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Ice Caves
Dungeons  (Tundra/ Arctic)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-08 09:37 AM
A good reminder that not all dungeons need to be underground.

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Ouranga, the Tempest-Lord
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-21 11:27 AM
Game of thrones indeed :) He reminds me of the Lannister patriarch Tywin, though even more martial. Obviously his career path has been quite different.

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The Kemlar Healing Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-21 09:23 AM
I personally would make the downsides more random and slower, to give time to deal with it, and to produce more characters who have been impacted by it.

At the risk of being overly 'scientific' - something I dislike when combined with fantasy, I could easily see an aggressive healing potion being capable of inducing quite virulent cancers.



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The Chalice Bearers
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-10 07:49 AM
A great piece of local culture to add depth. I can feel a few ideas forming..
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Changing faces
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-11 08:06 AM
As for precedence - Look no further than Dr. Jekyle and Mr. Hyde. The potion of monsterfacation is not new.

This is a decent plot for a less serious game where some of its 'plot holes' are not too big a deal.

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Rod of Age Switching.
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-26 07:14 PM
A decent item - I'd add a multiple-year 'charge' time to it which would serve to add some complexity. Perhaps it is hidden somewhere 'safe' to charge and the PCs are contacted to retrieve it.

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The Azure Comet Mercenary Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 09:23 PM
I agree also with Scras. That and all of the paragraphs. It almost seemed to be an attempt to be silly.




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Zayarahausc, the Viles of Salt
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-08-14 01:42 PM
I love the style and visuals that go into Captain Penguin's subs. D&D has salt paramentals. These are a wonderful replacement and nicely alien.
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Seyeverasin, the Waning-Moon Musicians
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-20 10:02 PM
I have not yet found a boring submission from Captain Penguin. This one is sutiably odd and mythic. Go to Comment
Lavas, the Raging Ones
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 11:09 PM
I love the descriptions - stolen beauty of harlots. Great stuff :) Go to Comment
Lidda the Show-Stopper!
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-13 08:19 PM
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The Old World
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-11 11:14 AM
This is awesome - I have a thing for high-magic campaigns and this is an excellent example of one. Go to Comment
What is a homebrew?
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 10:18 PM
A rant perhaps, but it is a gaming article, and I have seen published articles which have written more and said far less. Go to Comment
Songs Of Fantasy!
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 03:33 PM
How the heck did I miss voting on this one? It is awesome and going on my to add to list... Go to Comment
James Lorus
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-13 08:03 PM
Pretty well done, but it tapers off at the end. Go to Comment
Kastraad and New Pastello
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-14 08:35 AM
I agree with Muro on this one. Good details, but the plethora of parentheses is somewhat distracting. Go to Comment
Gesthari
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 10:00 PM
I love these though I would turn down the lethality somewhat. The visual is great! Go to Comment
The Blib
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-01 11:37 AM
Well, these are pretty darn cute. Strikes me as something I would find in various Anime series. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-04 06:30 PM
A good adaptation of the character. I like!

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Coivn
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2015-10-05 03:31 PM
One of those things that is best left a legend or an exaggeration. Well described, but unless one is playing out ragnarock, it seems it is likely to remain in the maelstrom.

Perhaps someone could find a way to connect with the spear though the ether, creating linkages only strong enough that the being could draw power from the spear without physically touching it. L’ruhk’s fragment would not like this and may seek 'help' using similar means to stop this leeching...
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