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Torch Spider
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-06 11:31 AM
I agree on the size with Dragon Lord. This is Fantasy and they could be the size of a cow and I would not see a problem with that :) Would'nt want to meet one though.

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The Palace of Profits
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-22 03:02 PM
Gold I tell you! This one is Gold!

Seriously, this is excellent, and could fit in the Game of Thrones universe without too much work.

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The Sisterhood of Aruvielle
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-17 11:49 AM
I would have liked to have seen the provided feedback incorporated in this submission - there are some good building blocks here.

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The Church of the Merciful and Glorious Ion
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-17 10:30 AM
The other comments really say what is needed here. Right now they feel like cardboard cutout villains to fill the 'burn the witch'. There is good drama potential with how they deal with heretic priests and the like.
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Glaive of Balundir
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-02 10:03 AM
Well, thats about as uber as they get. Its like stuffing Sauron into the one ring :)
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Cestus Etherium
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-18 11:29 AM
A nice, practical item - I really like it!

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Knight Templar of Alaithor
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-14 12:50 PM
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Illyana's Palace
Dungeons  (Tundra/ Arctic)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-06 03:02 PM
Hmm, this _is_ very good. A lovely dungeon that makes more sense than most.
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The Stories of Sama
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-18 11:55 AM
Excellent! Great mythic material!
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Tales of the Divine Brethren
Plots  (Mystical)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-11 12:34 PM
No votes at all? How complete is this Muro?

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Slurran
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-15 12:02 PM
Definately an interesting critter - Good Job! Go to Comment
Coloman's Eye
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-17 08:52 AM
This is quite a good item. Moons comments about the effects on the character is a good one - being in literal Hell should leave a mark.

I would at least have the user now have infernal _attention_. It is not often that a soul gets to leave that place. I'm reminded of an old Dragon magazine comic that showed a character who managed to escape hell one time being waited for by a 'welcoming' committee after his final passing..

"Welcome back!"




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The Littered Halls
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-23 02:57 PM
I like this idea, especially when one tries to take a realistic approach to dungeons and the like. Unless something is absolutely secret, or actively defended, it will eventually be looted.

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Sekkitan blood diamonds
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-18 12:17 PM
This is excellent!

One pedantic note:

"..Ancestors of the Sekkitans..." - probably Decendants might be better?
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Caern of the Steam Bringers
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2016-02-08 11:10 AM
This is neat. A great start to an adventure! Go to Comment
Dragon Crossbow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-21 11:30 AM
Now, you just need to get one of these into something that *can* draw back at 640 lb bow.... Go to Comment
The Miscreant Labyrinth
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2015-08-07 11:52 AM
Excellent! A dark fairy tale for sure. Go to Comment
Agenhin Manor
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-07-13 11:50 AM
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Quatrebras Harness
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-03 01:35 PM
A good item with lots of potential. I would allow for more powerful variants to require less dexterity from their wearer, perhaps at the cost of them doing undesirable things from time to time. Good for powering up a villain.

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Zehin
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-26 12:57 PM
This is a great place! Could be used just about anywhere. Very interesting and useful! Go to Comment
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Tambourine

       By: Yokima.van.zephrill

Tämbourine is firmly placed on my back ,to unsheathe this sword I simply have to say "re clouse" meaning come to me or i can just reach over and unsheathe it the old fashioned way. This sword was created to my liking tambourine is made of raw-like metals I found in different regions as I begun to forge the metals together, I’ve noticed that the raw metal materials were different pieces to a wide variety of swords that were used the past and present, being so most blades have a sheer grey texture Tambourine’s blade became black as the depths of the oceans. The blade expands to 6” which weighs 426lbs the sapphire jewel placed on the tip of hilt (upper middle center of the base) it emits a aura texture of purple which weighs 24lbs the jewel is un-breakable it negates magic for tambourine has a mind of its own only belonging to me it finds a worthy opponents who doesn’t use magic or any type of power to their liking which I can agree with(who would want an opponent that abuses their powers to kill for no reason or to avoid dying by honor tambourine fights with honor and accepts its glory or defeat) I’ve named the sapphire Sophia because not only that its rare and radiant it resembles my burning passion for my love Sophia. I made the hilt to be a length of 15 inches its frame is created with fine katchin (very thick and heavy metal) it alone weighs 50 pounds its texture is black like mixture of, I made it to be a cruciform hilt so it has room for two hands. I I made the blades hilt aprox. 2”, the blade is double-edged but the left side of the swords frame can block and or negate ones attack if needed, it weights 500lbs making it nearly unmovable. To go up against this sword is to quickly find your own death. Tambourine is a twin sword to Terra.

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