A decent adventure start.
I agree with Pieh on this one. I like this as it could be a campaign affecting incident - religious schisms are frequent drivers of conflict.
Collections agents - now that could be a good job for a bunch of PCs - having to walk the fine line between legitimacy and larceny.
I think combining Strolen's with Ria's suggestions would make this more generally usable.
A good starter for an adventure, for any timeline.
An interesting concept, reminds me in of Nim in a fashion. While not an extensive sun in itself, it opens the gateway to a great wealth of possibilities.
A nice start, but I really would like to see more.
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Great simple starter! Right ready to go!
I think this needs to be finished - it seems incomplete.
This is nifty! Though I would have the PCs need to do more then find the leftovers from battle.
I can only echo Silveressa on this one. Agree completely with her here.