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Cardinal Luther
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-17 12:10 PM
This is original! An NPC that comes in a bottle. I like this idea..

I wouldn't bother with the phylacteries. Its magic - no need to create a storage container for memories, and I think it unnecessarily complicates the core idea. If you must, perhaps it takes over a small portion of the pill-popper's own mind to store its memories, which could then potentially 'leak' into the user's own consciousness.
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The Marcas
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-18 09:05 AM
Yes Cheka - they would make good pets for someone of power should they manage to figure out what they are/were :) Go to Comment
The Province of Ardamien
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2016-12-15 11:20 AM
A very well detailed post, and I also really like the names as well.

Great stuff!
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The Province of Silmar
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-05 09:51 AM
A good location with lots of details. Reminds me of Decathros.
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Music of Mordalin
Systems  (Artistic/Performance)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-01 01:16 PM
Quite nice.
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Kazi Weapons
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-15 12:09 PM
Good detail, but I can't see an entire race/tribe that shuns missile weapons faring well against one that does. Go to Comment
Yr, the Flaming Sun
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-16 01:05 PM


How do you pronounce Yr? Yaaar? Yer? Ear? :)



A very good desert god!

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The Epic of the Howler
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Historical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-17 09:03 AM
Most impressive! Go to Comment
The Qurasooth
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-04 08:50 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Bardag Ol
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-18 12:39 PM
Disagree with Moon on this one - the History adds to a good physical description of the city - It certainly conjured up a City Image to me.

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Mathom, the God of Delays
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-13 12:21 PM
Now no one get too hasty now! Go to Comment
Mathom, the God of Delays
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2011-02-02 03:11 PM


Heh, commented in 2007! but did not vote till now.  Hmmm. 


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The Strong Orcish Gods
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-19 11:34 AM
Good Solid pantheon! Go to Comment
Sextant of the Soul
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-07-25 12:01 PM
This conjures up lots of images. Its really cool! Go to Comment
The Royle Quartermasters
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-01 08:57 PM
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The Leering Skulls
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-09 07:46 PM
A very logicial and useful organization! Go to Comment
The Greater Comet Academy
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2016-10-17 01:12 PM
This is an excellent piece of lore to add to a world. Very useful. Go to Comment
Replacements for Hobbits
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-04 09:09 AM
The Gelflings in the Dark Crystal fill a similar role to Hobbits I think, and get up getting it far worse.

I think this idea is a good one as Moonhunter said, and could have benefited from some more 'marketing' :)
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House of the Duck
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-13 07:46 PM
A great tavern with lots of useful details and ideas, if a little anachronistic. Go to Comment
Blue Comet Mercenary Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 03:19 PM
This is a great idea - though of course it only works on worlds where mages are common enough to be used in this manner.

That said, there are a lot of those about.

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