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Valdus Darkmour
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Political)
valadaar's comment on 2015-10-28 12:59 PM
This is a great demon with lots of potential. He may have even sired a few half-demons who might also be interested in finding him..
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Cloud Wall
Locations  (Fortification)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-10-16 03:30 PM
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Torch Spider
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-06 11:31 AM
I agree on the size with Dragon Lord. This is Fantasy and they could be the size of a cow and I would not see a problem with that :) Would'nt want to meet one though.

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The Palace of Profits
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-06-22 03:02 PM
Gold I tell you! This one is Gold!

Seriously, this is excellent, and could fit in the Game of Thrones universe without too much work.

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The Sisterhood of Aruvielle
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-17 11:49 AM
I would have liked to have seen the provided feedback incorporated in this submission - there are some good building blocks here.

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The Church of the Merciful and Glorious Ion
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-17 10:30 AM
The other comments really say what is needed here. Right now they feel like cardboard cutout villains to fill the 'burn the witch'. There is good drama potential with how they deal with heretic priests and the like.
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Glaive of Balundir
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-06-02 10:03 AM
Well, thats about as uber as they get. Its like stuffing Sauron into the one ring :)
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Cestus Etherium
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-18 11:29 AM
A nice, practical item - I really like it!

Useful for putting the hurt on those unbelievers (as Cheka said!) Go to Comment
Knight Templar of Alaithor
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-14 12:50 PM
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Illyana's Palace
Dungeons  (Tundra/ Arctic)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-06 03:02 PM
Hmm, this _is_ very good. A lovely dungeon that makes more sense than most.
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The Stories of Sama
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2016-03-18 11:55 AM
Excellent! Great mythic material!
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Tales of the Divine Brethren
Plots  (Mystical)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-11 12:34 PM
No votes at all? How complete is this Muro?

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Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-15 12:02 PM
Definately an interesting critter - Good Job! Go to Comment
Coloman's Eye
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-17 08:52 AM
This is quite a good item. Moons comments about the effects on the character is a good one - being in literal Hell should leave a mark.

I would at least have the user now have infernal _attention_. It is not often that a soul gets to leave that place. I'm reminded of an old Dragon magazine comic that showed a character who managed to escape hell one time being waited for by a 'welcoming' committee after his final passing..

"Welcome back!"

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The Littered Halls
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-23 02:57 PM
I like this idea, especially when one tries to take a realistic approach to dungeons and the like. Unless something is absolutely secret, or actively defended, it will eventually be looted.

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Sekkitan blood diamonds
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-18 12:17 PM
This is excellent!

One pedantic note:

"..Ancestors of the Sekkitans..." - probably Decendants might be better?
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Caern of the Steam Bringers
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2016-02-08 11:10 AM
This is neat. A great start to an adventure! Go to Comment
Dragon Crossbow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-21 11:30 AM
Now, you just need to get one of these into something that *can* draw back at 640 lb bow.... Go to Comment
The Miscreant Labyrinth
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
valadaar's comment on 2015-08-07 11:52 AM
Excellent! A dark fairy tale for sure. Go to Comment
Agenhin Manor
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2006-07-13 11:50 AM
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