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The Ink Drinkers
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-27 09:02 AM
Have not voted on this before. A travesty I have now corrected.

Fully deserves its golden title. Go to Comment
Keldorian Church aka Church of Creator
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-05 11:41 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Kren, the Name of a Card
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-12 10:40 AM
This is useful - I like the cards as manna batteries. Go to Comment
Kaboo, Gladdys, and their Dim-Witted Nephew
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-30 07:57 AM
This is great stuff - these rumors are amazingly well written.

Get your ass back here Muro and post stuff like this. Soo awesome! Go to Comment
Followers of Perteum
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-14 10:39 AM
A decent deity. It is missing a spark as Moon mentions. Go to Comment
Followers of Kameakias
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-06 07:05 AM
An interesting idea for a god, though a rather lot is hinted at than detailed.

What abilities do his followers gain - they are mentioned as being powerful, but no details are given.
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Clan Ironspirit
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-02 07:59 AM
These folks have a lot of campaign use - nicely done!
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Blade Hands
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-05-09 12:51 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Headband of Swift Thought
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-12-12 10:18 AM
I like this item, and not knowing anything about Talislanta (apart from No Elves, right? :)) I saw nothing game-specific about it.

Good Job! Go to Comment
The Potion of Explosive Entrails
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2014-04-11 07:53 AM
This is perfectly gobliniod in its nature - using one of the few advantages that race has.

I see no need to into its details or how it works - its a potion in a fantasy realm. Where you trying to shoehorn it into modern or sci-fie, then you need to start wiggling.

Good job!

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The Kamuinji Sabre
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-02-22 01:16 PM
A reasonable item if sparse. Muro's and Moons detailed comments are good.

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Sizzler
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-16 11:48 AM
I enjoyed this sub. It would be an interesting challenge on how to honestly work this into an adventure. Go to Comment
Clathrates
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-23 07:57 PM
A most excellent companion to the Mines. I like this magic theory and it aligns with some of my thoughts on the matter.
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Auchinduin Deep Iron Mine
Locations  (City)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-23 07:53 PM
Could have sworn I voted and commented on this awesome location. Addressed.

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Scroll Gholem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2012-06-09 08:19 PM
Perhaps they could acquire a personality drawn from the 'voices' of the books authors. If one arose from a specific persons' works, they might have a personality similar to that author and gain more then primal motivations.

I like this creature. Go to Comment
The Maidenhead Wasp
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 09:27 PM
This is a really novel critter. An unusual lifecycle to say the least :)


I don't agree with Moon on their size. I do not see any need to rationalize giant insects in a fantasy post however. Go to Comment
Bone Bow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 01:37 PM
Not bad, if a little inconsistent (The bard who made the item is forgotten, but two of his party members are known.)

As said by others (and from my own experinces), delete the stats completely and just leave the verbal descriptions of it's effects. Go to Comment
Troll Belt
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-18 02:26 PM
I like the idea of the trollgut belt, perhaps as an orcish invention. Go to Comment
Censer of Mal'Mennoth
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2007-04-27 01:27 PM
A good nasty artifact of evil. Excellent.... Go to Comment
Censer of Mal'Mennoth
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-15 08:04 AM
Time flies, but a good idea is a good idea :) Go to Comment
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