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Bolt of Twilight
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-30 11:00 AM
Cool item - excellent backstory.

The fact that it is a unique item and is currently in a rather unobtainable situation mitigates it's rather powerful effect.

Sending the PC's on a quest to regain the 'holy relic' from the dragon would be a good lesson for the PC's to do their research first... Go to Comment
Dungeons  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Ecology)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-29 11:36 AM
In a word, wow! When my campaign gets going again from the summer hiatus I'll have to put this in my players' path :) (Evil GM grin...)

This is both a very specific and detailed environment, with the ability to be seamlessly dropped into virtually any campain world!

Now, the only thing is that it reminds me a little of the Dreams of Lorac from the early Dragonlance novels, but not enough for me to change my vote. 5/5 Go to Comment
Blossom of Rage
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-29 11:12 AM
Wow, you would have to be _really_ desperate to use this one.

Seriously though, if the forest people are that desperate, then the success rate of this armour would need to be high to be worth it - if it killed/incapacitated more warriours then could use it, then this seems worse then simply fighting and dying gloriously.

Perhaps there are other herb or secret potion which would reduce/eliminate the pain and madness involved and so only outsiders who tried to use it would encounter the full detrimental effects of the armour. Personally, I'd take my chances using a fire-harded spear against metal equipped enemies then go through this :) Go to Comment
Ssao E'hzeir, Alytarch of Yyiszo
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-29 11:25 AM
I think this is an excellent, well described NPC, but not the most exciting :)
As a brave old soldier, it may be his destiny to be brave once more before his days end.

I agree with Scrasamax - if you don't like the name, change it. Having it affect your vote in my mind is a little petty - so long as you don't use something like Jack the samurai, then it really should be about the quality of the submission. Go to Comment
Anodyne Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-13 10:53 AM
Interesting, and really only good for ambushes. Causing your opponent to flinch is pretty important in combat, since they might not be able counter as effectively.

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The Demon's Herd
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-27 07:53 PM
Well, at least it _is_beef :) Go to Comment
The Demon's Herd
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-27 07:56 PM
I think that eating these should have more dangerous effects, though. I would consider all who ate of them to be somewhat tainted in some manner. Perhaps they are more suseptable to dark infuences, etc.

In any case, this is cool submission. Kudos! Go to Comment
Tryvaard's Longspear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-27 07:39 PM
Not really unstoppable - it can be parried if someone knows it is coming. In truth it is not much more powerful then a shortbow. It's chief advantage is suprise, as well as the more precise control of a melee weapon. Go to Comment
Tryvaard's Longspear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-27 09:08 PM
The spirits of the mountain collecting their payment :) Go to Comment
Tryvaard's Longspear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-28 07:20 AM
Updated: Did not intend to make it an _always hit_ attack :) only that such an attack is possible. Again, it counts on suprise and disbelief for it's power. Go to Comment
30 Temple Priests
NPCs  (Extras)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-26 07:51 PM
This is a good '30 xxxx' submisson - the detail one each is good enough to capture them and make this useful. Go to Comment
Spirit Plate
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-26 07:54 PM
Cool item. I especially like the black dish, though I like the idea of the Fire Maidens...:) Go to Comment
Gloves of Emotion
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-26 07:49 PM
Hmm, these would be a psycopath's dream item - to be able to show his victem his thoughts, and to let know their fear. Even Demons would appreciate this one :) Go to Comment
The MuroMax Codex
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-28 08:28 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Saint Oblat the Maimed
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-20 10:54 PM
A good one, and the plot hooks are excellent. Go to Comment
30 Criminals
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-17 12:15 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The K'tonian Hegemony
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-19 02:52 PM
Nicely done! I like it ! Go to Comment
30 Flesh Peddlers
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
valadaar's comment on 2006-08-27 11:37 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
LLorryn of The Singing Steel
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-28 01:23 PM
30 Mages
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-03 12:21 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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       By: Umberle

All spell casters gain their abilities through a form of demon possession. So in order to gain magical abilites, PCs must track down and trap demons. Of course there are some pretty powerful demons, if the demon is stronger than the PC, the PC could find themselves subjugated to the Demon's will.

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