I really like this idea. Adds details to a culture, especially if it is a local adaptation instead of a world-wide affair. Perhaps these were adopted due to a specific spirit or group of spirits that happens to be haunting this region for generations.
An excellent item! My only negative comment would have been not to use the name Grond. It opens one up to a lot of criticism. It did not affect my vote, but I would expect to be beaten up over a sub I called Excaliber, Gandalf, etc. They are great names, to be sure, but the baggage carried with them would serve to color any such post. Go to Comment
She's a strange one indeed. I could see an entreprising necromancer 'reviving' her daughter for her and gaining her favour, but will eventually have the undead daughter murder the queen... Go to Comment
This is an okay outline, perhaps as an entry for a '30', but it is too terse for a sub. We know he looks like a tinker gone, likes knowledge and has invented a few things. His personality is not explored. Go to Comment