It has the 'bones' to be something great - but needs both flesh and correction of the spelling mistakes. Why not correct them? 5 minutes of work would have prevented many bad comments? If you have problems with the built in spellcheck, use a word processor and then cut and paste!
I may also post occasionally with a spelling error or two, but will correct them as soon as I notice or others point them out.
With added flesh and corrections of spelling and grammar, I'd happily give it a 4, but as it stands "it has promise" and so a 2.5. Go to Comment
This submission contradicts the generally accepted definition of Alchemy and substitutes chemistry in its place. Alchemy is magic.
My main problem here is it is presented as fact without the implications that this is opinion, how it is in a limited world or game system. In the real world its considered magic, in some game systems, yes can you can put a spell in a bottle and call it alchemy. It seems more of an effort to put bounds on alchemy rather than expand it.
These goatlike animals, who have shaggy coats and layers of scales, are good retainers of water. They are close relatives of Suppoki. Their meat is considered a delicacy in many countries.
No desert tribesman leaves his settlement without a Rakda.