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Crest of the Stormhammer
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-07 03:20 PM
This has a fair amount of potential, and a decent backstory. The powers seem a little high, but can be considered to be the exaggeration of legend.

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Collin's Confusing Puzzle
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-11 03:41 PM
This is nifty too. I would likely be somewhat irrational with it myself - without the magic influence. I take offense if I'm defeated by one of these stupid little puzzles :)
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The Star of Breezes
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-11 03:38 PM
I could see these being focii for air elemental magic too.
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Soilturner of the Spring
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 12:21 PM
Cool - an excellent origin for a magic item! Go to Comment
City Image - Bridgedale AKA The River Wall
Locations  (City)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-15 11:56 AM
I like this place, especially the combined bridge/fortification. Go to Comment
City Image - Punampu
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 11:12 PM
Indeed. This place begs to be used.. Go to Comment
The Rod of Arcane Power
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-11 11:58 AM
Not too powerful?!?
One bolt contains immense energy - wikipedia says about 5 Billion joules, or the equivalent of 146 liters of gasoline- and that seems low to me.

Now, the rod stores up a week of such strikes? At 1 bolt every 3 seconds....

clicky clicky clicky.

1000 Tejajoules.

Or, the same amount of energy in a 250kt nuclear warhead.

I can't imagine the amount of manna this amount of real energy would convert to.

A very powerful item.







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City Image - Canvas City
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-03 09:06 PM
The dragon landlord is a great touch and makes this place. Go to Comment
City Image - The Imperial city of Malcaresh
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-05 12:46 PM
Awesome - many of these cities deserve to see the light of day, and even better, used! Go to Comment
City Image - Walkabout Creek
Locations  (City)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2016-07-22 11:02 AM
Some of the details are odd, but I like the image this one conjures. A place where huge amounts of such stone would be a Wonder of the first order.

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City Image - Bronzalia
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-14 08:38 PM
This paints a nice and very clear picture of the city. Go to Comment
City Image - Pier Point
Locations  (City)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-23 02:53 PM
Its good, but does not really provide a city image in the manner that the whole City Image thread seems to request. A clear visual description should have started this off, and then led to other details.

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City Image - Bayaallatalstonescha
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-19 07:38 PM
I do like the image this paints! Though some linkage to the related subs would be nice.
How long is an Elventi? 6' or so?

Can someone enter the water or is the containment feild 'solid' to all objects? Go to Comment
City Image - BroadMound
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-18 12:14 PM
Not bad, though I'd have a hard time considering a mound that small - 11 acres - a city. Maybe add a 0 or two :)

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City Image - Payan - City of the Priest Kings
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-18 10:17 AM
Sadly, the link is broken, and it really did need it. Go to Comment
The Boots of Storms
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 08:48 AM
I could see some tragic hero barrelling into the close ranks of his enemy, the sky heavy and brooding. He is being battled, overwhelmed by numbers even with the booms of the boots. Then the main villain closes with him and defeats the hero. As he yanks his serrated blade out of the dying hero, he notices the shiny boots.

The next moment, a lightning bolt crashes down, killing hero, villain, and many others nearby. The event is viewed as divine intervention by the Hero's allies, inspiring them to surge forth and route the enemy. Go to Comment
Scepter of Inganno
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-17 09:50 AM
I certainly approve of items that are not _free_ to use. Perhaps one could even find those who would volunteer for such duty. Go to Comment
Dugfar's Dangerous Dwarven Drilling Dirigible
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-04 01:34 PM
I think this is quite amusing and helps explain how the Dwarves can have so many blasted tunnels! :)

I don't have a problem with spell-using dwarves - the Norse dwarves were pretty magical.

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The Clasp of Reincarnation
Items  (Jewelry)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2015-02-19 11:45 AM
Not sure it is clear to me:

"Over the course of a week or so, the personality and beliefs (but not the memories or knowledge) that the clasp has is transposed to the person who possesses it."

So, WearerMemory = ClaspMemory


" Once that is done, the clasp takes on the personality and beliefs of the wearer, however, the change is very gradual because the person has already fully adopted the clasp’s personality."

Ok, so ClaspMemory = Wearermemory.

Or, simply put, the wearer adopts the Clasp's personality, and the Clasp simply goes through eternity changing people to the first memory it captured?

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The Rebec
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-22 09:55 PM
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