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Order of Priori Historicus
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-31 01:18 PM
Subtle and as Muro mentioned, cleanly written. This sparks ideas without over ornamentation. Good Stuff! Go to Comment
Via Humanitae
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-28 07:19 PM
A cool idea - a counter to the oddly egalitarian approach to fantasy races many worlds have. Go to Comment
The Liberators of the Coin
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-02 02:04 PM
Needs something to distinguish this. Right now what is there is well written, but rather unremarkable. Go to Comment
The Upright Society of Civic Wizards
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-14 02:40 PM
I agree with CM on this one - its a good starting point.

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The Painters Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-09 12:17 PM
I like how this incorporates the divine with what would generally be considered wizardly magic. Go to Comment
Golem Moss
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-07 02:32 PM
I generally find lifeforms that count on magic creatures like golems or the like common enough that things evolve to prey on them rather unlikely. A better explanation is this a weapon built to destroy such creatures, which opens up the Who and the why questions.

So accepting this is a magic weapon to destroy golems, having a side effect of conversion into monsters is somewhat more plausible, but simply leaving a patch of green where once stood a golem, or a half-consumed golem lashing out blindly are less odd to me :)


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An ecological dungeon 2: The Elements
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Ecology)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-24 08:15 PM
Good for reminding one how to make Dungeons more realistic. They need all the help they can get! Go to Comment
Solitaire Spider
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-04 12:28 PM
This is a nasty one, though since underground food is few and far between, I would expect this to lair somewhere close to surface so it could ranger further.

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The horrible and hated Nail Worm
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-20 03:01 PM
Strange beast, but funny! Go to Comment
An ecological dungeon
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Ecology)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-01 06:19 PM
A good Scodex that needs more :) Go to Comment
Shaedra
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-01 06:16 PM
Good solid location. Go to Comment
Spell Crystals
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-17 07:19 PM
I do like this one - good job! Go to Comment
Spell Crystals
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-19 06:28 PM
I think you be would best served to post your questions... Go to Comment
Green Dragon Crescent Moon Swords
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-11 11:57 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Roman Legion Ranks
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (Historical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:18 PM
This is how this should be done. Great job! Go to Comment
Rank Systems
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-12 10:31 AM
This could be a useful codex - I've added Stpehie's excellent new post as it does seem applicable here. Go to Comment
Rank Systems
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2008-09-15 11:02 AM
Okay, now this is becoming a gem! Go to Comment
Culture and Food
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 10:07 PM
Yes, what was the old name? :)
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The Breakfast of Champions
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-20 08:32 AM
This is a neat one! Was not thinking that much at first, but the communal content is awesome! Go to Comment
Path of the Days Gone By
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-06 11:07 AM
Good idea - a little thin, but it is still a school. Go to Comment
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