A decent adventure start.

 

I agree with Pieh on this one.  I like this as it could be a campaign affecting incident - religious schisms are frequent drivers of conflict.

 

Collections agents - now that could be a good job for a bunch of PCs - having to walk the fine line between legitimacy and larceny.

I think combining Strolen's with Ria's suggestions would make this more generally usable.

A good starter for an adventure, for any timeline.

An interesting concept, reminds me in of Nim in a fashion.  While not an extensive sun in itself, it opens the gateway to a great wealth of possibilities.

A nice start, but I really would like to see more.

I completely concur with ephemeralstability Go to Comment

Great simple starter! Right ready to go!

I think this needs to be finished - it seems incomplete.

This is nifty! Though I would have the PCs need to do more then find the leftovers from battle.

I can only echo Silveressa on this one.  Agree completely with her here.