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Styrics
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-11 11:34 AM
Update: Submission should be your own work, not a repost/summary of others. Go to Comment
Managing [high-]level world demographics for D20
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 12:27 PM
If this could somehow be reworked to remove the very D20 oriented nature of the submisison, I think this could be useful.

Back to in-work you go.. Go to Comment
The Lash Serpent
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-23 01:34 PM
Nice treatment on a realistic 'sea monster'. As others have said, the exaggerations really help sell it. Go to Comment
Condori Dragonlings
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-16 10:32 AM
Good creature, but the summary could use a spellcheck. Go to Comment
The Merchant's Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 04:02 PM
Another nice Monkey's paw item. Good job! Go to Comment
The Jongleurs Sanguine
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2009-08-14 07:10 AM
Pretty cool! An excellent option for your typical assassins guild. Can't improve on whats been said already, though a plot idea or two would be great. Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-24 10:47 AM
A great organization that really could be used pretty much anywhere.
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Samahen Armor
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-09 07:16 PM
Quite unique - I like it! Go to Comment
The Way of Fang and Claw
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-27 02:10 PM
Interesting. Go to Comment
Theater of Confused Arts
Locations  (Establishment)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-23 02:34 PM
I like the idea to a point - the use of a fixed point to contact customers will only last so long as no concerted intelligent effort is made to ferret them out. Just Cause is a fairly recent control over law enforcement. Go to Comment
Lord Aberdovy
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2017-03-29 11:14 AM
Now this is the way to make Antipaladins!

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Orick
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-05 03:47 PM
An interesting minor race. I found the text a little unclear but rereading helped. Go to Comment
Sandkoi
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-11 12:14 PM
This sounds like a cross between a frog, an alligator and a platypus.
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Falani Tersk
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-23 01:40 PM
A good solid lifeform to add depth to any campaign. Good job! Go to Comment
Buck-Ogre Rum
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2008-03-04 02:33 PM
Good in a twisted way... :) Go to Comment
The Puchinegs
NPCs  (Extras)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-30 07:58 PM
These folks are awesome Muro! Would be nice to know what there secret is, but I'll live.

Can be used to fill the same role as gypsies. I like this one! Go to Comment
Four Maxims for World Building
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2009-04-06 11:37 AM
A good one I have somehow overlooked. Nice job B9anders and thank you 77IM for bumping this, as well as visiting Strolens! Go to Comment
Falhathian Minotaurs
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-12 11:30 AM
Ugh! But great job!

(Oops - wrong sub. Great Job but no Ugh! ) Go to Comment
Surtur
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2016-10-28 11:33 AM
Good cultural details, but the word Giant could have been left out - very little seems specific to them being giants. It could very well be a human tribe.
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Aegir
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-04 02:26 PM
This are giant, peaceable Vikings. I like Muro's suggestion of how inspiring a giant sized warship would be.
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