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The Order of Restraint
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-23 08:02 PM
Interesting, though I am reminded of the sharks in Finding Nemo.... Personally I think vampires should not be sugar-coated. They are anti-life and evil. But that's my opinion.

There are blatant spelling errors that should be addressed and some of the sentence structures need rewor - like
"In a world where rival vampires would like to get you out of the way to be on the safe side and where the inquisition hunts anything not 'natural' not to mention fledgling vampire slayers trying to start on less vicious vamps first they find there is safety in numbers. "

This should be three sentences - too much is being conveyed in one.

My advice - Take Moonhunter's Advice wholeheartedly. Go to Comment
Magic on the Wing
Items  (Other)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-18 11:39 AM
This has sat uncommented for far too long. This is great stuff - I love the idea of falconry.

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The Thrillkill Society
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Local)
valadaar's comment on 2015-10-29 02:36 PM
Not bad - this would work best with 'gritty' rulesets where surprise is crushing, since surprise seems to be their biggest weapon. Go to Comment
The Duelists of Aoh Chiane
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-30 04:02 PM
A random result which is quite nice - it has a very oriental feel to it.
Crouching dragon hidden dragon come to mind though without quite the magical feel. Go to Comment
The Crying Ones
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-13 10:06 AM
So evocative. Terrible that there are so many opportunities for these to arise.
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The Crying Ones
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-13 11:18 AM
Are you following me? :) Go to Comment
The Sailmaker's Needle
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-11 11:34 AM
Another quality item here - and the 'attraction' to storms could be very subtle. It would be those captains who are a little more tolerant of bad weather that would be in greater danger, for - magic or no - a storm takes time to come close.

It may be subtle enough that the locals who use these sails simply build sturdier ships over time - shipwrights who built too frail ships would be eventually driven out.

I like it ! Go to Comment
Hammar's Code
Systems  (Political)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-06 11:19 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-10 04:11 PM
I do like your take on Demons. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-26 11:08 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-03 07:39 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cloak of Sweet Devotion
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-21 09:55 AM
This is a good item!

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How to be a better critic!
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Players)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-05 11:16 AM
I think this one needs to come to the fore again. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-19 10:22 AM
I like this variation on the Minotaur Go to Comment
Get a Plot
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-13 01:23 PM
This is a great one - I think we could add lot more here!
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The Starsword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-06 09:30 AM
An decent item, though what does it specifically do if you make an earnest attack on the living? Bounce off? Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2015-09-17 11:06 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Shadow Shrine
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-07 02:39 PM
Pretty cool. I got a modern day equivilent that (tries) to project christmas and halloween images on the house. Would never have though it could be used this way. Excellent! Go to Comment
The Sword of Fire
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-12 08:45 PM
I like this odd item! Go to Comment
Silly traps
Dungeons  (Any)   (Traps)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-24 02:43 PM
Sylvyr's comment is for me the most likely use for this for me. A good list that could stand being added to. :)
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Theology 101

       By: rickster

A cult's theology is binding on the god involved: it is possible for that god to believe (and see, just like Winston Smith in 1984) that other gods are mythical, or jumped-up demons, or failing older spirits, even while those gods actually exist and thrive and act in the cosmos, even while working against him.

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