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The Bosques
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-26 01:04 PM
I am beginning to appreciate shorter submissions, and I think this one accomplishes the job of quickly painting a people. Go to Comment
Abandoned Mines
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-22 12:48 PM
This one is pretty good. Early reference to The Beard Golem here.
https://strolen.com/viewing/Dwarven_Beard_Golem
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Galron Stones
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-01 09:32 AM
I really like this concept, especially since the 'original' becomes a key factor and could easily become the focus of adventure.

eg. An elite unit equipped with enchanted armor and weapons guards the king/dingus/other notable. Due to government incompetence and cost cutting, rather then multiple scattered originals being used to provide the equipment, the entire units' equipment are tied to a single set. This set is fairly well protected, but still represents a single point of failure that could turn the nearly invincible unit into one much easier to defeat.


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30 Rangers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-14 09:52 AM
A good 30.
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The Order of Orders
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-11 10:31 AM


I am of multiple minds on this one - it seems to be a good collection, but there might be other tools available to provide this grouping.



Freetext (order)



Region - Orders of Knighthood - a very specialized region, but perhaps okay.



Favourites Lists - Maybe.



Perhaps if each of the orders was given a brief blurb - even a copy of their summaries - this might improve this sub.



I'm torn.



At the very least , this may serve as a source for one of our new-fangled generators when those are available :)

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Corpse's Revenge
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2006-07-19 07:21 PM
If an already dead/undead corpse could be infected as well, this would allow a really nasty necromancer (are there any other?) to seed a zombie army before a major battle.

Simple zombies would become much more dangerous!

Conversely, it could be used to nasty effect against more powerful corporeal undead (unless the negative energy that animates them is strong enough to kill the spores. Go to Comment
Knights of the Shroud
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-11 01:55 PM
Er, no, based on Scrasamax's response previously...

"No, rather than wearing such decoration, the shrouds are worn "under "their armor and their helms hide their identity".... Go to Comment
Knights of the Shroud
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-11 01:56 PM
Agree with Muro on this - the shrouds are a nice touch.

A travel book I have from the turn of the last century (pre WW-I) indicates that certain orders of monks (Trappist I beleive) work a few minutes each day at digging their own graves in the morning. Go to Comment
30 Barkeepers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-30 01:00 PM
An excellent 30!
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The creatures of Thanethia.
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-13 10:37 AM
Interesting, though it seems odd that they are all black - is something specific to their world? Go to Comment
Eye Of Enhancing Degeneration
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 01:43 PM
Well, if you edit it again, I'll hold my vote off until then.

Currently, the english is rather bad, and I'd want to know why this particular Sphinx's death put out the gods enough for them to intercede. Go to Comment
The Leviathan Pool
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-05 11:56 AM
Well damn, this is good! Go to Comment
The Lost City of Paldor
Dungeons  (Water)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-02 10:32 AM
A neat location - I am certainly in favour.

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Simeon the Caretaker
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2009-04-12 07:44 PM
A very solid, though nasty, NPC. Perfect for what he is. Go to Comment
Condru-Hanra
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-10 02:50 PM
An amusing read and an interesting character. It brought to me visions of Heavy Metal in fact (the movie). Go to Comment
Hry'un
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-18 07:59 AM
A decent idea, and the secret would work better if the village was isolated. Go to Comment
Buzzards Bay
Locations  (City)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-28 11:14 AM
Great place - can be used in lots of ways. Nice stuff! Go to Comment
Elven Green Tea
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-09 09:44 AM
This is a great and universal idea. This could easily spawn many adventure ideas - think how many voyages pursuit of such commodities in the real world has generated.
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Cloister of the Empty Table
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-25 01:37 PM
I must echo Dozus as well. Am correcting this with a vote. Yes, very creepy and disturbing. Good stuff! Go to Comment
Wolfkin
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-10-17 07:04 PM
If you are looking for a sub which is on the other side of the spectrum - not saying that is where to go, look at the Alun or the Asrok. Mine are overkill, yours need work.

At least make it better then a scroll entry. This entry would fit in a list of '30 Really Minor Races' or a Idea seed.

My big concern is you are not taking any of the advise given already to improve your posts. Not sure why. Go to Comment
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