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James Lorus
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-13 08:03 PM
Pretty well done, but it tapers off at the end. Go to Comment
Kastraad and New Pastello
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-14 08:35 AM
I agree with Muro on this one. Good details, but the plethora of parentheses is somewhat distracting. Go to Comment
Gesthari
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 10:00 PM
I love these though I would turn down the lethality somewhat. The visual is great! Go to Comment
The Blib
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-01 11:37 AM
Well, these are pretty darn cute. Strikes me as something I would find in various Anime series. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-04 06:30 PM
A good adaptation of the character. I like!

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Coivn
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2015-10-05 03:31 PM
One of those things that is best left a legend or an exaggeration. Well described, but unless one is playing out ragnarock, it seems it is likely to remain in the maelstrom.

Perhaps someone could find a way to connect with the spear though the ether, creating linkages only strong enough that the being could draw power from the spear without physically touching it. L’ruhk’s fragment would not like this and may seek 'help' using similar means to stop this leeching...
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Spectral Tablets
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-23 12:44 PM
These are neat! Simple with lots of possibilities.

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The Keepers Of Forbidden Beasts and Birds
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-14 02:58 PM
A great submission that really deserves more plot ideas then it has. I could see an entire campaign around this organization - perhaps as an employer or an enemy, or a third party in a more complex scenario.

Good stuff!
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The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2010-10-08 02:09 PM


Another gem brought up by the Random page



Nicely done Scras!


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The Children of Ma-O
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-09 09:22 PM
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Saja Jyn
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-01-08 11:56 AM
A decent ninja - I agree with Moon on this one. Go to Comment
ShadowKin
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-13 02:59 PM
Interesting folk that can be reused anywhere their magic could be explained.

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Ma-O the Water Deamon
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-19 03:25 PM
Not bad!

Could use a bit more polish, but it is interesting nonetheless. Go to Comment
The Hollow Mountain
Dungeons  (Mountains)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2015-11-06 11:00 AM
I like this - a cross between the Lonely Mountain and Everest. Perhaps one could even make it such that the mountain has gotten higher over time - much faster than normal - making its hazard much greater than when the dwarves dwelled there. Go to Comment
Elbows Murphy
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-26 10:56 PM
A good character. The secret weaponsmith is always useful. Go to Comment
Whispers Of The Thief
Items  (Jewelry)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-16 02:17 PM
I like this - it could even work as a form of one-time-pad, which is nearly unbreakable.

Another feature would be the knots and such must be unraveled to be read, making it almost impossible for the message to be intercepted, read, and then passed on. This is a big deal since not receiving the expected message, or one with signs of tampering can warn someone. Go to Comment
Vandergraff
Locations  (City)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-12 11:22 AM
This is a good solid post and well detailed! Go to Comment
Weather Related PlotSeeds
Plots  (Nature)   (Encounter)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-20 01:18 PM
This is a neat list that could use some more entries. On the to-do list :)
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The Purple Bowl
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-27 09:56 AM
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Solomontic Rug
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-04-20 01:45 PM
I think this is an excellent idea, though it depends upon your magic being loose enough to accept this. Some fictional (aren't they all) examples of circle use are so exacting as having a hair drop across a line is sufficient to blow the protection. With such standards, a carpet would be play Russian roulette with 5 rounds loaded.

For D&D though, or lower-stakes magic, I see this as perfectly fitting.
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