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The Ink Drinkers
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-27 10:02 AM
Have not voted on this before. A travesty I have now corrected.

Fully deserves its golden title. Go to Comment
Keldorian Church aka Church of Creator
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-05 12:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Perfumed Veil
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-08-10 03:07 PM
Good item! Go to Comment
Kren, the Name of a Card
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-12 11:40 AM
This is useful - I like the cards as manna batteries. Go to Comment
Kaboo, Gladdys, and their Dim-Witted Nephew
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-30 08:57 AM
This is great stuff - these rumors are amazingly well written.

Get your ass back here Muro and post stuff like this. Soo awesome! Go to Comment
Followers of Xukthalas
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2017-07-24 02:52 PM
Yes, I remember discussions about beings with this idea of neutrality being in fact elements of Chaos. What can be more chaotic then this behaviour? It may make sense for the organisation at the large scale moving to moderate the world, but at the level of the individual it equates to insanity. A person who may act one day to build an orphanage, and then a week later burn it down?

And a King would be well advised to kill any of this order who entered his kingdom, their advice is not for his benefit but the Balance. Only a fool with the same world-view as them would heed their advice.

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Followers of Sethalis
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-08 01:16 PM
Hmm, this sub is really misnamed. It introduces the god, mentions his strict rules for his followers, but the rules are not given. His followers are not the focus of this submission.
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Followers of Perteum
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-14 11:39 AM
A decent deity. It is missing a spark as Moon mentions. Go to Comment
Followers of Kameakias
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-06 08:05 AM
An interesting idea for a god, though a rather lot is hinted at than detailed.

What abilities do his followers gain - they are mentioned as being powerful, but no details are given.
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Followers of Kasal
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-25 01:23 PM
This is great - I could see lots of intrigue in a realm where the covens had high status. Also, the Watchers must really hate wars.
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Clan Ironspirit
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-02 08:59 AM
These folks have a lot of campaign use - nicely done!
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Blade Hands
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-09 01:51 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Headband of Swift Thought
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-12 11:18 AM
I like this item, and not knowing anything about Talislanta (apart from No Elves, right? :)) I saw nothing game-specific about it.

Good Job! Go to Comment
The Potion of Explosive Entrails
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-11 08:53 AM
This is perfectly gobliniod in its nature - using one of the few advantages that race has.

I see no need to into its details or how it works - its a potion in a fantasy realm. Where you trying to shoehorn it into modern or sci-fie, then you need to start wiggling.

Good job!

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The Kamuinji Sabre
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-22 02:16 PM
A reasonable item if sparse. Muro's and Moons detailed comments are good.

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Sizzler
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-16 12:48 PM
I enjoyed this sub. It would be an interesting challenge on how to honestly work this into an adventure. Go to Comment
Nial Ironspirit
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-30 12:43 PM
Great stuff - all awesome! This kind of person can find their way into any campaign.
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Clathrates
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-23 08:57 PM
A most excellent companion to the Mines. I like this magic theory and it aligns with some of my thoughts on the matter.
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Auchinduin Deep Iron Mine
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-23 08:53 PM
Could have sworn I voted and commented on this awesome location. Addressed.

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Scroll Gholem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-09 09:19 PM
Perhaps they could acquire a personality drawn from the 'voices' of the books authors. If one arose from a specific persons' works, they might have a personality similar to that author and gain more then primal motivations.

I like this creature. Go to Comment
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The Forest of Flesh

       By: Kid Cannibal

The party has found the source of the strange creatures roaming the countryside. The rift in this reality glows with a silver hue, rippling with the wind but never moving. They step through and are immediately assaulted with the scent of rotting meat, some have to muster all their strength not to vomit. Strange cries similar to the beasts the party had faced before can be heard in the distance. Looking around, they see they are in a forest of grey and red rather than the normal brown and green. The trees are sticky to the touch and writhe, perhaps to get away or perhaps as a warning.

The deeper the party goes, the more the forest seems to slither and move underfoot. The cries get closer and more numerous. Creatures lurk in the shadows, all the same color of their surroundings. Whatever the party came in here for, they had better do it fast.

The forest of flesh is waking up, and it is so very hungry.

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