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Blue Comet Mercenary Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Area)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 02:19 PM
This is a great idea - though of course it only works on worlds where mages are common enough to be used in this manner.

That said, there are a lot of those about.

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Calgrind
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-29 09:42 AM
Its well detailed and written, but the story is well travelled. The druidic influence is nice, but it really needed something to pull it away from its very strong inspiration.

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Ivory armor
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-09-20 01:39 PM
Okay, armour created from Ivory is not too far-fetched - lacquered wood and boiled leather both make reasonable armours. I could see alchemists involved in the preparation of the substance but not in the actual construction of the armour.

Apart from Moons comment on Ivory being bone (its not, similar, but different) his comments are spot on.

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Moonpool Vault
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Rooms/ Halls)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-06 08:57 AM
An ancient 100(ish) word sub. Go to Comment
Ash Children
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-02 01:36 PM
Really good! Go to Comment
Arkath the Contractor
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-23 08:00 PM
Yes, quite nice Ria! Go to Comment
Sippenhaft
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-12 07:42 PM
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Sippenhaft
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 07:49 PM
Hmm, bad 2006 Valadaar. This sub deserved more than a vote.

I like this character - she has the feel of a batman villain and I could see her play multiple roles in a campaign as others have said.

Very Good!

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The Black Legion
Plots  (Duty)   (Multi-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-07 11:34 AM
Man, there is a lot to this one :) You folks have no lives to have time to write this much! :) Go to Comment
Thoral's grim brigade
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-31 06:39 AM
This is an excellent and unique item. Great job! Go to Comment
Samuel "Shoutin' Sam" Randall
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-30 08:12 PM
Well, this fellow would make for a good violent encounter, not much redeeming to this guy. Go to Comment
Teldus, the Great Demathan Stuntsman
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-07 02:41 PM
A good NPC, made even more possible through the existence of healing magic. Could you imagine what some folks would do with that? Hell, some people do just the craziest things _without_ the benefit of magical healing...




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Band of Wash
Items  (Jewelry)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-14 07:41 PM
I think wildcorn argued his case well here, a battle fought more then 7 years ago.

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Tagma Drakontas
Society/ Organizations  (Natural)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-20 05:19 AM
More like said frog having a realtionship with us :) Go to Comment
Tagma Drakontas
Society/ Organizations  (Natural)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-16 08:14 AM
Great stuff here - both the excellent sub and some of the ideas in the comments.

Hard to believe this one is 8 years old.
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Alla`t
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-07 08:32 PM
I have to agree with Scras on this one. I don't have a feel for them other than something to have shaking a spear.

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Flesh Stalker
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-03 10:52 AM
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Company of the Broken Oath
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 02:32 PM
These folks could be used in a lot of places, and it strongly reminds me of the men sent to the Wall in the Game of Thrones.

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Melissa O'Neil
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2007-07-27 10:32 AM
Nicely described and the archtype is usable in many genres. Go to Comment
The Tome of Life
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-29 08:38 PM
This is a really well done submission. The blanking of the book cuts off some drama though. Go to Comment
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