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Haio-Mano (Shark tooth weapons)
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-27 09:22 AM
After reviewing the Code of Conduct, I've removed a post which was more emotional then this one

Given the amount of work that goes into a lot of individual submissions, this one seems short.

Things to add? Plot ideas for example, an NPC noteworthy for using the weapon, whatever.

What constitutes a 2.5 vote or 3.0 vote, or whatever is subjective to the voter. Based on feedback I've seen on other posts, and my own, I have an idea as to what I consider to be in the different ranges. I have seen posts with multiple scroll entries which were as complete and longer that have not recieved high marks. I think that this weapon description is more appropriate as a scroll entry for Ankorillian weaponry then as a complete sub. Go to Comment
Haio-Mano (Shark tooth weapons)
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-27 09:32 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cruaunte Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-16 09:30 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Powi fighting net
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-27 02:10 PM
"Ooooh! Sticky-net likey you!" Go to Comment
Antiago spear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-05 10:07 AM
Excellent item! Kudos! Go to Comment
Khartand
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-03 08:03 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Helm of Shump Thokk
Items  (Armor)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-28 08:50 AM
A different item, a nice, non-overpowered sentient item that could easily be linked into other things.

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The Pit
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-15 09:51 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Stones District
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 09:42 AM
I like the idea of the threat being purely psychological, perhaps tied to a sort of mass hysteria. No actual undead walk here, except on very rate occasions, so it is not an undead game preserve.

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Merhood
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-17 05:09 AM
A good believable image. Concise but well described. Go to Comment
The Foolish Mage and Drunked Wizard Tavern
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-28 05:22 AM
A great location with rich description, many npcs and plot ideas. Nicely done - this is perfect. Go to Comment
Dogpick
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-08 11:52 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tyrnithi Arrows
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-06-19 06:43 PM
Nicely detailed and concise. Go to Comment
Ghollish Wide-axe
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 08:03 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Dame Ellenius's Park
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-14 01:57 PM
An interesting location - the old Widow's Garden.
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Tannhauser Street
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2007-11-27 02:06 PM
An interesting local that begs to be expanded upon! Go to Comment
Fog of Mills Park
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-10 11:43 AM
This feels like suburbia in many places. We've got places like this where I live. Most annoying - I'm usually trying to find places at night, when its foggy, and I'm late...


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Gardens of Ardales
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-05 07:56 AM
I second Scras. Would love to have seen more.

Those laws could also push folks to build _down_ into the ground, potentially creating opportunities for dungeons.
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The Grey Talon Assassins
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2008-04-25 10:17 AM
Why can't they be found?

This is missing far too much detail.

What strategies do they use to avoid detection? How does one contact them? What role does the illithid play? GMs are supposed to be able to use this, so you need to provide the background details, not just what PCs might know.

Format wise, there are inconsistent capitalizations and spelling errors.

Using demons and summoned monsters to perform assassinations is a bit interesting, especially if the victims are PC's. Go to Comment
The Azure Swords
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2012-12-04 12:10 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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