Seems you are back to familiar ground Shadoweagle :). Here's another potion for new and overworked necromancers everywhere... Go to Comment

A very simple, but potentially quite involved plot. Too bad Ria has not been about in a long time. Go to Comment

Plug and play indeed - a lot could be made of this. Go to Comment

Im curious how you planned on this item being used? Go to Comment

A simple but effective little boobytrap. No idea why the scroll has any physical protection - seems unrelated to its chief power.

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Good background, good writing. Power level seems a trifle high to me, but that is a minor concern. Go to Comment

Nice one! Go to Comment

Good idea. Needs more meat :) Go to Comment

Excellent! Go to Comment

This conjures up a great image! Good job!

This would be popular in drought-hit regions!
Bottle rockets revenge! Go to Comment

I still find this one amusing.... Go to Comment

I love the tone of this piece. So sad the Captain has not posted in ages :(

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I like this location - your races can be so much more useful if you don't pigeonhole them.
Having races not be typecast as various sized pyschos adds richness and interest to your world.

Nicely done! Go to Comment

Rickster said it precisely. Really awesome Scras!
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Yes, this is very good!!!! Go to Comment

Agree with Wulf. Basic concept of a merman-castle is interesting. Why it got sunk in detail would be good. Why did they anger the gods? Are the inhabitants the cursed decendants of the original human inhabitants, not given 'proper' tailed forms like normal mermen (and as such, they would be shunned by the 'real' merman, who do not need artifical tails.) Go to Comment

This could have benefited from a short summary sub to describe the character, and then a linked piece of fiction to go into detail.

There is a very strong Anime feel to this one, both good and bad.

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I see Skylark was back almost a year ago. I hope you kept writing - there is potential in yours! Go to Comment