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Eye Of Enhancing Degeneration
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 01:43 PM
Well, if you edit it again, I'll hold my vote off until then.

Currently, the english is rather bad, and I'd want to know why this particular Sphinx's death put out the gods enough for them to intercede. Go to Comment
The Leviathan Pool
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-05 11:56 AM
Well damn, this is good! Go to Comment
The Lost City of Paldor
Dungeons  (Water)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-02 10:32 AM
A neat location - I am certainly in favour.

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Simeon the Caretaker
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2009-04-12 07:44 PM
A very solid, though nasty, NPC. Perfect for what he is. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-10 02:50 PM
An amusing read and an interesting character. It brought to me visions of Heavy Metal in fact (the movie). Go to Comment
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-18 07:59 AM
A decent idea, and the secret would work better if the village was isolated. Go to Comment
Buzzards Bay
Locations  (City)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-28 11:14 AM
Great place - can be used in lots of ways. Nice stuff! Go to Comment
Elven Green Tea
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-09 09:44 AM
This is a great and universal idea. This could easily spawn many adventure ideas - think how many voyages pursuit of such commodities in the real world has generated.
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Cloister of the Empty Table
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-25 01:37 PM
I must echo Dozus as well. Am correcting this with a vote. Yes, very creepy and disturbing. Good stuff! Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-17 07:04 PM
If you are looking for a sub which is on the other side of the spectrum - not saying that is where to go, look at the Alun or the Asrok. Mine are overkill, yours need work.

At least make it better then a scroll entry. This entry would fit in a list of '30 Really Minor Races' or a Idea seed.

My big concern is you are not taking any of the advise given already to improve your posts. Not sure why. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2016-11-02 12:11 PM
This submission is much better then it was when the majority of the comments were made. Not bad.

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Ice Caves
Dungeons  (Tundra/ Arctic)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-08 09:37 AM
A good reminder that not all dungeons need to be underground.

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Ouranga, the Tempest-Lord
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-21 11:27 AM
Game of thrones indeed :) He reminds me of the Lannister patriarch Tywin, though even more martial. Obviously his career path has been quite different.

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The Kemlar Healing Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-21 09:23 AM
I personally would make the downsides more random and slower, to give time to deal with it, and to produce more characters who have been impacted by it.

At the risk of being overly 'scientific' - something I dislike when combined with fantasy, I could easily see an aggressive healing potion being capable of inducing quite virulent cancers.

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The Chalice Bearers
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-10 07:49 AM
A great piece of local culture to add depth. I can feel a few ideas forming..
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Changing faces
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-11 08:06 AM
As for precedence - Look no further than Dr. Jekyle and Mr. Hyde. The potion of monsterfacation is not new.

This is a decent plot for a less serious game where some of its 'plot holes' are not too big a deal.

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Rod of Age Switching.
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-26 07:14 PM
A decent item - I'd add a multiple-year 'charge' time to it which would serve to add some complexity. Perhaps it is hidden somewhere 'safe' to charge and the PCs are contacted to retrieve it.

Of course the PCs are bringing more then the rod to the villain - they may be a victim as well. Go to Comment
The Azure Comet Mercenary Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 09:23 PM
I agree also with Scras. That and all of the paragraphs. It almost seemed to be an attempt to be silly.

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Zayarahausc, the Viles of Salt
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-08-14 01:42 PM
I love the style and visuals that go into Captain Penguin's subs. D&D has salt paramentals. These are a wonderful replacement and nicely alien.
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Seyeverasin, the Waning-Moon Musicians
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-20 10:02 PM
I have not yet found a boring submission from Captain Penguin. This one is sutiably odd and mythic. Go to Comment
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       By: ephemeralstability

With regard to the plot "Sleeping Mines of Elathon":

You manage to get the water wheel in the mine working which operates a pump to clear the flooded lower levels. As you explore the dank tunnels of the lower galleries, you can hear the creaking of the wheel above. You enter a low-ceilinged passage and are crawling on your backs, when the creaking stops. The water starts seeping wetly around the back of your head...

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