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Lady Joya
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:02 PM
A neat character, though portraying something that lives by eating sentient being as something other then evil does not sit well for me.

I could definitely see her used as something other then an opponent though.

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The Family Ancestral Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-19 09:16 AM
Certainly a great take of the Dancing Sword idea. This could easily be made rare and not cookie cutter by the need of specific knowledge, as well as for the sacrificing person needing to be exceptionally skilled.

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Gray The Waunderer
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-12 06:41 PM
Quite interesting... Go to Comment
Tourniquet Tunic
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-14 03:53 AM
Already have such a codex Items of War, formerly known as Armory Arcanis- am linking! Go to Comment
Tourniquet Tunic
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-19 06:32 PM
To balance the item, one might note that real Tourniquets must be relaxed regularly to keep the limb from dying. Failure to do so results in the need to amputate the limb. Still, it will save lives at the cost of more surviving cripples.

This item is also easily adapted to Sci Fi by making it a Nanotech device, and being reasonably plausible in my opinion. Go to Comment
Look Before You Leap
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-04 09:10 AM
There have been some interesting comments here, perhaps some of the best BH conversations I have seen in a while, but I am in agreement with Wulfhere.

Frankly, if the youths attacked, its on them. Treating them with kid gloves feels a bit like imposing modernity. Raiding is not an innocent activity, as you could ask any target the youth party _would_ be able to handle.

And yes, this would cause diplomatic issues, and this seems to be by far the most likely outcome.

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Band of the Revenant
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 10:53 AM
Wonder why I can't add XP to this particular update - the plot idea is great! :) Go to Comment
Band of the Revenant
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-26 07:01 PM
Quite awesome :) Go to Comment
Felice D'Wynn
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2013-09-23 12:53 PM
This character screams Anime at the top of its lungs. Other than that, Moon has said what needs to be said.

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NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-29 07:41 AM
This is really useful NPC.

This sort of thing leads me to my beliefs that a magic-system should almost be more about skills then 'Spell X does Y' type magic, which often make cures for curses, etc, simply too easy.

But I digress. I really like this take on a dragon. Kudos! Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-05 06:34 AM
Ooookayyyy..... (backs away...) Go to Comment
The Ice Cave
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2010-10-08 01:55 PM

This could be a real boon to a kingdom if large enough. Rather then a storage chamber, it could be used as an ice-maker.  With enough capacity, you ave now given a kingdom refrigeration and increased their food preservation abilities dramatically, which an in turn change population and power balance.


Simple yet very powerful. Nicely done!

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Elenus, The Sword of Truth
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-03 12:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lord Niavon
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-04 08:54 AM

I think elaborating on the madness would have brought more to the table. Right now we have an Alexander/Napoleon type leader and hints he is going mad. Giving more insight to spring off with would be good.

Edit: See the linked subs to properly position this here leader.

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To Die For Love
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-22 09:00 AM
Man, Devious!

I love it :)

What happened to the child? Just because she died doesn't mean the child does... (Though He needs to find a wetnurse...) Go to Comment
The staff of internal pain
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-26 06:56 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Glacier Mail
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 10:19 AM
I love the visuals on this one. Go to Comment
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-14 12:07 PM
Cool - very useful indeed. Go to Comment
When a Lord Goes Mad
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-04 08:58 AM
I came to this sub from the Lord Niavon submission, this is a good plot for the late campaign. I like it! Go to Comment
Celsia Frostblossom
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2008-05-14 10:44 AM
I'd say its a corruption of Celsius - who was a swede. Could not find where the last name Celsius came from, though it sounds roman. Go to Comment
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