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Jorlek the Undying
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-13 06:51 PM
Very nicely done! Go to Comment
True Trolls - A New Take On Trolls
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-19 01:15 PM
I like this discussion and the back and forth discussion of the trolls. The fae nature of Trolls is something I'd adopt as well. The rubbery regenerator of AD&D is so much more shallow then these folks.
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Newtons Magic
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2006-07-12 11:45 AM
And what price is paid for casting the Detect Magic?

Perhaps you should apply the uncertainty theorm as well - casting a divination spell will always have an impact of some sort on the target. Go to Comment
Making a Magic System - a psuedo FAQ
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-08 01:04 PM
A good solid resource. Might want choose one spelling of magic :)
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Sword-Draw magics
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-10 08:00 AM
Too cool folks - this is a hidden gem here!
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White P'nash Berries
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-28 02:13 PM
Okay, I'd echo Zylithan, but with more force. There is so little different between the white and red that a second post really is not warranted. Go to Comment
Red P'nash Berries
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-28 02:10 PM
Hmm, this one at least feels as if a middle portion has been gutted out from it.

Perhaps transplanting some of the answers provided in the comments might help this post out a bit. Go to Comment
Two Twines - The Elven Embassy
Locations  (Establishment)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-10 08:55 AM
I like this place a lot - and if you have difficulty integrating elves this odd, than simply add them as a different type of elf different from your traditional ones.

I expect these elves would view Tolkienesque elves as no better than half-elves if elves at all.

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Harland
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-28 12:44 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Coastside Park
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-07 02:27 PM
I find Cheka's comment here appropriate - it seems a bit too modern and cosmopolitan for most worlds I've had access to. It does conjure up the Disney feel somewhat. Go to Comment
The Plaza of Tarnished Entertainments
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-05-08 08:12 AM
I think the setting-specific parts really can be glossed over - the basic idea is tops and well presented! Go to Comment
River Side
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2009-07-09 01:01 PM
A useful detail to be added to an adventure - just so happens that something important is in this floodplain, and of course, a flood is coming or in progress when the PCs need to be there.

An update would be nice of course, but it is still a good detail one can use.
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A'Cotery
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-09-22 03:47 PM
In a high magic world, like the Harry Potter universe, this would fit very well. It would be a fine neighbor for Diagon ally. Go to Comment
Quagmire Quarters
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-30 01:17 PM
You have very many of these Moon, it is true. And too many are unvoted.

This location is evocative and would be a good place to stage a wierd, slow 'chase' scene slogging through the muck...

"Watch out - He's close - He'll be in melee range in 5 minutes!" Go to Comment
Embassy Quarter
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-23 08:19 AM
This is a neat idea - taking the current ideas of an embassy and stretching them. Great places for potential conflict! Go to Comment
Ko-Ho baccie
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-13 10:03 AM
Some interesting detail to this wacky tabaky. :)

Hmmmmm. Go to Comment
Norbert the Creepy
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-19 11:01 AM
Dokoren - The People of Legacy - A new take on Dwarves
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-02 02:31 PM
Here's a gem buried in the underworld. One whole vote? Travesty! Go to Comment
The Orcen: A New Take on Orcs and Barbarians and Horsemen
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-05 01:56 PM
Yes, and we can add the Wildlings from Game of Thrones to this list. Go to Comment
The Duerga - A New Look At Dwarves
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-10 07:31 AM
A very good and complete submission, especially with the scroll entries. Another buried treasure brought to light! Go to Comment
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