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The Sand Box
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-22 11:18 AM
The external link is broken, so this sub needs reworked somehow. Go to Comment
The Acid Barrier
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-22 11:16 AM
Since in most fantasy campaign, detailed knowlage of magnetics would be metagaming, I find this puzzle a bit out of place and overpowered. Again, I have to ask the question "Why was this made?". Go to Comment
Battleship Combination Lock
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-22 11:02 AM
I agree with Moonhunter. Puzzles can be used, but they need to make sense and not exist for their own sake. The question is Why?

Some PC's might be cool with it though. Go to Comment
Dead Pepper
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-11 09:32 PM
The Folk (Fae,etc) would have fun with these as well.

Hmmm. What if you were to ferment these babies? Go to Comment
The Deck of the White Sorcerer
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-25 10:32 AM
Quite interesting, but I think it needs a little more work. I'm having a bit of trouble following it completely.

Some of the new formatting options would greatly help this post. Go to Comment
The Shocking Pattern
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-23 08:17 PM
This is interesting, though I'd like to know more about Why. Go to Comment
The Hand (and the Silver Stars)
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-30 06:33 PM
I really like the interplay between these sides. Great job! (I like the Stars healing side more though). Go to Comment
Kingdom of Kerrabar
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-30 06:31 PM
What Moon said. Go to Comment
Silver Stars (and The Hand)
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-30 06:30 PM
No idea why it has so few votes - this is an excellent organization to add to a campaign. The Star is easily adapted to other campaigns. Go to Comment
Guild of the unblinking eye
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-05 01:33 PM
This is start of something, I would make them a bit less reliable - more real. Perhaps they started as the secret police of some great empire, and outlived that empire. Go to Comment
Aadda
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-30 06:26 PM
Who - there is a LOT to Hewdamia :)

Could you like the race %'s to the appropriate subs? This city is well described as it is, but to implement the new link methods would help it (in my opinion... ) Go to Comment
Choke Horror
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-16 12:12 PM
Not bad - strikes me as a New Take on the Roper (An AD&D monster), at least vaguely. I like the backstory. Go to Comment
Dark Unicorn
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-04 09:05 PM
I would like to think that an iconically good creature such as a unicorn would not easily follow this path, even in the case of the violent death of their mate. A subset may fall into darkness, but I would not think all.

Still, a logical origin for such creatures. Go to Comment
Order of the Wheel
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-16 01:10 PM
Not bad in context of the codex, but short for a submission. Go to Comment
Guilds of the Water
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-01 06:17 PM
Perhaps this should be worked into a larger scroll? Go to Comment
Guilds of the Water
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-22 10:39 AM
I think stubs can be attached to codicies now. Go to Comment
Guilds of Antioch
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-30 06:19 PM
Interesting. A good listing, but it feels incomplete. I can't put my finger on what it is though... Go to Comment
Societies, Guilds, and Groups
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 03:06 PM
This well populated sub requires more votes!

:) Go to Comment
Blue Fires
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
valadaar's comment on 2010-02-11 10:00 AM
An interesting creature. I could seem them having use in medicine and refrigeration as well :P

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Selvaks
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-19 12:13 PM
Not a bad critter, but I have a problem with natural creatures which specialize in human prey.
A human population providing enough food for a bunch of squirrels to evolve eating them is not very likely - the group would either move away or attempt to exterminate the squirrels. Either would not provide a very stable diet. A magical creation or unique mutation I could believe. Go to Comment
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