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Delgora Maldine
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-02 05:41 PM
Agree with CP on this one. There have been many worse.... Go to Comment
Delgora Maldine
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 06:42 PM
Take the advice given please and consider reworking it.

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The Staff of Silence
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-11 10:58 AM
A neat item - good backstory as said. Couple of things stuck out for me:

"Wizard named Felonious, who had been sentenced to a long prison term" Felonious?

Inconsistent/non-existing spaces after periods.






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Dalme The Tinker
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-13 09:41 AM
This is a great NPC. I like his potential and what you can do with him. Go to Comment
New Hope
Locations  (City)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-06 10:35 AM
Well, I would think that if fracking is able to create earthquakes, a hurricane with the huge movement of water, and subsequent adjustment of load could have an impact.

If the city had been built below sea-level - an insane idea on an island - then a hurricane could easily, and permanently flood it, for the water would have no place to go. Now, if the ground beneath the city was riddled with mines, its possible the flooding could add enough weight to collapse the mines and drop the city deeper.

Amethyst occurs in rocks with volcanic or igneous origin, so the ground beneath the city would be quite strong unless it was heavily mined, contained extensive open spaces (empty magma chambers) or both. Perhaps the island itself is an extinct volcano. Go to Comment
New Hope
Locations  (City)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-06 10:35 AM
An interesting location.. Go to Comment
Miracle Forest
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:51 PM
These are good, though seem a bit too powerful to be a mortal creation. Go to Comment
Queen Emily Coloman
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-29 07:30 AM
This is a really good sub of yours that should see the light!

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Barrenfield Acorns
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:57 PM
Perhaps it is nothing to do with roots. Real oaks count on squirrels to spread their acorns, so at first the squirrels happly spread the acorns. However, since they are not nutritious they eventually all starve. Once there are no squirrels nearby, the spreading stops unless happenstance - water, humans, spreads one to where squirrels can again carry out their duty:) Go to Comment
Combusting Shrews
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-02 07:09 AM
Need normal sized ones to use as sling ammunition!

Cool! :) Go to Comment
Beligitor
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-03 10:38 AM
Interestingly, it has the feel of the really old Arthur tales, both good and bad, light on the whys. Some of the things Merlin did not seem to make sense with what was described in the tale.

So, it was a nice sword that resisted being turned to junk by the Wizard, and then to stop the battle (since it would I guess cause lots of collateral damage?) this third party sucked himself, the knight and the evil wizard into the blade?

Now the blade will draw energy to the trapped Evil Wizard, while the 'good' wizard will try and stop this by strengthening the wielder's tie to the weapon?


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Monsoon and Typhoon
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2010-08-25 07:01 PM
Indeed - an awesome post I had not seen before.

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The Amulet of Looda Chriss
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-09 06:39 PM
HOH can be put by anyone who wants to and earned the right to do so. We might not agree, so we can vote down if we like. I don't think this is challenge worthy. Low votes, sure.

I think this sub may not be perfect, but it is good enough not to be buried by bad votes.

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Danrick's Sword
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-11 07:13 PM
I had wondered about the 'curse' - I went over the text and saw nothing that said the wielder was effected, only the target.

Since the man was old, him dying did not seem untoward, but clarification would be nice ("Died naturally in his sleep, a satisfied smile accross his face..."),etc. Go to Comment
Princess Matriax's Defender
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-08 09:20 PM
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Gem of Xzar
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-09 10:14 PM
A great mythic piece. As for the power of the item the description is suitably vague as to its effects as to render that argument somewhat overwrought - the GM can easily tune it.

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The Steel Cathexis
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-01 05:34 PM
Given many of the other posts which get beaten on, this one is not so bad, and I like some of the description.

"While not bearing the elaborate filigrees or meticulously cut gemwork of the lavish court-swords favored by aristocrats, the Steel Cathexis is an ostentatious weapon."

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The Steel Cathexis
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-17 10:39 AM
And the summary reinforces this. The Barbarian Horde called it!

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Ring of Justice
Items  (Jewelry)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-12 07:02 PM
Interesting... Go to Comment
The Evil Brothers
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-31 01:37 PM
I concur with the comments here. Its not awful, but it also does not really bring anything to the table. Its okay to reuse, but you really need to do a better job scraping off the serial numbers.



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