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The Bowmen of Love
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 02:40 PM
Interesting idea - I can see them more as adherants to a love god/godess cult.

And in some ways, it is more moral then arranged marriages :) Go to Comment
The Eyes of Yocasta
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 02:31 PM
So here we have Medieval Secret Service :) Go to Comment
The Tower of Troubles
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-27 01:45 PM
It builds to something that it does not really deliver. First couple paragraphs were good and then it left the rails.

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Order of Serpenthia
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-26 06:35 AM
An awsome idea, aaand, Muro appears to have been drunk. Go to Comment
King's Hands
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 02:29 PM
A good idea!

Could easily lead to other submissions as well. Go to Comment
Guild of Messengers aka Red Caps
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 02:15 PM
Interesting - I would still see that this would be a hazardous job. Sure it is death to kill/interfere with them, but espeically if they were carrying money, many would take the risk.

Which opens up jobs/new guild for escorts. Go to Comment
Order of the Southern Temple
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-09 10:05 PM
Though it illustrates the point, I think this suffers from a lack of subtlety.
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The Brotherhood of Larfu
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 02:10 PM
A good background piece - can be used to flesh out and add intrigue to an otherwise generic Tribal society with minor adjustments to the dieties.

Good job! Go to Comment
Curalon Hestaris
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-01 11:39 AM
Agreed - really good! Go to Comment
The Dolman Copy- a copy of the Malachrite Falcon
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-09 01:59 PM
I suppose this could accidentally turn up at the Garage Sale from Hell..

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Society of Blood
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 01:41 PM
A neat little organization, if a little too squeaky clean for my tastes.

Good work! Go to Comment
The Blades of the Golden Sun
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-16 09:44 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Malachrite Falcon
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-30 02:31 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Silver Phyrus
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 02:07 PM
"..Galaxy Defenders...."

Can't help thinking these folks are medival Men in Black, though that is not necessarily a bad thing. Hmm... Go to Comment
The Rosicrucian Order, AMORC
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-09 10:09 AM
A lightning rod of odd barbarians. :)
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Order of Priori Historicus
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-31 01:18 PM
Subtle and as Muro mentioned, cleanly written. This sparks ideas without over ornamentation. Good Stuff! Go to Comment
Via Humanitae
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-28 07:19 PM
A cool idea - a counter to the oddly egalitarian approach to fantasy races many worlds have. Go to Comment
The Liberators of the Coin
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 02:04 PM
Needs something to distinguish this. Right now what is there is well written, but rather unremarkable. Go to Comment
The Upright Society of Civic Wizards
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-14 02:40 PM
I agree with CM on this one - its a good starting point.

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The Painters Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-09 12:17 PM
I like how this incorporates the divine with what would generally be considered wizardly magic. Go to Comment
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