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The Church of the Merciful and Glorious Ion
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-17 10:30 AM
The other comments really say what is needed here. Right now they feel like cardboard cutout villains to fill the 'burn the witch'. There is good drama potential with how they deal with heretic priests and the like.
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Glaive of Balundir
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-02 10:03 AM
Well, thats about as uber as they get. Its like stuffing Sauron into the one ring :)
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Cestus Etherium
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-18 11:29 AM
A nice, practical item - I really like it!

Useful for putting the hurt on those unbelievers (as Cheka said!) Go to Comment
Knight Templar of Alaithor
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-14 12:50 PM
Not bad! Go to Comment
Illyana's Palace
Dungeons  (Tundra/ Arctic)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-06 03:02 PM
Hmm, this _is_ very good. A lovely dungeon that makes more sense than most.
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The Stories of Sama
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-18 11:55 AM
Excellent! Great mythic material!
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Tales of the Divine Brethren
Plots  (Mystical)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-11 12:34 PM
No votes at all? How complete is this Muro?

Wait until you're done? Go to Comment
Slurran
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-15 12:02 PM
Definately an interesting critter - Good Job! Go to Comment
Coloman's Eye
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-17 08:52 AM
This is quite a good item. Moons comments about the effects on the character is a good one - being in literal Hell should leave a mark.

I would at least have the user now have infernal _attention_. It is not often that a soul gets to leave that place. I'm reminded of an old Dragon magazine comic that showed a character who managed to escape hell one time being waited for by a 'welcoming' committee after his final passing..

"Welcome back!"




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The Littered Halls
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-23 02:57 PM
I like this idea, especially when one tries to take a realistic approach to dungeons and the like. Unless something is absolutely secret, or actively defended, it will eventually be looted.

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Sekkitan blood diamonds
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-18 12:17 PM
This is excellent!

One pedantic note:

"..Ancestors of the Sekkitans..." - probably Decendants might be better?
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Caern of the Steam Bringers
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2016-02-08 11:10 AM
This is neat. A great start to an adventure! Go to Comment
Dragon Crossbow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-21 11:30 AM
Now, you just need to get one of these into something that *can* draw back at 640 lb bow.... Go to Comment
The Miscreant Labyrinth
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2015-08-07 11:52 AM
Excellent! A dark fairy tale for sure. Go to Comment
Agenhin Manor
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-07-13 11:50 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Quatrebras Harness
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-03 01:35 PM
A good item with lots of potential. I would allow for more powerful variants to require less dexterity from their wearer, perhaps at the cost of them doing undesirable things from time to time. Good for powering up a villain.

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Zehin
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-26 12:57 PM
This is a great place! Could be used just about anywhere. Very interesting and useful! Go to Comment
Tribe of the Beaver
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-16 02:30 PM
Great variant dwarves! Love em!
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Malicious Archeology
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Rooms/ Halls)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-08 12:09 PM
Wow, shields would be a big pain to use in 2-D - you would have to attack either over or under the shield, and you could only swing up, down or thrust even without a shield.

Quite the difference! Go to Comment
Barrows of The First Men
Dungeons  (Any)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-02 03:22 PM
This one has a lot of potential! Go to Comment
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