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The Qurasooth
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-04 08:50 PM
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Bardag Ol
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-18 12:39 PM
Disagree with Moon on this one - the History adds to a good physical description of the city - It certainly conjured up a City Image to me.

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Mathom, the God of Delays
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-13 12:21 PM
Now no one get too hasty now! Go to Comment
Mathom, the God of Delays
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2011-02-02 03:11 PM

Heh, commented in 2007! but did not vote till now.  Hmmm. 

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The Strong Orcish Gods
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-19 11:34 AM
Good Solid pantheon! Go to Comment
Sextant of the Soul
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-07-25 12:01 PM
This conjures up lots of images. Its really cool! Go to Comment
The Royle Quartermasters
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-01 08:57 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Leering Skulls
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-09 07:46 PM
A very logicial and useful organization! Go to Comment
The Greater Comet Academy
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2016-10-17 01:12 PM
This is an excellent piece of lore to add to a world. Very useful. Go to Comment
Replacements for Hobbits
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-04 09:09 AM
The Gelflings in the Dark Crystal fill a similar role to Hobbits I think, and get up getting it far worse.

I think this idea is a good one as Moonhunter said, and could have benefited from some more 'marketing' :)
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House of the Duck
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-13 07:46 PM
A great tavern with lots of useful details and ideas, if a little anachronistic. Go to Comment
Blue Comet Mercenary Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 03:19 PM
This is a great idea - though of course it only works on worlds where mages are common enough to be used in this manner.

That said, there are a lot of those about.

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Chain Spear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2015-09-17 11:03 AM
If we ignore the physical impracticability of the weapon - which can be hand waved away like the 6-round limitation of a cowboy's revolver, it has decent visuals.

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NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-29 10:42 AM
Its well detailed and written, but the story is well travelled. The druidic influence is nice, but it really needed something to pull it away from its very strong inspiration.

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Ivory armor
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-09-20 02:39 PM
Okay, armour created from Ivory is not too far-fetched - lacquered wood and boiled leather both make reasonable armours. I could see alchemists involved in the preparation of the substance but not in the actual construction of the armour.

Apart from Moons comment on Ivory being bone (its not, similar, but different) his comments are spot on.

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Moonpool Vault
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Rooms/ Halls)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-06 09:57 AM
An ancient 100(ish) word sub. Go to Comment
Ash Children
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-02 02:36 PM
Really good! Go to Comment
Arkath the Contractor
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-23 09:00 PM
Yes, quite nice Ria! Go to Comment
War Forbici
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-03-17 01:44 PM
Hmm, if the outer edges are instead sharpened, this weapon would gain more usability, being usable somewhat conventionally as a normal, if heavy, sword. This is especially important since the mechanical complexity of the blade could fail after a hard parry or the like. Fully open, the blades would cover a wide area and might even serve as a weapon-breaker.

Odd, flamboyant with definite downsides, it still has value. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-12 08:42 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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       By: Cheka Man

Historicly, we have had plenty of rl groups like the Taliban and the Puritans who supressed anything which was in any way fun. What if there was some group that was the opposite? (which in time would cause problems of it's own for the civilians under their control.)

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