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Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-19 12:13 PM
Not a bad critter, but I have a problem with natural creatures which specialize in human prey.
A human population providing enough food for a bunch of squirrels to evolve eating them is not very likely - the group would either move away or attempt to exterminate the squirrels. Either would not provide a very stable diet. A magical creation or unique mutation I could believe. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-03-28 10:14 AM
A nice fish. Needs more detail though. Go to Comment
Blood Spiders
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-19 07:58 PM
A good elaboration of the giant spider with details to work off of. Go to Comment
Marongghovec aka Ale-Ox
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 09:44 PM
Made me laugh. I love the image this conjures. Good stuff. Go to Comment
Maternity Blossom
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-04 08:54 PM
Quite strange. Interesting, and I'm glad it does not really exist :) Go to Comment
Glow Leach
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-23 06:42 PM
I think glowing would be a problem since it would be much easier to detect and remove them.

This one needs a lot of work! Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2014-02-05 08:45 AM
This is an odd one. The Wumpus seems to have a fair amount of folklore attached to it.

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Teleportation and Translocation
Systems  (Transportation)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-26 07:11 PM
Interesting sub, and did you ever help Maestro with his translocation? I'm very curious! Go to Comment
Of Spirits
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-07 01:48 PM
A great treatment of spirits. I really like this! Go to Comment
Of Saints
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-19 07:08 PM
Going to have to add to this one! Now on to-do list. Go to Comment
Of Saints
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 08:08 AM
Bah. Still on the to-do 6 years later... Go to Comment
Necromancy: The Three Paths of Undeath
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-11 10:09 PM
Yuck :)

Definately evil. Well done! Go to Comment
Of Dreams
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
valadaar's comment on 2009-09-06 06:44 AM
This is very good - though it feels more like a start of immense potential!

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Of Demons
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-18 10:53 AM
This is an excellent submission - I was thinking of something along these lines.

I think I will be adding to this one soon. Go to Comment
The Prophecies of Hope
Plots  (Travel)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-30 06:15 PM

How did the campaign pan out in practice? Go to Comment
Scroll Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-30 07:05 PM
Not bad but needs work. How does it attack? From the statement "each with a varying set of scrolls it has absorbed and can use" I assume it casts the spells on the scrolls that it is made of, but generally scrolls are one-shot items, so as it casts spells, it is going to weaken itself.

As others have said - flesh it out, and I think the votes will go up. Go to Comment
Aoktholian Swarm
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-17 08:52 PM
Muro's comment captures this perfectly for me. See Bioshock infinite for other psychotic crows...
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The Murdered Young
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-09 12:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Fresh Water Giving Pearl
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-13 10:46 AM
Simple. Logical. Useful. Excellent. Go to Comment
Ochre Door
Dungeons  (Any)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-15 11:02 AM
This resonates with me, with my recent video-gamy sub. This is about as blunt an adventure hook as you can get, though there are times when such is both useful and desirable.

This allows linkage of any idea you see fit to use.
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