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Followers of Kasal
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-25 01:23 PM
This is great - I could see lots of intrigue in a realm where the covens had high status. Also, the Watchers must really hate wars.
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Clan Ironspirit
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-02 08:59 AM
These folks have a lot of campaign use - nicely done!
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Blade Hands
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-09 01:51 PM
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Headband of Swift Thought
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-12 11:18 AM
I like this item, and not knowing anything about Talislanta (apart from No Elves, right? :)) I saw nothing game-specific about it.

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The Potion of Explosive Entrails
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-11 08:53 AM
This is perfectly gobliniod in its nature - using one of the few advantages that race has.

I see no need to into its details or how it works - its a potion in a fantasy realm. Where you trying to shoehorn it into modern or sci-fie, then you need to start wiggling.

Good job!

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The Kamuinji Sabre
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-22 02:16 PM
A reasonable item if sparse. Muro's and Moons detailed comments are good.

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Sizzler
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-16 12:48 PM
I enjoyed this sub. It would be an interesting challenge on how to honestly work this into an adventure. Go to Comment
Nial Ironspirit
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-30 12:43 PM
Great stuff - all awesome! This kind of person can find their way into any campaign.
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Clathrates
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-23 08:57 PM
A most excellent companion to the Mines. I like this magic theory and it aligns with some of my thoughts on the matter.
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Auchinduin Deep Iron Mine
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-23 08:53 PM
Could have sworn I voted and commented on this awesome location. Addressed.

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Scroll Gholem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-09 09:19 PM
Perhaps they could acquire a personality drawn from the 'voices' of the books authors. If one arose from a specific persons' works, they might have a personality similar to that author and gain more then primal motivations.

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The Maidenhead Wasp
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 10:27 PM
This is a really novel critter. An unusual lifecycle to say the least :)


I don't agree with Moon on their size. I do not see any need to rationalize giant insects in a fantasy post however. Go to Comment
The Backbreaker
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Heroic)
valadaar's comment on 2015-09-15 01:35 PM
Simple and brutal. From a time when men were greater then now. Power personified.

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Bone Bow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 02:37 PM
Not bad, if a little inconsistent (The bard who made the item is forgotten, but two of his party members are known.)

As said by others (and from my own experinces), delete the stats completely and just leave the verbal descriptions of it's effects. Go to Comment
Troll Belt
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-18 03:26 PM
I like the idea of the trollgut belt, perhaps as an orcish invention. Go to Comment
Troll Gloves
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-22 03:07 PM
I think it would be trivial to add enough downsides to make wearing the entire collection not a desirable thing. I like the simplicity of these. Go to Comment
Censer of Mal'Mennoth
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-27 02:27 PM
A good nasty artifact of evil. Excellent.... Go to Comment
Censer of Mal'Mennoth
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-15 09:04 AM
Time flies, but a good idea is a good idea :) Go to Comment
HomeTrees
Locations  (Other)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 11:10 PM
A great treatment of the elf homes. Some rather long city names:). Go to Comment
The Hunter's Neckband
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 10:45 PM
The backstory really sells this one. A good job. Go to Comment
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You're In Deep

       By: Murometz

The PCs are exploring the catacombs beneath a Colosseum-in-Rome type of structure, when they come across a foul-smelling, stagnant, ankle-deep with algae, public mass latrine. Countless urinals of marble, line this rather large chamber equally crafted of marble. Whatever system of plumbing once worked here, has not in many years. Old graffiti lines the stained,dirty walls, prominently bolded are such intellectual poetic musings as, "Urine For It Now", "I Pee Therefore It Comes" and "Now Urine Trouble".

A few moments after the PCs get to take in this unpleasant location, they hear the low rumbling of ancient plumbing and rather large Urine Elemental rises like a great, wet, wave of filth to attack them. The creature reeks and exudes noxious debilitating fumes, while its liquid strikes burn flesh like acid.

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