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Company of the Broken Oath
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 03:32 PM
These folks could be used in a lot of places, and it strongly reminds me of the men sent to the Wall in the Game of Thrones.

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Melissa O'Neil
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-07-27 11:32 AM
Nicely described and the archtype is usable in many genres. Go to Comment
The Tome of Life
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 09:38 PM
This is a really well done submission. The blanking of the book cuts off some drama though. Go to Comment
Houtsunomuh
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-10 11:09 AM
Wonderful tone. I like the names myself. Very useful as a myth.

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Centaur
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-31 08:13 PM
These are pretty cool - a force of these would make mortals tremble! Go to Comment
Sea of Sand
Locations  (Area)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-28 02:36 PM
Simple and evocative, the sea of sand being somewhat animate is a neat detail.

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Memoirs of the Twin Rose Wars
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-04 03:19 PM
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Rampant Lions Company
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-21 11:12 AM
Obviously they would need to be selective about their contracts, as it seems they could not sustain much loss without losing their distinctive nature.

A good unit.




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Oraburg
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-17 11:37 AM
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Calcobrinan Cyclopes
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Natural)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-06 07:45 PM
Have to agree with Ancient Gamer on this one. Go to Comment
The Arcane Chambers
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2015-04-01 07:56 PM
Great stuff here. If I had more energy I'd fix the odd characters for you.

Lots of ideas and details. Awesome.
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The Citadel of Xolthog
Plots  (Duty)   (Mini-Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2008-10-17 10:17 AM
Cool - a little reorganization might help it, but quite cool. Need to explore the rest of the scenerios. Go to Comment
The Prophecies of Redemption
Plots  (Crisis)   (Mini-Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-25 01:48 PM
This is another incredible plot - brought forth to me by the Random sub.

Great job!

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The Prophecies of Redemption
Plots  (Crisis)   (Mini-Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-05 08:06 AM
Hey! Can vote now! Go to Comment
Crystal Hornets
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-14 08:50 AM
I like this a lot! I was thinking about something similar. Go to Comment
Equus Vigilia
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-23 01:27 PM
I do like this take on the Nightmare, I happen to like greek mythos monsters and this is an excellent treatment of the creature.

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The Wizard's Cache
Locations  (Fortification)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-11 10:47 AM
A key location in a campaign if I ever saw one. Nicely done!

I'd like to see some specific NPCs - either short and included in the sub, or new ones linked, would help flesh it out more. Go to Comment
Morose Shard
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2015-04-21 03:21 PM
An interesting item - very specialized. The sequence of events in the history is somewhat confusing. Did he have the device twice? Go to Comment
The Angaoth
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2016-02-08 11:36 AM
This is good - they are perhaps a bit too ornately awful, but it works.

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Beltane's Portal
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-29 10:50 AM
I like the idea of this item pulling random crap in large amounts and having skill determine how well the item matches the desire of the user. The more precise the request, the longer it takes.

I would also have it be a weak point in reality, so that things that should not be would be more likely to arrive in its presence, so while it is a useful tool, it is always dangerous.

One could even have it function as a Wand of Wonder or equivalent random magic device when used by the unskilled.


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