I have seen many of the linked subs, but never the original. This is a great submission and can be used just about anywhere. Very well done! Go to Comment

Update: I think votes should decide this one. Not great, but not awful enough to shelve. Go to Comment

Could be good with a LOT more work. Go to Comment

This character illustrates the plight of any half-breed, racial or species, creed or socioeconomic. So long people dehumanize/(de-sentiantize?) the outsider, these people will emerge.

Apart from that common angle, she doesn't really have much else to identify her and make me care that much. She is more a type then a person. Go to Comment

Okay, but very thin. Go to Comment

Yes, a very good adventure - nicely done! Go to Comment

Excellent! Go to Comment

As said, well described physically - and there is value in that - but its abilities need work.

Its interesting that your comment is larger than the submission itself :)
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Tis pretty cool! Go to Comment

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The Eternal Soldier. A good trope, and decently done here.

Commented on for Comment Challenge!

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This location is both interesting and logical, though things seem a bit too tidy for these folks.
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Only voted Go to Comment

Agreed - Vehicular Paintball is not a bad idea, though this is more of an idea seed then a submission. Go to Comment

Into its 10th year. There is still an outline of cool here. I could see an eccentric might use this cloak to prank those who came to see him.

"He said meet us here.. What is that smell, Oh Gawd...." (technicolor yawn...)
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An amusing sub. Not that useful but I like it. I think it could use a little more work. Go to Comment

Heh, this is evil. Been used a lot of times in a million places (cartoons, sitcoms, etc) so it is a classic gimick. Go to Comment

Cool item! Druidic types do need more interesting items. Go to Comment

Good solid NPC and interesting. Go to Comment

The chalk outline view is interesting, but does not seem to mesh with the idea that the torch is putting off black light that only the bearer can see.

A bit confusing, but the idea of a bearer only torch is good.
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