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Short overview of the Effin (Red Elves)
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 08:16 PM
I can help thinking - 'Those Effin' bastards...' :) Go to Comment
World Building 102: Environment building the MoonHunter way
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 08:27 PM
Very , very good.

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Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-05-16 05:45 PM
Ah yes, Strolen is helping arm the Barbarian Horde! Go to Comment
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-14 05:17 PM
A facinating spirit, containing the Communist ideal. Go to Comment
Ring of Stonekin
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-10 03:08 PM
Can't add to what has already been said, but I like this item(s) :). Go to Comment
Mona Island
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-04 09:55 AM
Guess the Dragon got him.
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The Diamond Desert
Locations  (Area)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-14 11:19 AM
This is an interesting locale with lots of ideas.

On presentation - there are quite a number of typos - prarie, interpitation, etc, and there is a lack of spaces after punctuation such as commas and periods. There is debate about whether you should have one space or two, but you need at least one :)

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Locations  (City)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-06 01:53 PM
An interesting idea, but I can't help but think this needs higher then average agricultural technology then the typical peasant farm of the middle ages. The government who set this up must have been quite organized and wealthy! Go to Comment
Noam Splinter
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2012-09-14 10:56 AM
A great NPC with great ideas in tow.

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The Great Market of Ushart
Locations  (Establishment)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-22 10:24 AM
Wow. Glad I'm not a mer-folk!

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Maganti Blades
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-23 05:22 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Elemental Fused Weapons
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 06:39 PM
Moving back to in work. Good advice has been given - please consider it. Go to Comment
Delgora Maldine
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-02 05:41 PM
Agree with CP on this one. There have been many worse.... Go to Comment
Delgora Maldine
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2009-06-08 06:42 PM
Take the advice given please and consider reworking it.

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The Staff of Silence
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-11 10:58 AM
A neat item - good backstory as said. Couple of things stuck out for me:

"Wizard named Felonious, who had been sentenced to a long prison term" Felonious?

Inconsistent/non-existing spaces after periods.

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New Hope
Locations  (City)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-06 10:35 AM
Well, I would think that if fracking is able to create earthquakes, a hurricane with the huge movement of water, and subsequent adjustment of load could have an impact.

If the city had been built below sea-level - an insane idea on an island - then a hurricane could easily, and permanently flood it, for the water would have no place to go. Now, if the ground beneath the city was riddled with mines, its possible the flooding could add enough weight to collapse the mines and drop the city deeper.

Amethyst occurs in rocks with volcanic or igneous origin, so the ground beneath the city would be quite strong unless it was heavily mined, contained extensive open spaces (empty magma chambers) or both. Perhaps the island itself is an extinct volcano. Go to Comment
New Hope
Locations  (City)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-06 10:35 AM
An interesting location.. Go to Comment
Miracle Forest
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:51 PM
These are good, though seem a bit too powerful to be a mortal creation. Go to Comment
Queen Emily Coloman
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-29 07:30 AM
This is a really good sub of yours that should see the light!

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Barrenfield Acorns
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 08:57 PM
Perhaps it is nothing to do with roots. Real oaks count on squirrels to spread their acorns, so at first the squirrels happly spread the acorns. However, since they are not nutritious they eventually all starve. Once there are no squirrels nearby, the spreading stops unless happenstance - water, humans, spreads one to where squirrels can again carry out their duty:) Go to Comment
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