work! Go to Comment
Wumpus
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-05 09:45 AM
This is an odd one. The Wumpus seems to have a fair amount of folklore attached to it.

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Teleportation and Translocation
Systems  (Transportation)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-26 08:11 PM
Interesting sub, and did you ever help Maestro with his translocation? I'm very curious! Go to Comment
Of Spirits
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-07 02:48 PM
A great treatment of spirits. I really like this! Go to Comment
Of Saints
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-19 08:08 PM
Going to have to add to this one! Now on to-do list. Go to Comment
Of Saints
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 09:08 AM
Bah. Still on the to-do 6 years later... Go to Comment
Necromancy: The Three Paths of Undeath
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-11 11:09 PM
Yuck :)

Definately evil. Well done! Go to Comment
Of Dreams
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2009-09-06 07:44 AM
This is very good - though it feels more like a start of immense potential!

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Of Demons
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-18 11:53 AM
This is an excellent submission - I was thinking of something along these lines.

I think I will be adding to this one soon. Go to Comment
The Prophecies of Hope
Plots  (Travel)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-30 07:15 PM
Interesting!

How did the campaign pan out in practice? Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-30 08:05 PM
Not bad but needs work. How does it attack? From the statement "each with a varying set of scrolls it has absorbed and can use" I assume it casts the spells on the scrolls that it is made of, but generally scrolls are one-shot items, so as it casts spells, it is going to weaken itself.


As others have said - flesh it out, and I think the votes will go up. Go to Comment
Aoktholian Swarm
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-17 09:52 PM
Muro's comment captures this perfectly for me. See Bioshock infinite for other psychotic crows...
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The Murdered Young
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-09 01:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Yeaken
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-11 10:15 PM
The hollow horn thing, while cool, really takes me out of the reality of the submission. A horn hollow enough to produce the tuba sound would be large and thin-walled, and not the best for use as a weapon. Perhaps if it were positioned as a magical creature it would work better.




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