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The World of the Iron Heart
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2011-03-10 01:24 PM


This is a neat little sub brought up by Random.  Very cool!


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Ardos
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-09 06:52 PM
Update: Take the listed advice, and resubmit it if you can. Go to Comment
The Sword of the Stars
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-09 06:53 PM
Update: Take the commented advice please. Go to Comment
Robe of the Viper
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-12 04:58 PM
A great sub, and holy votecount!
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Blackrose Academy
Locations  (City)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-07 01:30 PM
Good - and would be greatly helped by some plot ideas - perhaps ones that have been played out by your group. Go to Comment
Gator Hunt
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 08:02 PM
An excellent, simple adventure. It could lead to more if the PC's happen to find something interesting while searching the sewers for the monster.
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Coldfire Urn
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-25 02:30 PM
Quite an interesting sub! Excellently told! Go to Comment
Nice to Meet You
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-15 07:01 PM
Looks like we are still waiting for this one to grow. Go to Comment
Regression
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-30 07:11 PM
Truely a work of art... Go to Comment
Blade of Redemption
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 12:50 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Eden
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-25 09:57 AM
My biggest problem with this is that suggestions have been made to improve this that have not been followed. There are numerous problems above and beyond the subject matter:

1. Numerous spelling errors.
2. Capitalization in places
3. Punctuation -Missing apostrophes - shes , commas used as periods. No space following comma in places.

In addition to the other comments, what is special about the two daggers that they deserve names?

Please, when you are given feedback on what whould improve your sub, take it into consideration and rework your sub. You are obviously interested enough to post it in the first place - follow through and make it good! Go to Comment
Eden
NPCs  (Minor)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-25 03:55 PM
You have a point... Just been working the unvoted by me... Go to Comment
Thief of the Queen
Plots  (Nature)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-05 01:49 PM
The comments really are what is interesting here. Gold star indeed. Go to Comment
Benedicte De La Courcel
NPCs  (Major)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-14 11:07 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Generational Stone
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-03 12:41 PM
Hmm, this is neat. Imagine if one of these held a secret you wanted, but would not impart to you willingly. You could wait, a looong time.

You need to link the Uluun to this one.

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The Music box of Mordalin
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-06 07:23 AM
Wow, there are so many wonderful subs in the halls of the Citadel! Go to Comment
Alia duBois
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-03 08:30 AM
A very cool character, the dream of many a teen.





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Amber Rose
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-24 02:16 PM
I like this - it is a perfect quest item - a potential lottery ticket for any landowner with a garden.

A lot can be done with this, since you could make them the principle source of magical healing in your world.

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The Pen of the Fox
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-11 11:57 AM
Um, a mage called Pubis?

Quite powerful item with a utilitarian origin. I could see it existing, but with a more involved origin. Having a faultless forgery tool certainly falls in the wish-fulfilment magic item category akin to invisibility rings and flying items.

A solid 2.0 - OK idea but flawed. It certainly can be used, especially in the hands of a formidable enemy. Go to Comment
The Troll Nose Ring
Items  (Jewelry)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-08-26 11:31 AM
Great idea! You can of course extend this idea to allow trolls to use more powerful magical rings this way. Go to Comment
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